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*As you will see later in this chapter it contains a bit of factual info that you, the reader, will receive but that Alden and Haoyu won't. But not everything you probably want to know...

*I put an "intermission" in just to remind you all to get up and stretch. Or sleep, if you're reading this one in the night and it's late. Technically, you could even break this post into four sections and read a full-sized chapter's worth of material every day between now and next post!

* I am a binge reader, so I would never take my own advice in this matter. Don't be like me.

*Thanks for coming along for the ride. ]


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Lute lay on the sofa—a distressed leather chesterfield Alden Thorn had been very easily talked into buying during their dorm decoration shopping spree—and stared up at the copper-painted antler light fixture.

If I were rewriting the story of my life, he thought, would I affix Shaper of Water right there in the hallway at school?

Haoyu was telling Alden animatedly about all the traditions surrounding the graduation pins. He was of the opinion that shock from the eighth grade student body had rendered Lute’s reveal day less joyful than it should have been. Lute hadn’t minded at the time. It had felt right to him, even if the congratulations from his peers had been more confused and subdued than they would have been for most people.

The day had been an ending and a beginning. He hadn’t been in the frame of mind to want more from it than that.

“Everything that happened next,” said Lute, “makes me sound so dumb. I don’t know how to say it without making you both think I’m pitiful.”

Maybe if he just stuck to the facts. Ruthlessly.

“I went to see Cyril right after school. The word had been spreading through my mother’s side of the family for a few hours, but nobody had called him. I’m sure they wouldn’t have anyway, but just in case, I had texted Jessica when I realized the news was out, telling her I wanted to talk to him myself. It was hard.”

Dad, it doesn’t have to change anything. Please. I don’t want it to.

…I need some time to think, Lute. Thank you for telling me. Thank you. Why don’t you stay with your mom tonight?

“He’s still taking some time to think,” said Lute, “about whether or not he wants to be my father. It’s been a year and a half. I suppose he’ll get around to deciding one of these days.”

The apartment had gone quiet. I hope I’m not traumatizing Haoyu. His parents seem so functional and loving. And…shit…Alden’s died horribly so I guess I should be careful not to whine about mine too much.

“I’d been getting interface calls from every Velra ever spawned since noon,” he continued. “If I was the System, I’d have teleported Hazel’s parents and Corin to the bottom of some oceanic trench. They must have been standing around chanting, ‘Call Lute! Text Lute! Call Lute!’

“I blocked them. They couldn’t believe I would do such a thing. Apparently we’ve got a Velra rule about not blocking each other because ‘What if there’s a family emergency!?’”

Roman had texted him right as school was letting out. If they give it to you, make her pay.

Grandma or Hazel?

Yes.

“The talk with Dad really messed me up. I was so mad.”

Not mad. He didn’t know why he’d lie about the emotion. Mad was what he was about it now. At the time, he’d been scared.

He’d stood in the elevator of Cyril’s building, going up and down whenever someone boarded the car, wondering if he’d just lost his dad forever and trying to figure out if it was the parentage or the fact that he’d gotten something Cyril had always wanted for himself. Or did I say something wrong when I was telling him? Maybe different words…

“When I finally left, it was ridiculous. Hugh, Cady, and Corin were parked outside in the Bentley. Roman’s dad was there glaring at them from his motorcycle. Miyo and a couple of the other cousins were standing on the sidewalk. The neighborhood watcher for that area was an Adjuster, and she was making herself obvious, standing out in front of the library with a look on her face that said she was ready to turn some Velras inside out if they started anything.

“As soon as I stepped outside, they stampeded me. They were all like, ‘What wonderful news! You might not know this, but I told the maid to change your diaper once when you were six months old and that makes us incredibly close. Now do exactly as I say.

“Jessica was ahead of them, though. She’d sent a driver to take me to the helicopter. Hugh tried to get in the car with me, and I told him to go about his business. Politely.”


******

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“Grab my arm one more time and I’ll scream for help,” Lute said as he swatted at Hazel’s father with one hand and tried to close the car door on him with the other.

“Now listen to me, young man!”

“No! I won’t listen to you. You freaking lunatics drove all the way here from Apex to jump me! Don’t you put your hand in this car!”

“You’re being ridiculous, Lute. You’re going through a difficult time right now and you need guidance—”

“Help!” Lute bellowed, so loudly that the driver swore. “I’m trying to leave, and this man won’t let me! He’s not my guardian! I barely know him.”

Hugh’s feet shot out from under him. Cady, who’d been about to get into the backseat of the car from the other side, shrieked as her husband was lifted by the ankles into the air. He dangled there, flapping his arms and babbling excuses while the Adjuster charged with keeping the neighborhood family friendly stalked over. She was pushing up the sleeves of her gray uniform, and she looked deeply annoyed.

Lute went still in his seat. Corin was straightening his tie, like the watcher was going to take him more seriously if he did that. Roman’s dad was cackling next to the fire hydrant. Half of the cousins looked startled, and the other half looked delighted.

“Are you all having some kind of trouble?” she asked in Mandarin. She directed the question to Lute, probably because she knew he lived here sometimes. He had seen her in the area occasionally.

