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2018-10-31 21:32:21
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Briar is done dealing with your shit, y'all. Time to get with the program!
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So on this page I had a difficult time with reading order, particularly on panels 5 and 6. I moved Belfry and Tess around their panels a bunch before settling on this arrangement. I even moved Tess's head angle around a lot so that it would point to the next place I wanted you to look, but I put it back since the word bubble ended up being where it is.
Always be aware of where lines are pointing in your panels, including where people are looking. It will always impact your reading order!