WiP 12/8/2017 (Patreon)
Published:
2017-12-09 00:48:51
Imported:
2022-05
Content
This page is gonna get its dialogue cut down a bit - if people are interested, I may post the initial version with the first pass of dialogue intact later. You can see how obstructive it looks with all these balloons everywhere.
It's got to really feel like the characters (except for Zeke and his magnetized feet) are floating around in the air on the spaceship, and that's a bit hard to get across with lots of words-words-words in balloons blocking their way.