Boobgirl Submission p. 1 (Patreon)

So, this is the first bit of that submission comic I was talking about on Tumblr and Picarto. I'm keeping this particular stuff Patron exclusive for a bit since I kind of want feedback here as I've never really done a full on mind break hentai comic before.

If anybody has any ideas for either dialogue and/or angles, then I'm all ears.