“My mother called this car for me. Only for me. These people are trying to get in it with me when they’re not supposed to,” Lute said in the same language.

“We’re his family!” Corin said quickly in English. “It’s not like we’re strangers.”

“That’s right!” Hugh was still dangling in the air. “We’re just trying to help him. He’s—”

“A moment away from being an Avowed,” said the Adjuster, crossing her arms over her chest. “He’s flashing a name tag and there’s a non-Avowed notice, which means he’s recently been selected. Congratulations, by the way.”

“Thanks,” said Lute.

“Why do you all seem to think someone who’s about to make some of the biggest decisions of his life needs your help for a little car trip?” she said, leaning down to look at Hugh with a menacing expression. “Hmmm?

She made a humming sound and gestured, and Hugh was flipped onto his feet again. The damage was done. People were watching curiously through apartment windows.

Cady pulled up the collar of her coat like that might hide her from view.

“Buckle your seatbelt,” the watcher said to Lute. “Have a nice afternoon.”

I could be an Adjuster, thought Lute as the car drove away. I wonder what types of spells she has? It could be binding spells, and that one just happens to lift the target off the ground. It didn’t look like she messed with gravity.

There were so many different methods that wonderful lady could be using to punish his family. She was probably just giving them a talking to, but Lute liked imagining them all hanging upside down.

The happy thought was short-lived.

Dad…

If I just give him time, it’ll be all right. Won’t it? Obviously he didn’t suspect at all. And he’s upset. It’s a lot.

Lute hoped it wasn’t too much.

What if Mom’s just as upset?

She had texted him several times, but it was all very business mode. Yes, you can go see your father. I’m getting the helicopter arranged. There will be a car for you. Don’t make any sudden decisions. Come straight to me. Are you all right at school?

What if neither one of them want a son who’s different from them in this way? How would I feel if one of them suddenly became Avowed?

He rested his head against the window. The answer came to him immediately—Like they’d left me behind. Like they’d gone to join the rest of Anesidora.

Lonely.

Was his mother feeling like that right now? Would she look at him differently when he walked through the door?

If neither one of them want me like this, I think it might kill me.

Car to helicopter. Helicopter to Narcissus House. A bit absurd just to shave minutes off the travel time, but at least Chainers couldn’t fly. If they could, they’d be up here trying to drag him out of the helicopter.

Hazel’s family really did want me to affix before Grandma got back from the Triplanets. They’re worried about her position more than they’ve been letting on.

And Roman’s dad had been there to tell him not to affix until Aulia got back.

None of them had even asked him what class he actually wanted. Corin had just started shouting the names of things he could get his hands on very quickly.

Lute watched the city and the sea pass by below him.

He kept checking his cell phone and his interface for messages, hoping to see one from Cyril that said not to worry. Or a single emoji would be enough. Not even a heart, just a thumbs up. A wink.

The helicopter landed, and Lute headed toward the back of the house with his coat over his arm and a feeling close to terror making his stomach roil.

Mom will be okay with it. She will. She’ll have advice, and she’ll help me figure all of this out. She’s probably working in Grandma’s office right now. I’ll go see her, and tell her every—

The sliding door that led from the sunroom to the outdoor kitchen opened, and Jessica Velra stood there. She was wearing the dark green sweater Lute had bought her for Mother’s Day and a pair of jeans. She had on the ugly slide sandals she loved but only wore when they were unlikely to have guests. Her white blonde hair hung down in a side braid.

She’d been crying. She was still crying. The mascara she used to darken her lashes sometimes had run. Her cheeks were wet.

Lute stood still, more afraid than ever before in his life.

Mom, no. Please don’t. It’s all right.

He meant to say the words out loud, but he didn’t.

Then she was running toward him, her arms outstretched, and Lute couldn’t even drop the coat before she was embracing him.

“Mom, what—?”

He stumbled. Before he knew it, his butt was on the grass, and Jessica was on the ground right beside him, still hugging the life out of him.

“Look at you,” she sobbed in his ear. “Look at you, baby. You’re an Avowed! I’m so happy.”

“You are?” Lute asked. “Really?”

“You’re beautiful,” she said, leaning back and cupping his cheek with a hand. “You’ve always been so beautiful. Things have been hard for you. It’s my fault. I’m sorry. I was afraid they’d be hard forever, but they won’t now. Lute, you’re going to be all right.”

What? “Mom, I’ve been fine.”

“I was selfish for wanting you so much.” She stole his pocket square and wiped at her face with it. “Are you all right? Are you hurt?”

“From falling in the grass?”

She chuckled. “I know. I’m being silly. I’ve seen Selection happen to how many other people? But now it’s you and the first thing I thought was, ‘I hope the Contract is careful with him! I hope it didn’t scare him!’”

“It scared the shi—stuffing out of me.”

“It did?”

“I didn’t even believe it was happening until an hour later.”

She stood and pulled him onto his feet.

“…Mom, you’re really happy?”

The terror was fading. Relief was replacing it.

She smiled and reached for his hand. “Lute Velra, this is the happiest I’ve been since the day you were born. I’m proud of you.”

“But I didn’t do anything.”

