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Author's Note: In accordance with the Kindle Unlimited release, this chapter has been removed. The post itself has been preserved for the sake of the comment section.

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Catra

Amazing chapter, looking forward to the next one! Fun fact, that's my birthday!

Anonymous

This is an absolutely amazing chapter

Nathan Linder

Elatra finally found Rob's last fuck to give

Anonymous

Hahahahaha, sensational!

Anonymous

Woah. Someone is starting is own book of grudges. It’s worrying

Anonymous

Mixed feelings about this chapter. It seems like a lynchpin chapter, Rob stepping up and making his presence undeniable. It seemed like Rob growing to become better than he was, taking on the support of Kenzotul and turning over a new leaf. But instead of a step forward to enlightenment, it seemed like a step forward to sadism with the way he laughed at the agony of others. Overall, I still love the story, but I'm uneasy about having Rob the virtuous despot. Unless I've read too much into it, maybe it's just because the chapter ended immediately after.

kamikazepotato

I will actually agree that the laughter was going too far. I'll change that bit to be less overly sadistic. It was very difficult to strike the balance I intended in these scenes, so some details might need some fine-tuning. As for your worries - just know I don't intend to write anything that would ultimately leave the readers unsatisfied or unhappy. However, certain storyline can't be resolved in just one or two chapters, which makes serial readers a bit more stressed out than people reading in a completed book format, which I understand completely.

Anonymous

Phew- I thought there was a good chance it was something that would be fine-tuned out, thanks for the response :)

Anonymous

Holy shit. That was amazing.

Jonathan Crandall

Fucking hell. That was amazing! Gave me chills

Rande Knight

Not the way I would choose, but that's ok, Rob isn't me. I might have asked if there was any harpy that wanted a combat class change and some easy levels to get them started.