Just Accept My Offering! Page 12 (Patreon)
Published:
2016-01-15 17:38:39
Edited:
2016-07-18 05:26:33
Imported:
2020-07
Content
I'm not 100% happy with the dialogue of this comic. I wanted it to be funny and give that "I really don't want to be here right now" vibe and it does...but since I'm working on in piece by piece, it doesn't flow as smoothly as I wanted it. A lot of the first couple pages of dialogue were planned, but later on the script just became "Okay have him say something here so it's not boring" Writing porn is easy as hell, writing one sided dialogue with un-consensual tones is hard lol
But that's the beauty of Patreon, I'll release a textless edit if the final draft still sucks haha