(WIP) Bite of a Predator, Chap 1/Scene 1 (Patreon)

This is the first WIP for a serial story that will eventually be published (lord willing!), with one chapter published per month, one scene (or so) per week. The final version will have differences to this, be polished etc, but for now, what do you think?
I don't want to explain it too much, but feel free to ask questions in the comments.

CW: Themes of predator/prey classism, violence, murder, castration, sex, and vore. 

This scene does not have anything extremely graphic in it, it mostly introduces Bruce, our main character.