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Some notes on composition on this page:

In the original sketches, the last three panels were each flipped so that Belfry was on the Right and Avery was on the Left. However, given the order of spoken dialogue in the central panel, I decided to flip them this way. It would be less confusing that way.

It does mean that Bel has sort of migrated but there's been enough movement between panels that it won't be too confusing, I think.

Other than that, I had a difficult time creating enough contrast between Piper and Tamberlane in the 2nd panel. I think it honestly would have been better if I'd shrunk the first panel a bit and given the 2nd a bit more breathing room. 

But I chose a narrower panel like that just because it wasn't necessarily an important moment that needed to last. I would reverse that decision now, I think. Clarify the silhouettes.