Despite how some people seemed to feel, being an Avowed wasn’t something you earned. Still, he couldn’t help returning her smile.

“Come on!” she said. “Come with me. We need to talk before your grandmother gets home!”


******


Jessica’s joy at Lute’s selection was infectious. He hadn’t once had a similar emotion about it himself, and after a week of feeling every way but pleased, he gave himself permission to relax a little.

“Okay, okay!” he said, brushing the crumbs from a brownie off his shirt and leaning toward her just as eagerly as she was leaning toward him. They were sitting in a pair of pink velvet armchairs inside the expansive walk-in dressing room that connected her bedroom to Aulia’s, and they’d set the panic protocols just so that they wouldn’t be able to hear relatives knocking.

Lute was enjoying imagining some of the particularly toxic ones out there, throwing themselves stupidly at the walls of what was effectively a bomb shelter again and again. Like zombies.

“So the first person other than Kon sees my pin, and they say something to their friend, and then it goes all through the hall. And it gets quiet except for a couple of older students who are like, ‘Hey! Awesome! An eighth grader’s wearing a pin!’ And they’re all trying to figure out if I really got selected or it’s some kind of stunt, and then Mrs. Sharma comes down the hall juggling all her bags and a pile of supplies. She just stops and stares at me for ages, and she doesn’t notice her mug is tilted in her hand and she’s dripping that Artonan flower tea she likes all over the floor.

“Finally she realizes her foot is getting wet, and she snaps out of it and she just drops everything she’s carrying on Declan without even asking—like he’s a catch-all table!—and she hurries over to make sure that I’m not doing anything stupid. She seemed to think I might have gotten overwhelmed and started affixing right there by the lockers.”

He shook his head. “I wasn’t a great student when it came to the Avowed stuff, but I’m not that ignorant.”

He’d been a quarter of a second away from becoming a Wright out of curiosity, but did that need mentioning?

“So then they all knew it was real! And this gossip wave hit the school, and…it was weird but fun. People kept staring at me like I had become a completely different person overnight.”

His mother was beaming. Her hands were clasped over her heart.

“I wanted this for you,” said said in an emotional voice. “All your life, I wanted you not to have to go through what I did. I wanted you to have everything, but I couldn’t be sure.”

“You weren’t sure…of what?” Lute asked cautiously. He didn’t know if wanted the answer.

But she still loved him. They were still a team, hiding out here in this giant closet from all the other Velras. Nothing else could matter as much as that.

“I wasn’t sure if you’d be Avowed or not.” Jessica reached for his knee and squeezed it. “Growing up assuming I was—all that endless training and preparing, and then…it was gone. I hated myself. I hated myself for years. I couldn’t let it happen to you. If you didn’t know, you couldn’t be hurt like that. If you didn’t know, and something wonderful happened, it could only be a blessing for you.”

Lute’s chest felt tight. So it was a lie then. She thought maybe I could be…but she told me never. My whole life was built on that lie.

Her face was a mess from the crying.

She thought she would be Avowed. Aulia designed her to be one. Trained her. Told her she would be strong.

And then she wasn’t.

Then she was the assistant.

Lute knew these things about his mother. But in his eyes, she was somehow above them. It had never occurred to him until this second that she might be thinking about his life and future this way.

I thought we were the same. Me, her, and Dad. But that’s not right. They grew up…like everyone else I know. Like Avowed.

Not like me.

“You understand, don’t you?” Jessica said in a rush. “You’re old enough to know. I couldn’t raise you like the rest of them. I couldn’t let you live that way, training for a future that might not happen. I wanted you to have everything I didn’t. School, hobbies, a childhood, no fear at all about disappointing me…you could never disappoint me…and then, maybe, it would come to you like this. As a gift. And I never imagined…S. Baby, you’re going to be an S-rank! For the rest of your life, nobody can take that from you.”

“Oh,” said Lute, still feeling like someone had stolen the last few crumbs of solid ground out from beneath him. “Mom, I know you love me, but this is—”

A lie. Wrong. I don’t know what the right thing would have been since you only thought I might be an Avowed, but you got it wrong. The whole world hurt me every day because of your lie.

But she was so relieved. She’d been crying all afternoon…because she wasn’t afraid for him anymore. He couldn’t say something that harsh.

“I really wanted to be the best harpist in the world,” he said softly. “I was proud of that. I wanted that.”

You made me want that.

“You can be that, can’t you?” Jessica said, beaming at him. “You can be that and so much more now.”

Lute’s phone, on the little table beside the plate of brownies, buzzed and he snatched it.

Dad?

It wasn’t. Of course. Somehow Miyo had gotten hold of his phone number, and she wanted to know what he was about to do.

“They’re so wrapped up in themselves they can’t even imagine I might not care about Chainer,” Lute said. They assume everyone is just as obsessed with the class as they are.”

Jessica took a deep breath. “Don’t get your hopes up, but Grandma might consider giving it to you. She wants to put the most powerful family member possible in front of the Artonans, and Hazel—”

Lute snorted. “It doesn’t matter if she’s considering me or not.” He was still staring at his text messages, willing a new one to appear. “I made a list. Chainer’s not that high on it. I know there are some positive things about it, but the fact that it’s held mostly by people I hate shoves it way down in the rankings.”

