Hush Hush Trailer Critiques 1 (Patreon)

I've been working with a guy in the UK for ....over a year now... trying to get this Hush Hush trailer made. He's really slow, to say it politely ^^ lol... but I'm finally seeing some progress and now I'm going through critiquing everything to try and make it look better. These are two screenshots where Quill appears and I find the background stripes he choose really eye-bleedy. It's just too much contrast and reminds me of candy canes!