C104デレステ千枝本 下書き11頁 (Pixiv Fanbox)
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いつも支援・応援有難う御座います!
今週もお疲れさまでした
今週のU149オンリー行きたかった…
計画的に原稿作業をして即売会に一般参加したいですね!
下書きは来週で終わる予定です
既に冬の頁数を超えてる上にカラーの予定なんですが終わるんだろうかこれ…
Thank you for your continued support and assistance!
Thanks again for all your hard work this week!
I wish I could have gone to U149 Only this week...
I'd like to work on the manuscript systematically and participate in the exhibition!
The draft will be finished next week!
I've already exceeded the number of pages for winter, and I'm planning to do a color version of it...
The 25-page draft is available free of charge.
▼週末あとがき
最後までご覧頂き有難う御座います
屋上のシーンは必要だったんです!
死と性行為は対比的な関係にあるので
まさか千枝ちゃんが…!?からのオナニーがエロさを引き立てる…のかもしれない
今回の同人誌描いててふと思ったんだけど千枝ママ大変そうですね
変なディスク拾ってきたり野菜を勝手に使われたり
娘を持つって大変なんだな…
オナニーシーンはちょっとやり過ぎた感があるけど
インタビューで一日4回してるドスケベ千枝ちゃんだからまぁ大丈夫か!
ももありの頁は本当は仁奈薫の予定でした
千枝が怒鳴ってしまったのをたしなめるのに桃華が一番適切かなぁと思って交代
ありすは変顔枠…のつもりだったけど出番が全然無かった
桃華はアニメだとPの事をPちゃまとは言ってなかったような気がするけどどうだったっけ…
4話を見直すと「プロデューサー」と呼び捨てでした
シリアスっぽいシーンでちゃまはなんか変な感じするけどまぁいいか!
今回の話は描いてて自分でもちょっと心が痛む…
いつも通りオリジナルPでいちゃラブしてる話の方がよかったかも
下手にアニメ版に寄せたせいでせっかく綺麗で良い話だったアニメを汚すような話になってしまった…
綺麗で可愛い幼女と汚いおじさんの対比が大好きなので
綺麗な話から汚い話に突き落としてみたら思ったよりハートにダメージを受けてしまいました
寒暖差で風邪を引かないよう気を付けてください!
今週は頭があまり回ってなくて台詞の整合性が取れなくなってそう…
良い感じの台詞が思い浮かばないのであとで修正するかも
こういうのって何日か寝かせないと直せないんですよね
執筆ペースが失速しまくりでやばい…
同じ時間作業してるハズなんですがどんどん失速していきます
一日が一瞬でおわる~辛い!
Thank you for watching until the end!
The rooftop scene was necessary!
Death and sexual intercourse have a contrasting relationship.
I didn't expect Chie-chan to...! The masturbation from the scene on the rooftop is very erotic...maybe....
As I was drawing this doujinshi, it occurred to me that Chie-mama seems to be having a hard time.
She picks up strange disks and uses vegetables without permission...
Having a daughter must be tough...
The masturbation scene is a little too much.
But she's a dirty Chie who does it 4 times a day in the interview, so it's okay!
The Momoari page was actually supposed to be Kaoru Nina's.
I thought Momoka would be the most appropriate to correct Chie for yelling at her.
Arisu was supposed to make funny faces... but she didn't get a chance to do that at all.
I don't think Momoka called P “P-chama” in the anime, but I don't know...
I rewatched episode 4 and she called him “producer”.
Chama seems a bit strange in a serious scene, but that's okay!
I'm a bit heartbroken myself when I drew this story...
I think it's because I made the story too close to the anime version that it ended up tarnishing what was a beautiful and good story...
I love the contrast between the beautiful and cute little girl and the dirty uncle.
I tried to push it down from a beautiful story to a dirty story, and it damaged my heart more than I thought it would.
Please be careful not to catch a cold due to the difference in temperature!
My head hasn't been spinning so much this week that I'm having trouble keeping the dialogue consistent...
I can't think of a good line of dialogue, so I may revise it later...
I can't fix this kind of thing unless I let it sit for a few days.
My writing pace is stalling...
I'm supposed to be working the same amount of time, but it just keeps stalling out.
A day ends in an instant - it's
hard!