The Ghost - a halloween tale 1/6 (Patreon)

"Here is the first page of a short comic I want to create for Halloween. The protagonist is my Fury (but in this case, she's a spooky ghost). I tried to minimize the details and shadows to be able to finish it by Halloween, but I think the result is still decent!

If you see any errors or you have suggestions for the text, could you please let me know? I'm writing them by myself and I'm always afraid of making mistakes XD.