“Lute, you don’t hate your grandmother.”

He considered that. “I think it’s really close to hate,” he said. “What’s hate, but with less passion? Hate but in a way that’s less, ‘I want you to die,’ and more, ‘I want to never see or think about you again’? Because that’s the feeling.”

A fair feeling, he thought, considering how she treated them.

Jessica blinked.

“I traded into Shaper of Water,” Lute said. “Mom, I wanted to talk to you about Rabbit and Adjuster and see if we could to swap to one of those without Corin’s help? Or with it. He seems extremely eager to help. I’m not sure I want to. I’m not ready to make the decision. I think I need a professional class and career counselor. A lot of my classmates have them.”

“Shaper?” Jessica said. “S-rank Shaper? I know you used to admire them, but…”

“I know, I know,” Lute said quickly. “It’s probably not the perfect thing. I just need time to figure it out. If you get good with it at S, you don’t really know what you’ll be summoned for or how often. And I assume I’ll want to be talented with whatever class I have? But there’s something about it. Even holding it feels better than Wright did.”

“Don’t affix until we’ve figured this out together!” Jessica said quickly. “I think you might change your mind. Even if you take Chainer it’s not like you have to stay around the family members you don’t like. Your grandmother would expect you to drop out of school and study under her, but—”

“No.”

“But you wouldn’t have to,” she continued. “You can still go to school wherever you want. You can play your harp. Don’t make any hasty decisions.”

“I’m not going to.” Lute reached for another brownie. “But there’s nothing Grandma can say that will convince me to take Chainer.”

His mom blinked again. Her smile turned a little strained. “I know I never encouraged you to like wordchains. In fact, I discouraged you from it because I didn’t want anyone to take too much of an interest if you seemed good at them. But they are useful. And the safety…Lute, it’s a class that will never have to worry about…about being sacrificed in some awful foreign battle or—”

“But there’s Rabbit, Mom.”

“Chainer can make you as much money as Rabbit, if that’s what you’re worried about.”

“No,” said Lute. He paused. “I hope she does want to give it to me. So I can tell her I don’t even care about her special, mysterious class. I guess maybe she could convince me to take it if she gave me Libra…no not even then. Maybe if she gave me the Healer.”

He was being a touch dramatic. He’d heard someone say once that Libra, with all of its magical modifications and comforts, was worth more than everything else Aulia owned combined.

“The Healer?” Jessica said. “What do you—?”

“The rejuvenation person.” Lute couldn’t stop the anger from slipping into his voice. “The one she’s got the deal with. Him. I’ll take him, and she can give me any class at all.”

“Lute, it’s important to think seriously about this kind of thing. I know the family hasn’t been friendly to you. In general. But you can’t throw the rest of your future away just to spite them.”

Lute swallowed his last bite. “I am being serious. Mom, I know we don’t talk about it, but you’re not even on the rejuve list. You’re not important enough for that? You’re not important enough, but Keiko is? I’ve met her twice! She doesn’t even like the family. And Cady? Cady gets to stay young, and she and Hugh are the ones who…who…”

Who talk about you like that in front of Hazel. Who tell her that you pick up garbage for the other members of the family.

“They were trying to climb in the car with me when I left Dad’s!” he said instead. “I had to yell for the watcher on duty to get them to leave me alone, like a kid in a public safety video!”

Jessica’s expression had gone blank.

Lute gripped the velvet arms of the chair. “We deserve better. You deserve better. I don’t know if I’m going to like being Avowed. I can’t imagine it. It’s like someone else’s life has landed on me and squashed my plans into dust. But even if I hate having the System in my head, even if I can’t ever leave this tiny little trap of a country, the one good thing is that there are more Healers here. And as an S-rank I can eventually get money with our without Aulia’s help. By the time I’m out of school, I can get some kind of job. And I’m going to make sure I don’t have to come to dinner here in the mansion a hundred years from now and look at Grandma’s face and wonder why she gets to be here when you and Dad aren’t.”

He’d used up all the oxygen in his lungs on that little speech. He drew in a breath.

“I didn’t know you were worried about that kind of thing,” Jessica said in a strange voice. “Not at your age.”

“You’re my mom,” Lute said. “And Dad’s my…he’s Dad.”

She folded her hands over her lap.

“All right,” she said after a minute. She cleared her throat and switched to her all-business. “We’ll talk this all through before you have to make a decision. When both of us are just a little calmer. When your grandmother gets back home with Hazel.”

Lute slumped in his seat and sighed. “It’s been a long day.”

“It sounds like it. Did Hugh really—?”

“He did. Like a crazy man.” Lute shook his head. “And Cady was coming with him! What were they going to do? Beat me up in the back of the car and force me to affix right then and there?”

Jessica frowned. She tapped a polished nail against the side table. “I think we’ll have a party tonight.”

“What?” Lute said.

“The whole family. Even the more distant relations. Maybe some friends as well. Lydia.

Lydia? It took Lute a second to place the name, and when he did, he was surprised. “Orpheus’s mother?”

