EDE Vol. 1 pt. 5 (18+) (Patreon)

so how 'bout dat FEEDBACK

This is my first time even trying to write a proper LitRPG with tables and stats and stuff, so yeah, feedback greatly appreciated. I can easily change stuff up until this story goes public, but after that, I've got to stick with what I've got.

Also, I removed that very last line, but I don't really think I need to upload a new PDF just to get rid of one super short sentence at the very end.