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The Smoke Room Build 34 (WIll): "A Hundred Visions and Revisions" (Patreon)

Published:
2024-05-04 20:48:51
Edited:
2024-05-05 02:08:15
Imported:
2024-05

Content

Hey folks, this is George. The team has been working on restructuring Will's chapter 3 for a good while to make it mesh better with the tone and the timing of the animatic. Scenes with Todd and Marcy have been restructured to be before and after the stag. I also added a good deal of new writing to fill in the missing choices from the prior update.

I still intend to do a little more pacing adjustments for the public update, as well as including some new cg's for certain new scenes, but that will have to wait for now.

-Writing By George Squares

-Editing and copywriting by George, Kardamom, and cafealopex

-Illustrations by Kardamon

-Teaser by solosolosolomon

Links:

PC:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NDqgeX-tIdAfSBsSYAFWVU-FDFE7HTV2/view?usp=drive_link

Mac:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1k5_H6kgMTO0j3rFAsLsf4DMzCJYGwBqk/view?usp=drive_link

Linux:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1a4bWmvdeiZh3qc9BloeTpFwtIE1MVJw0/view?usp=drive_link

Android: https://www.mediafire.com/file/bigiycie0ionhrv/TSR_34_-_release.apk/file

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Comments

nickyg95

William deliberately says No with no option for saying Yes when Nik offers to be polyamorous with Sam. I wonder if it’s a deliberate locked option that completely contrasts Will’s mindset when compared to the orgy with Kane instead. Will being distant relationship wise and duty bound versus giving in his own desire and happiness.

George Squares
>>137157121

I will say that both choices aren't necessarily wrong options. They just lead to different outcomes.

Rye's Creatures

Nik and Sam's faces are so funny in the art lol

Worraps

Will survives! The shooting in the crowd of miners seemed like a full stop to the entire story. Also, the Kane business is far better handled, with Will's position understandable(- ish)

Andrew

Might be an issue with just my tablet, but same as with the previous Android build the videos during the Stag scene still won't play - I see a black screen instead.

GojoSimp

(This is a long comment.) So I made a comment about the build on itch.io yesterday which got replied to today and was recommended to play the recent build on Patreon as it fixes a lot of my problems. I do support this project and these games and so thats what I did and I was going to go back to add another reply, and I found that the comment is gone. I don’t know if it got deleted or anything but I decided to just give my review here instead. Anyways… Yeah it did fix a lot of my problems. The build on itch felt really icky to me, like it was about peer pressuring will to be submissive. but this revision feels much better. Everything flowed together much better. To to talk about the specifics The don’t do anything stupid route doesn’t have any cg’s which I’m assuming will be added in later but it was really sweet and it felt way more in line with will as a character. This route seems to be going to a polyamorous relationship. Now I’m not poly so it isn’t for me, but it was cute. It was a little jarring to me to see Will say I love you to nik in his head when I myself barely interacted with him but I still liked to see it. I don’t really have any criticisms. Kane route was def much much better. Again before it felt icky, but now it kind of felt like two friends deciding to sleep with the douche for fun and to just party. The scene where they were laying on the hay was really cute and it felt much better overall. This is just my personal bias but I’m glad that will isn’t turning into a sub masochist bottom and he’s just a switch. I commented on it before but the way everything was worded it felt like the entire character switched to be about letting go of control and becoming a bottom. This one def felt more like the message was he should stop worrying about the past and he should just have fun and be himself. which I assume is more what you were going with. I didn’t think my hate for Kane could get worse but oh boy it did haha. But again it felt like sleeping with someone you know is bad just to do it. It still feels a little ooc for William to go that far, but with the pacing of them talking about it the entire day now, as well as the word choice they used being better and more focused, it didn’t feel icky anymore which was my main problem before. My only criticism is that right now it feels like this is the non poly route? Which I prefer and it means I have to make will suck this stupid wolf to get the route I want.😭 /jk If I’m being for real, I think it is a little odd that both routes lead to a 3 or more orgy and there isn’t a path where it’s just Samuel. But again, thats probably because I’m not poly or anything so I’m just not into that. It doesn’t hurt the story. I can’t wait for the next update, I wish this game the best in development and I really hope that Kane gets his comeuppance. I wouldn’t mind him getting made to kneel in return haha 🤭

George Squares
>>137769294

Something really obnoxious about the itchio page is you can accidentally delete threads with one click without it asking "are you sure"? >_> But yes, thank you for the review and the reread. I told people at the time that there was just a lot to write for these portions and I didn't want to drop a 25k update in one month since it isn't fair to artists and coders. But I'm glad more people are understanding they were only seeing parts of a bigger picture now.

AL

Seeing just Nik makes my day 100% better