Hugh’s ex-wife. The S-rank Strength Brute he had divorced for Cady.

“Yes, I don’t think Hazel’s parents will have any time to bother you tonight with her around.”

“Do I have to go to this party?” Lute asked.

“You do,” his mother said. “The point is to surround ourselves with people in order to prevent incidents. Until your grandmother gets back from the TC and reminds everyone of their duties to the family. It should be late tonight. Besides, who else would the party be for on this particular night?”

Me?

“Well, yes,” said Jessica. There was a glint in her eye that Lute had never seen before. “I seem to remember making you attend two Coming of Age parties for one of your cousins. Wouldn’t you like to have one of your own?”

******

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“Did you have horses at your party?” Alden interrupted, grinning.

“Horses?” Haoyu asked.

They were both sitting on the rug now. Alden was petting it. Lute didn’t think he realized he was doing it.

“Do you seriously think I had horses running in circles around the mansion just to remind Hazel of her bizarre taste in party entertainment?”

“Did you?”

“No! It was very last minute. And honestly it wasn’t fun. I was tired and stressed, and people I didn’t like were flooding me with handshakes, advice, and demands. They were all so fake…” He shook his head. “Jessica asked me what kind of party I wanted, and I had no idea. I was like, ‘A fourteen and a half birthday cake? Music. Some candles maybe. Dad to come.”

He grunted. “Not that I actually said that last part out loud. Mom’s good at putting on events, though. Sometimes Aulia’s just in the mood for one, so she throws something together. She had an Adjuster come and blast the lawn with spells so it felt like summer, and there were food trucks parked all over the place. Street musicians took turns playing from one of the balconies. Nobody beat me up or Swayed me into affixing, so I guess it worked.”

“We should throw you another one,” said Haoyu, watching with interest as Alden stroked the fluffy rug. “So you can actually enjoy it. Coming of Age parties are supposed to be fun for the person having them.”

“I’m going to be sixteen in January.”

“So?”

“I’m too old. I don’t want one.”

“I want a birthday party,” Alden said. “I’ve just decided. I’m having one. My last one was memorable, but I would like to make the next one more run-of-the-mill.”

“What did you do for your last one?” Haoyu gave the rug an experimental pet of his own.

“I picked all the vegetables I was sure weren’t poisonous from the greenhouse at the lab, and I made something that looked like seven-layer dip out of them. Then I put on a Hawaiian shirt and ate it on the roof with Kibby. I taught her about candles and she enhanced the tradition. Everyone gets to take turns blowing them out.”

Lute exchanged a look with Haoyu.

“That sounds…peaceful?” Lute suggested.

“I thought I did a pretty good job. I sang. We looked out at the corrupted grasslands of Thegund and talked about whether or not the lab lights would last through the long night. I did some parkour.”

“You guys both need normal birthdays bad,” Haoyu murmured.

“I didn’t sing at mine,” said Lute. “But I did play a song.”

******

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Lute Velra had a little voice in his head that told him to be careful about revenge.

He didn’t feel great about how it had gone last time. A couple of people had cried.

He stared really hard at an accordion player and ate onion rings out of a paper cone. He was hoping the mix of his apparently intense focus on the musician, his smelly breath, and the fact that he’d hidden his name tag and put on a ball cap would protect him from his relatives for at least a few minutes.

This party was full of some of the most blistering family interactions and vitriolic backbiting he’d ever seen or heard. None of it directed at him, of course. Goodness no!

Everyone was his friend tonight.

The Roman supporters were spoiling for a re-match, and they would take up Lute’s banner whether he had agreed to have a banner or not! And the Hazel supporters were losing ground, but they still kept finding time to swing by and let him know that Chainer was just the worst. Really. He’d had no preparation. If Aulia decided to offer it to him—not that she would ever do such a thing!—he was going to struggle and find it so terribly dull and didn’t he want to take another class?

Any other one? They would go kidnap some innocent fifteen-year-old for him and deliver them tied up like a present if he wanted.

Grandma and Hazel are going to come home to this.

I don’t think she has tears inside her. She probably weeps acid. But still…I think I should have said no to this lunacy. We could have hidden out with someone trustworthy. Mom was just mad about them trying to strongarm me.

Then his phone rang. He started to reach for his pocket, then he stopped.

“System, can you send that to my interface?”

He had to start learning the features.

A familiar face appeared, floating in a circular window at the top center of his field of vision.

Hazel’s brown hair was braided into a crown. She was wearing a black dress with a white collar and cuffs. She was standing in a toilet stall at the TC.

Lute recognized the tile work on the wall behind her because he’d recently blown his nose in front of it for a while.

“Lute, hello,” she said. She sounded very professional, like this call was a meeting they’d scheduled ages ago. “Congratulations! My phone is full of news about what’s happened. This is wonderful. Grandma and I are so excited for you.”

“Thank you,” Lute said in an equally professional voice. He’d had a couple of hours worth of practice thanking people when he didn’t mean it tonight. He was all warmed up.

“I hear you’ve got Shaper of Water. That’s a wonderful class. You’ve always liked…swimming.”

Little fumble there.

