Comic Report #8 - Curtain Call (Patreon)
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While planning out the job-introduction day I wanted to segue from closing to home in a way similar to the start of the comic, highlighting a few key differences between Page 1 Lizzie and Page Now Lizzie. She's grown a lot and things have evolved but some things are just the same, so thematically it's a good place to rest the story beat. This will also probably be the last time I draw Dream Lizzie for a while. There's a key final detail to this one which might not show up without color, but I'm hoping a message of wholeness comes across in the end.
I have a bad habit in comics where I want to frame a whole bunch of in-between shots, like panning moments of people walking from one place to another, but I also don't want to waste panels on nothingness. When I started this page I had thought about how to visually move the comic from the restaurant back home and leave enough page space to fill out the rest of the comic. It took a little bit but then I realized that I already established the route and the apartment so I could just jump from one key turning to the next! I'm honestly really super-proud of that scene transition. I also screwed up by drawing the door locks wrong at first (they're deadbolt locks, I had drawn them as doorknob locks originally); I'm usually good about remembering details in my own comic but I do a lot of archive-diving to reference specific scenes and I guess I thought I didn't need to do that here, but then I did look back and realized my mistake. Fortunately moving a drawing of a lock from a doorknob to a door isn't that hard, but it's still a reminder to check my facts.
This page came out pretty quick and I did a fair amount of actual detailing, so I shouldn't have to guess and fill in gaps with the inking, so hopefully I'll get this one done quickly; well, at least relative to starting now, and not so much to when the last page posted. Someday I'll get back on that old rhythm.
Thanks for reading!