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TIME FOR EVIL POLL!!!!

  • We move on with the altered POV 10
  • We return to normal schedule 4
  • 2024-05-21
  • 14 votes
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So first is first.

Chapter 100 may have a cliff, it depends on how you think about it to be honest. Could I finish it neatly? Probably, but the topic shifted to things that happen in Vol 7, so it felt right to end the chapter at that point.

And as discussed before chapter 1 of book 3 will start with another POV with new characters! Aren't you hyped for new friends! (Yes, they are cute girls, sue me).

So...I kinda liked writting them, as such you have a chance! I can continue this or we can return to Elizabeth, Rossie and Rena.

Here are snippets from the chapter (Not the whole thing of course that would be silly!)

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Somewhat around the start

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“Wake up…we need to move.” She said to the other girl, the blonde’s eye fluttered open, and she could see the other girl wasn’t dealing well either with the missing sleep. If it was only the two of them it would have been even worse. At least they had their helper to keep guard, even if they couldn’t sleep as much as she wanted.

“Is he coming again?” Asked the other girl in a tired tone, “Can’t he leave us alone? We don’t even know him!”

The blonde threw the pseudo covering she had been using, really, it was some papers they had found in an alleyway. At least the clothes seemed to clean themselves on their own, if they had needed to get new clothes….

“I know, but there is nothing we can do. If we try to get help…” She didn’t like their odds.

“You still think they will sell us to him?” The blonde girl asked back, she was the hopeful of the two. 

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After some discussion and cute girls doing cute things

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New pet coming to town

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“Rwaaaar!” ■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■■ (Censored cuz spoilers, more than needed of course)

“Okay okay, we are leaving. Say goodbye to our house Reginald.” It was closer to an abandoned hotel room. But it had been home for a month or so.

“Bye home!” 

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beeg reveal

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“G̵̹̦̳̲̠̗̻͔̺̲̦͌͌̚͜͝I̵̺͖̳̠͕͍̪̘̠̭͋̀̋͋Ṿ̵̧̧̼̙̩͙̹̙̣̑͌̈́́̀̕͜Ę̶̨̢̥̹͈͙̰̠̙̻͉̍̔̄̄̆͋̀́̎̾̕͜͝ ̵̨̧̛̤̗͕̞̖̲̪̩̫̬͇̪̥͕͇͂̑̀́̒̏͒̈̊̉̓̋͝H̴̢̻͖̰̯͓̩͕̜̩̙̗̖̐̊́͊́͋̆͂̂̈̈́̀͜͝͠͝E̶͈̼͔̘͛͐́̀̍̌͜Ŗ̴̧̧̧̦̖̩̱͕̗͍̰̭̫̋̂̂̈́̊̋͗̽̊̕̕͝ͅ ̵͙̗̠͚̬̩̙̙̟̑̾͆́͂̐͊̋͠B̸̢̛̠̳͕͎̝͚͕̲͊͋͗́̒̈́̍̃̈̅̒͝A̵̫̯̖̳̺̯͛̽̑C̴͖̲̲̤͈̯̠͙͈̞̮͎̯͔̤̋̊̀͒̓̍̆̽̄̄̃̀͊͠K̸̮̣̣̏!̸̩̩̭̼̜̜̻̻͎̻͉̈̔͐̐́̌̆̇͌̆́͋̍̆̇̏̕”

The voice struck at her like a wrecking ball, but unlike before she managed to ground herself more easily. “IT’S HERE!” She said pointing with her hand to the wall at the left.

The Gothic Magical Girl quickly turned her attention to that wall and sure enough, a second after the wall burst into fragments as the shadow man walked into the room. She could still see the shadow tide coming in the distance, but the shadow man was here.

“...he got us. He wasn’t with the shadow tide.” The blue-haired magical girl said as she put one of her hands at the side of her head and started speaking. “[Law Bringer Centinel] reporting, we have made contact with the suspect. Confirming the identity behind the [Shadow Tide].”

“[Shadow Pact], you are giving us former tainted a bad name.” [Lunar Shade] said as she pointed at the man with a teddy bear. “Return with us in peace, you may have stood at the peak of the [Tainted], but even so. You need to accept your sins.”

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Unnamed member of the [Twelve] was Shadow Pact and he do be angy

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“THEY TOOK MY SISTER FROM ME, AND THEN THEY ALL FORGOT AS IF IT WAS NOTHING!” The shadow man said as he started crying blood, with his hands he started pulling at his hair as he screamed, “YOU ALL FORGOT ABOUT HER! SHE WAS INNOCENT! SHE DID NOTHING WRONG! AND YOU ALL FORGET ABOUT HER?!?!?”

something else blablablabla then this

“AND THEN THERE IS HER!” The shadow man said pointing at her, “I WAS TRYING TO SUMMON MY SISTER BACK, BUT SHE SHOWED UP! SHE KNOWS SOMETHING! SHE HAS SOMETHING! SHE CAN GIVE ME BACK MY SISTER!”

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welp, that should be good enough to mislead you all about what I plan for Vol 7, so...vote?

Comments

VoidWorldGaming 1116

Wait would this altered poverty improve the story? If so then imo go for it as it'll be better in the end for the story

Alexanders tries to write

Only things it would change in the long run would be that instead of finding of these events by third party (Aka newspaper, newsman vtubers or gossip) you would find them by first hand experiences. Originally main cast would find about the events that happened after this chapter through the TV. Instead of having main cast finding about these by news you will see, and when main cast rejoins with these characters they may do a recount. Original plan was having the new members do the recounting offhand, but if we move with this new POV. Then it will be main cast doing the reccount of events...if they do them that is.