“Thank you,” Lute said again.

“I was thinking…this is so crazy,” said Hazel. She licked her lips. “At work today, there was a woman who reminded me of Aunt Jessica—”

“Are you really going there?”

“No!” Hazel said quickly. “Listen, this is important. There was a woman who reminded me of Aunt Jessica…because of her personality. She was having a hard day today actually, and I helped her come to terms with it. I do that sometimes when I’m visiting our friends there. I’m sorry I can’t tell you more. But I wanted you to know, she reminded me of your mother and you, and I thought…it’s terrible that I never apologized to you. I shouldn’t have said those things to you—”

“Which time?” Lute interrupted.

“What?”

“Which things are you apologizing for saying?”

Say them aloud to me right now. Any of them. Any one of the thousand things. I dare you.

“…you know, you were right when you yelled at me at my little Ascot party. I was so immature. I should have apologized, but instead I said what I did. I don’t think of you and Aunt Jessica that way. I never have. I was just upset and confused.”

A toilet flushed in one of the neighboring stalls.

“Thank you, Hazel,” said Lute. “For apologizing like this. See you when you get home.”

The helicopter should be there at the TC waiting on them now.

What’ll it be? Half an hour maybe if they’re slow. That’s enough time.

He hung up. He found his mother laughing behind a food truck with Orpheus’s mother, Lydia. Hugh’s ex-wife was a brunette with a very noticeable hourglass figure. Lute knew at once that he’d never seen her around the house before because he would have remembered her. She was striking. Magnetic in a way that made him think high Appeal, though that wasn’t necessarily the case.

If he remembered correctly, Lydia was a Strength Brute. One who’d gone through one of the Apex leveling programs…so she’d wanted to be a superhero or something like it at one point.

Cady was also extremely curvy and brunette. Lute wondered if Hugh had a type.

“Mom, I’m going to be in the formal living room for a while. I’ll take Aimi with me.” She was around here somewhere, taste-testing the food.“Grandma and Hazel are back.”

“I know. Your grandmother texted.” She checked one of her smart watches. “Is currently texting, in fact.”

“I’ll be in there when they get back to the house.”

“You aren’t enjoying the party?”

“There’s a song I want to play. I need to warm up.”


******


Lute left Aimi to enjoy a tray full of fried food and skewered meat while she guarded the door to the living room.

He practiced the song until he was sure of every note, and then he kept playing, trying to breathe some life into it. It had been a while.

He didn’t have long to wait.

When Aulia swept in with a delighted smile on her face and Hazel scuttled in after her with a strained one on hers, the room was dark. The only light came from the windows and from the lamp over the sheet music.

“Hello, Hazel,” said Lute from his seat at the piano. He didn’t look away from the music. “Do you remember the name of this song?”

The name tag floating over his shoulder said, “Lute - The Least of the Velras.”

He doubted his grandmother even remembered saying it, but the idea would still come across.

“This is Gymnopédie 1,” said Lute, his fingers delicate on the keys. “It’s my mother’s favorite song. It’s almost painfully beautiful. And every time I play it…I have to think of tissues in trash cans. Thank you for that.”

He finally looked up at her. His fingers kept moving.

“Don’t worry about the Ascot party. It was so long ago. You were only fourteen.” He paused. “Oh. Wait. That’s the same age I am now.”


*******
Intermission

******


Small, wet feet slapping on the decking as Lute chased after a beachball. A bare adult foot stopping it for him. An anklet covered in sparkling charms that made him pause for a curious examination.

And a fragment of the anklet-wearer’s conversation with another family member, overheard but filed away in the back of his mind. A grown-up artifact on a day filled with more interesting things for a young child to think about.

“Everyone thinks Aulia’s attempts to find signs and omens within magical occurrences is a weakness, the one crack in an otherwise indomitable nature. They’re wrong.”

A gasp. “Aunt Hikari! You don’t really believe in it, too, do—”

“It doesn’t matter,” said Hikari. “That’s what nobody seems to understand. It doesn’t matter if such signs exist. It doesn’t matter if Aulia reads them correctly. She thinks they do and that it is possible to interpret them, and that frees her from one of the bonds that hold most of us back.”

“I don’t understand.”

“Fear. And the inertia it breeds.” She nudged the ball toward Lute. “Once Aulia is sure magic is pointing her down a path, she takes it. Her own certainty in the supernatural provenance of her course reduces the obstacles in her way. So she tends to arrive at her destination when by all rights she shouldn’t.”

Stubby fingers wrapped themselves around damp vinyl. Lute stood and turned back toward his pool.

“There aren’t many people strong enough to halt the momentum of someone who believes she has deciphered the voice of her god.”

******

Aulia Velra stood smiling beside the piano bench, her hair shining a deep honey color in the lamplight as Lute finished the song.

“Lute, my dove,” she said. “Aren’t you spectacular tonight! I didn’t realize you’d kept up with the piano at all. I thought you and Angela were more of an exclusive couple.”

Startled, he looked at her.

She knows the name of my harp? He was sure he’d said it in front of her a few times. But he would have bet the price of Angela that she wouldn’t have bothered to remember.

