Audio Poll: Which of these lines work? (Patreon)

Hey everyone, Marie here again with another post for your ears. This audio post is a little different than the previous ones, however, because I’m more interested in knowing what you think about WHAT is being said, rather than how it’s being said. Allow me to elaborate.

Attached to this post are 11 mp3 files, each containing 3-5 takes of a line from an old version of the Blood Crown script. These lines were recorded over a year ago by the voice actress SilkyMilk for the character of Lanessa. Since this version of the script was scrapped we can let you listen to some of it without spoiling anything.

What we'd like you to tell us is which of this dialogue works. When I say "works" I mean, you either find it appealing outright, or you wouldn't find it disruptive if you heard it during a sex scene. Disruptive can mean just about anything that would take you out of the moment, be it an awkward word choice, unusual phrasing, or just a plain corny sounding line. If the line itself works, but the delivery doesn't, go ahead and mark it as OK in the poll. You can leave a comment if you want to give us some feedback or share your thoughts.

Before you do that, just an FYI about these lines and voice acting. You'll be able to get a hint of Lanessa's personality from these lines, but because we've overhauled the script quite a bit since these lines were recorded, the dialogues, Lanessa's personality, and also SilkyMilk's voice acting have all changed accordingly. So if you don't like this first little preview of Lanessa, don't fret, because she's a bit different in the final version. You'll have to wait a bit longer to see that, however. Until then, enjoy!