Dialogue Update: Narration and Other Edits (Pages 7-12 & 28) (Patreon)

Hi hi!

Got another storyline/dialogue update for ya to feast your eyes on:

Recap: I've been reworking certain dialogue scenes/pages/parts of the story in preparation of the print version of BKI, Volume 1.

The next dialogue update/round of edits I worked on were from Chapter 1. I wanted to highlight the introduction of the "Narration" part of the story that will be on some pages going forward.

The changes I will be implementing here are as follows:

- General retouching/reworking of most dialogue bubbles & speech bubble positioning

- Added 4th wall narration text on Pages 7, 11, 12, & 28.

- Added Norman's narration bubbles on pages 8 & 9/

Lmk what you think! Have a wonderful hump day 🐪

-J

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