Dialogue Update: Chapter 2 (Pages 30-35, 38-48, 50-54, 56-57, & 59) (Patreon)

Hell-o 👹

Got another storyline/dialogue update for ya to feast your eyes on:

Recap: I've been reworking certain dialogue scenes/pages/parts of the story in preparation of the print version of BKI, Volume 1.

The next dialogue update/round of edits I worked on were from Chapter 2. This chapter definitely had a lot of work. My speech bubble skills back then were so bad 😆 There were also parts that needed some dialogue rework to fit the story better, and I wanted to highlight the "Narration" part of the story that will be on some pages going forward.

The changes I will be implementing here are as follows:

- General retouching/reworking of most dialogue & speech bubbles (wording, positioning, flow, etc.)

- Added 4th wall narration text on Pages 34, 35, 51, & 52.

Lmk what you think! Have a wonderful day/evening! 💕

-J

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