The name tag that said “Least of the Velras” was floating beside his head for a reason.

“I haven’t really kept up with it,” he said. “It’s just not that hard to go back to a song you used to spend so much time on.”

Mmm,” Aulia said. “Congratulations. I am truly overjoyed to learn that all my heartache over your future was wasted.”

“I don’t believe for one second that your heart ached for me.”

She touched his cheek. This close, she smelled faintly of jasmine.

“I know you don’t,” she said. “That’s my fault, isn’t it? I’ve been gifted with more talented young grandchildren than I can keep up with. That doesn’t mean I don’t love every last one of you. But sometimes I turn around and realize you’ve gotten so big in the last few blinks, and I wasn’t paying attention.”

She sounds sincere. How unsettling.

“Grandma,” said Hazel, “you’re not going to—”

Aulia’s eyes didn’t leave Lute’s face.

“Hazel, sweetheart. I know the difficulties you’ve been facing. And you should know, your position in my heart and in this family could never be in jeopardy. You may be the most uniquely gifted person on all of Anesidora. You will be a Chainer.”

Hazel straightened. There was just a hint of smugness tinging the relief on her face.

“Let’s go for a little trip,” said Aulia. “Just the three of us. I’ll drive.”

In the ensuing moment of silence, the noise from the party filtered into the room.

“You can drive?” Hazel and Lute both said at exactly the same time.

They frowned at each other.

“Good grief, you two,” said Aulia, flipping her hair over her shoulder. “I’m the reason Anesidorans drive on the righthand side. Just because I haven’t done it in a while doesn’t mean I’ve forgotten how.”

“But…how long has it been?” Lute asked. He had never seen his grandmother operate a vehicle.

“I got my license renewed fifteen or so years ago. So it was just the other day! We’ll take the Bentley.”

She drove them to the apartment. It was a quiet trip except for one of the local news streams playing through the car’s speakers. They were talking about upgrades that had recently When Aulia pulled up to the building and passed the keys off to a valet, she raised an eyebrow at the two of them.

“Good job,” said Lute. “We are alive.”

“Grandma, can you teach me how to drive?” Hazel asked.

“Corin can teach you,” said Lute. “I know, because he drove your parents over to my dad’s place today so that they could all accost me.”

She glared at him. “Your da—”

“I’m not interested in hearing the two of you bicker,” Aulia said, making the tossing gesture at the building’s doorman that she used to automatically send argold tips through the System. “You’re family. Act like it.”

Should I start speaking a language Hazel can’t understand? That would be very familial, as far as this family goes.

When they reached the penthouse, it was empty. Aulia’s residences were rarely empty. There was always some family member enjoying the luxuries. Maybe everyone was just back at the party, but Lute thought it was more likely she’d called ahead and cleared the place out.

She led the way into the apartment, kicking off her shoes and dropping the Artonan-style widesleeved coat she’d been wearing on the foot of a chaise lounge. The lights, operated by a command from her interface, came on then dimmed. And the giant windows framing two sides of the apartment’s main living area turned opaque, blocking the view of the skyline.

“Sit wherever you like,” Aulia said, tying her hair back with a ponytail holder she’d pulled from her pants pocket. Blue tattoos peeked out of the sleeveless cream-colored top she was wearing—the back of the shoulder, her chest, her waist.

Having seen her in a swimsuit, Lute knew the geometric patterns interlocked, making a network over the left side of her torso. The newer ones were smaller than the older ones, but just as intricate.

One for every Velra who wore one of their own.

“Let’s have a little tutoring session,” said Aulia. “A special one. We’re going to learn a wordchain together. The name’s nice. <<The Eye of a Thousand Instants>>.”

Hazel perched herself on the center of the sofa.

<<I’ve never heard of that one?>> she said in Artonan. <<What kind…?>>

“An old one,” said Aulia. “So old it’s decrepit, you might say.”

Hazel drew in a breath. “But if it’s like that…it won’t…and won’t we get in troub—?”

“I know what I’m doing,” Aulia replied. “And why would we get in trouble? If one of you forges half of the chain, I will make sure the other half is forged to meet you. It’s simple. Let’s see if we can’t wake it up.”

“I haven’t agreed to this,” Lute said. “I don’t understand what you’re talking about, and I don’t really do wordchains.”

“Ha!” said Hazel in a vindicated tone, as if he’d just confessed to eating boogers instead of not fooling around with the family hobby.

“And what does this one even do? Maybe I don’t want to see a thousand instants.”

“It’s nothing that grand,” said Aulia. “If you get it right, it will give you long distance vision for a moment. There are other chains with similar effects. This one was just designed in a way that makes it unusual…and undesirable to certain people in decision-making positions. So you won’t find it in any book. Hazel won’t find it in any of her books either.

“Actually, it’s not in any of my books. It’s that far removed from the world we work in.”

Hazel gasped.

Lute looked between the two of them. They’re so melodramatic. I think they enjoy it.

“It’s a special acquisition of mine,” Aulia said. “And the words and signs aren’t very difficult, Lute, so Hazel’s advantage will be slightly reduced. It’s uniquely suited for a little friendly competition.”

