S&S party crashers 2016 - page 1 draft (Patreon)

Here's the first draft of the party crashers comic, page one!  After thumbnailing the story arc, I've settled on 8 pages (not 6).  There are roughly 80 characters total, so I will draw 10 per page.

The following supporters are featured on this page, and I'd love to have feedback if you have anything you'd like to change, or are fine with what's drawn:

(In case Patreon resizes the image, here's the original version: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1277823/contrib-2016_002-20161130.jpg )

Panels 1-4: The world suddenly tips sideways.

Panel 5: Everything begins tumbling out of the castle.  The messenger, the King, Rainy and Cookies the dragon, a guard, the royal children in a bathtub, as well as:

- Rei Loire: just fallin'

- Vandal: flapping his arms

- Cosmo: daytime astronomer with telescope

- Henry K9: in the middle of meditation

- Tom Redlion: in the middle of lunch (nomming two turkey legs)

Panel 6: The baker hangs on to his bread.

- Mishafox: the baker's assistant

- Jenna: just fallin', with groceries

Panel 7: The drunk blacksmith and his blades go flying out of the smithy.

- Southpaw Fox: a house painter, on a ladder

- Tanabi: shaking a guard, as always

- EJ Husky: hanging onto a wine barrel

I will begin coloring this on Friday; please send your feedback before then :)