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You could say "But that chick looks EXACTLY like Luna!" and you'd be absolutely right :D But I can explain it, I swear! First of all, as I mentioned earlier, I had an incredibly short time to create this comic from scratch, and I'm not going to lie, I thought I could save a lot of time by taking a character I drew a lot and changing it a bit to fit this story. And that brings me to the other one, the antlers, because I definitely wanted to give the Queen of Winter a simple set of antlers with icicles dangling from them, like a simple crown. Plus, Luna was white and blue by default, and what other colour would I have given the Queen of Winter :D So that's how Luna got a small role in this comic. Plus, I was able to draw Luna as very nice by default, which again suited the ambiguous story and message of this story.

I was under the impression that children (especially if they read books) are not so stupid that they wouldn't understand a more nuanced story. And I thought a little punchline was necessary for every short story, hence the Queen of Winter, who turns the villagers into undead out of sheer altruistic goodwill because she thinks it will save them from the horrors of life, while the villagers are on the complete opposite opinion :)

I've written a lot more about these few pages than I usually do under my drawings, but I think the excitement I felt about the competition and the soul-destroying race against time to finish it in time left a pretty deep impression on me :D I hope you enjoyed this little story, and I hope I get the chance to do more like this in the future ^^

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DiDiDi-X

This is sad but kind of a wholesome ending, really great short comic and can't wait to see more of these. Great work Zummeng

Mr_TTerevel

I couldn't help but be reminded of the Hans Christian Anderson story "The Little Match Girl", albiet with a little less dire sitiation.

QQQQT2

I love the Queen's design, yes it's similar to Luna but there is an entirely different air to it, pun intended. But honestly, she seems more like a compassionate grim reaper, gentle but resolute. I also love that unlike Luna, she actually has big eyes with pupils, making her seem more inter-personal and adorable. I'd love to see her interact with one or more of her counterparts, seeing their own ideas, maybe even with a person that they've taken in this similar way, representing their personality a little. I love the innocence of the child too, What would a child do if they died in an unfamiliar place or not knowing it at all? Anyway I like the call back to when children stories were dark and that without context the Queen seems more like a temptress than a kind hearted creature of the cold. Beautiful work^^

AdmiredRain28

Well that's a gradual turn to the grim especially with her saying that he will reunite with his remaining family eventually. I do love this concept of someone who genuinely believe that they're doing the right thing of giving immortality when in reality they're hurting people. It brings this interesting question of whether you want to live forever or enjoy your short time on Earth. I also like the idea that she will never meet the villagers as a whole because she can't be out in the sun and any villager walking at night with freeze to death. Actually this brings a very important question. What would happen if she met a villager that rejects her immortality? What if a villager don't want to abandoned their family to the cold and don't want to live forever weighing down by regret. Would the Ice Queen accept their wishes and let them die or would she force them join the kingdom against their will. It makes sense for the kid to join since he wants to escape from all that suffering and figured the kingdom is equivalent to heaven, but what would happen if there's a villager filled with hatred against the queen for killing their world and would try to attack her the moment they meet her? What if the Ice Queen met her version of Nigel?

Abbie Hunt

Echoes of Mark Twain's "The Five Boons of Life". I suspect a child who has lived a short, hard life and presumably has already lost his father is going to be a lot more accepting of the value of the Queen's gift than someone in comfortable late middle age who lives in the largest house in the village.

StumpedMoose

I didn't expect Luna to moonlight as the Queen of Winter. I guess her role in The Tree of Life doesn't pay much, heh. Good to see that the Queen of Winters is a lot more benevolent than the folk tales made it seem like. Though the boy is not technically dead, he is granted a new form which somehow gives immunity to things he was told to fear. However, at the cost of the things he currently holds dear close to him and the warmth of mortality. What dark yet strangely hopeful little comic.

Nick R. Kupila

It's such a simple idea, but the design choice of having the snow pull up from the ground to form her dress is brilliant.

Stone Quillian III

This is so sad. It reminds me of the Little Match Girl. Oh no... I'M STARTING TO TEAR UP. AND NOW I'M CRYING!!!!