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Tala is off! Where? Why? I don't know. Neither does Bailey. I hope the big, broad landscape composition of the bottom frames comes off okay. It should read as "a decent amount of time passing". Remember, still 'new' at comics here. I tried to do some research a bit ago about panel layouts and size/spacing.

This is a point of shift for the comic at least for a decent number of pages, and the overall focus. Fingers crossed that it's fun for everyone else as it is for me/what I have written/doodled out/in mind!

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Antoine Davis

This looks awesome so far! Also, landscape looks pretty good. Also yeah it does seem like time has passed. But yeah, can't wait to see what happens. Also, what were the two cameo wolves names?

Silvador

Poor, lonely Bailey. I wonder if she finished herself off since Tala "Evac'd" out of there. :P

Heretic Morgan

Tala goin to get "Rammed" in a dang hurry.

Deerio Jim

Hm, maybe have a page-wide thin panel of the sky in between the landscape and upper panels, to help show the passing of time? like when movies decides to pan up to the sky, then down again in another location to indicate a scene shift?

Synariel

Well, that's what i call getting off.

NitroToxico

And Tala was never seen again. The end.