OUTDATED?? COMIC TEST FRANKENSTEIN HUH??? (Patreon)

was testing out another sequence

this one is such a mess and i've changed it up in the script after drawing this so this might be kind of outdated, there's some panel i'd change as well, and i wanna cut some dialogue if i can. theres a lot of time skips thats would be represented by colour probably and its so sketchy that its near impossible to figure out so idk if you guys would get much from this

but uhh criticism welcome anyway

also no dialogue lmao you just get creature melt down no context

YOU KNOW WHAT, ACTUALLY- TELL ME how you'd interpret this with no dialogue, could be useful