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A while back, I did a bunch of Voting Incentives that showcased unused Far Out There comic ideas. Some of them were polished up versions of pages I cut out previous story arcs, and others were summaries of whole story arcs that I never got around to doing at all. But there’s a third breed of unused comic that’s very different from either of those. Back when I was first working out the idea of Far Out There, I sketched out a lot -and I mean a LOT- of single page gag comics which have a WILDLY different feel than the series proper.

Obviously, I didn’t have a handle of how to write any of the characters yet, that’s kind of a given with these early draft sorts of things. As a result, most of the characters are pretty flat and unrecognizable. But it’s weird to look back and see how different the writing style was as a result. There’s no ongoing story anywhere and very little sense of continuity. The cast just walk into a room, something vaguely sci-fi sounding happens, and two pages later it’s over. Honestly, that was the point at this early stage. I was on a pretty big Douglas Adams kick at the time, and what I really wanted to write was a bunch of absurdist sketches with a science fiction bent. Actually, even calling them “sketches” is a bit of a stretch. They’re vaguely funny-sounding settings in which a story MIGHT happen, being passed off as the story itself. The characters were just there as an excuse to explain the settings, not to be… you know, actual characters. That might be forgivable if the sci-fi ideas were just so good that they could hold the reader's attention all on their own, but after browsing through all these pecil-on-notebook-paper doodles again, I can promise you they were NOT. It wasn’t until I got a feel for the cast as people, and actually started writing them AS people instead of Punchline Delivery Devices, that Far Out There really came together as a thing.

So what to do with all these older pages? At first, I’d planned to just throw them in whenever I didn’t have time to write up something new, but the current state of the comic would make that very difficult. With the stronger continuity, I can’t just throw something in at random anymore. Plus, the pages are so gag-based, they don’t really do anything to advance the characters. Then again, seeing how often modern Far Out There errs on the side of character at the expense of having gags at all, maybe it WOULD be good to revive a few of these early brain farts…


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Anonymous

They might make good backup voting incentives, if there was some way for you to easily get them onto your computer. Even if they end up difficult to read, it would be nice for when you don't have time for anything else.

BlitzTheComicGuy

I've considered it, and just scanning them wouldn't be much of an issue. Actually getting the text to be legible would be quite a challenge, though. I'm not sure how it'd manage it without editing the image so much that, well, it'd defeat the purpose of "taking a break from drawing new incentives", ya know?

Anonymous

Well, I can read some of the text just in the picture in this post. Perhaps it could be a challenge for the sharper-eyed readers? I personally enjoy the challenge of reading small/messy text at times. In the end, it's your choice and your standards that rule the day.

BlitzTheComicGuy

It's a hard thing to judge, because what one person can read fine, other people can't even begin to decipher. One of the reasons I stopped doing trippy, psychedelic lettering like in the Far Out There logo is because so many people told me they couldn't read it... even though I'VE never had a problem with it at all (and actually thought I was making it too PLAIN compared to more experienced psychedelic artists) An alternative would be having white space around the scans and including "translation" footnotes for whoever needs them... but then the central art might become too small to make out. It's always something, ya know?