Derideal ep 5, page 45 (extended end) (Patreon)

UPD1- Text were fixed

I made this page as an extra bit for the story, like an epilogue page, epilogue memory...

I think it add to the emotional value of the ending, but I'm not sure if I'm going to keep it right at the end, or include it after Aden crash with the VWALLY robot and wakes up, not entirely sure yet where would it fit more.

Personally I like it being right after the previous page, as a final memory after he faints, I want to reinforce the "promise" so the unfairness of the end is a little bit more emotional.

I spent lot of time thinking the dialog and scene, it's a simple thing... but it's based of Derideal legacy episode 4, when Aden fears about his state of mind.

technically, it would also work at the end or beginning of Episode 5 "last stand"