WiP 11/15/2017 (Patreon)
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Psu: A slight tweak to just how I approach the penciling and the lineart seemed to revitalize some of that energy. And maybe you can see it here, with how the characters look there's a degree of softness that wasn't quite there before.
Psu: I still find a few spots where I'm making mistakes where I don't need to be, but just being a little looser with accuracy has allowed me more leeway to play with details or textures and adding to the expressiveness of the characters. This page doesn't have a lot of over the top acting but it does look better than the version of it I had to throw out.