Early Page: 380 (Patreon)

Wow only 20 pages away from 400 pages. What the heckies

This scene has undergone SO many changes, rewrites, and edits, and this page was no exception. Originally, you could see Honey and Timmo in the window in panels 2 and 3, all the way up until the shading process. But with the way they're positioned in the room, their backs are to the window and having them face forward just was too jarring. I tried to put myself in mind of it being like a play, kind of metaphorical, but nah, it just didn't work. So I deleted em.

This page took a while to get to because of the BACKGROUNDS. So many backgrounds. But I really like them:

There's a lot you can't see about that second BG in that first panel. I'm pretty sure it comes back later in the scene but if not ... uh. Well. Good job me, lol.

Anyway, thanks to Chaon (Cur), Ashley (Honey), and Timmo (Timmothy) for the cameos!