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And here's the finished page 8.

I'm sure it's not surprising anymore if I tell you how much I love making grass and leaves, so this page came pretty easily :) I wanted to make the cradle blue as well, to make it look more magical, but the colors blurred together too much with Luna's colors, so I just gave it more natural colors.

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Anonymous

Maybe it will glow later, but it still looks quite comfy. XD

Simone Spinozzi

okoy... so we have a baby that can set stuff on fire... i'm sure nothing bad can come out of this. https://media2.giphy.com/media/rtF5HyrcBJD56/source.gif 😂😂😂😂😂😂💖💖💖💖💖👍

ShinobiSparrow

Two small typos on top panel bottom right balloon “none of them” and “this the green”

ShinobiSparrow

Loving how the story is building up so far

Not Telling

It feels a little exposition-y, but the visuals are gorgeous.

zummeng

Thank you for the correction! I fixed the page, but Patreon literally doesn't let me change the picture in this post for like three days. I'll keep trying, I just wanted to tell you that I fixed it, thank you! ^^

zummeng

To be honest, this Book Zero won't be full of action, and there will be plenty of exposition-y scenes, but don't worry, every chapter will be a bit different :)

Anonymous

I need a Lynus in my life. Good friends get harder and harder to find as you get older.