Alice 45 (updated!) (Patreon)

Thanks to everyone who replied to my last post and gave their feedback! I don't have the time to respond to everyone individually, I'm afraid, but I really appreciate that so many people responded!

Honestly I know it's silly, but it's really thrilling to me that so many people really seem to care about this story. I know my writing isn't going to change the world, but I'm just glad that people enjoy it :)

Anyway, I'm posting an updated version, where you can see that Alice is now 420 pounds, Laurie is 430 pounds, and Jen is 433 pounds. I think that's a little more on the dot. This is the version that I'll post on Deviantart next week.

Thanks for your help!