“What’s the other half do?”

“You won’t have to pay it.” Her smile widened. “I took care of Hazel’s debts for the chains she cast on her Coming of Age. It wouldn’t be fair if I didn’t do the same for you.”

Coming of Ages, thought Lute. Plural.

He went to the bathroom and texted his mother. [Grandma wants me to learn some ancient vision wordchain. It’s a competition thing with Hazel.]

[Good luck! You’ve got this!] Jessica texted back.

Not what I was getting at. He texted Aimi. [Grandma wants me to learn some ancient wordchain. It’s a competition thing with Hazel. This isn’t some kind of trap is it?]

After a few seconds, Aimi replied, [Run! Run for your life! :) Just kidding. She does this kind of thing all the time. Cousin versus cousin battles make us all feel even more loving toward each other as we grow up.]

Lute sighed.

[Spending hours watching you fumble around in Artonan is a really inconvenient murder method, don’t you think?] Aimi added.

[I didn’t think she was going to kill me. But why does she have to act so spooky about it!?]

[Vibes.]

Well, it’s fine. Not like I even have to try the chain seriously if I don’t want to.

He was sure this whole plot was designed to boost Hazel’s confidence and reassure her.

Yeah, that’s it. Here, Hazel. I know you’re feeling bad about being sixteen, and half the family is mad about Roman. Crush Lute at your favorite game so everyone still knows you’re above him.

The wordchain Aulia taught them was, as she’d said, simple. Simple-ish anyway. Twenty words. Some gestures. They weren’t allowed to practice everything all at once. Instead they had to do it in out-of-order sections.

“When you decide you’re ready to try a full cast, let me know,” she said brightly after she was done teaching. “Only one attempt each!”

“Only one?” Hazel asked.

She seemed displeased with this wordchain. She kept looking at Aulia and saying, “That’s it?” with regard to the gestures and words. Like she wanted it to be harder.

The translations for the words that had appeared on Lute’s interface indicated that the wordchain would do what Aulia said. It was about seeing really far anyway. He’d written the words phonetically in English with notes on pronunciation quirks out to the side. Aulia’s chaining had a pleasant chanting rhythm to it as well, and that was helping.

Artonan—bad.

Songs—good.

Hand gestures—it wasn’t like playing the harp, but he was pretty decent at getting his fingers to do what he told them to when he told them to.

Hazel, apparently worried about giving him any advantages, was refusing to practice out loud. She was just moving her lips silently and staring off into space.

Lute discarded the page on which he’d written the definitions of the words, because trying to remember what it all meant was unnecessary, wasn’t it? Just make the sounds right and convey the idea.

Hey! Give me some long distance vision for a second. You’ll be paid back.

No reason to be all formal about it.

But be sincere, he decided.

Did wordchains care about sincerity? He doubted it. Hazel could do them after all. But they sounded like they were supposed to be sincere, so he’d claw an advantage where he could.

Hazel was definitely going to beat him at this strange little game Aulia had decided to invite the least of the Velras to participate in now that he was looking less least.

This is quieter than the party was anyway.

When he thought he had it memorized, he waited. No way was he going first. He wanted to make sure he saw Hazel try it.

She was glancing at him, too, as if she was thinking the same thing.

I can outlast you, thought Lute. Because I don’t want to prove myself as much as you do.

He grinned at her.

“On the off chance that you both succeed, the first person to do it successfully wins,” Aulia said from where she was typing on a laptop nearby.

Hazel leaped up. “I’ll go first!”

“What are we winning anyway?” Lute asked, not moving an inch.

“You can pick the menu for the next month,” said Aulia. “Anything you want. How does that sound?”

“With Kabir?”

“Unless we’ve gotten another chef.”

That wasn’t a bad reward. Hazel hated spicy food. Lute hadn’t gotten to eat Kabir’s version of Jamaican jerk chicken in forever.

He still let Hazel have her attempt first. Aulia took her over to the windows and removed the opacity from them. She had Hazel look out over the skyline.

“Begin,” she said.

To Lute’s surprise, his grandmother started casting what appeared to be the opposite half of the wordchain just seconds after Hazel started hers.

So much for listening to Hazel for pronunciation tips.

It sounded like a mess with both of them chanting it.

Hazel finished. Aulia was watching her closely. She suddenly stopped casting mid-word and let her hands drop.

“You did very well, dear. Your casting was flawless,” said Aulia.

Hazel’s hands were clenched at her sides.

“You always take such offense when this happens. Relax. Everything will come to you in its own time.”

She looked back at Lute. “Are you ready?”

“Sure,” he said, pushing himself up off the couch. “Why not?”

He stepped over to join her by the window. “What am I supposed to look at?”

“Whatever you like. Something in the distance is best. It will only last a moment, so why waste it?”

“If it works, you mean,” Hazel muttered.

Lute fixed his eyes on the farthest point he could see from this height. Past streets and rooftops and spires, past Nautilus Needle, to a small light in the distance on the water.

He performed the wordchain, tuning out Aulia’s simultaneous performance with ears used to ignoring some of the more offensive members of the youth orchestra.

The words were just sounds to him. The hand motions were a dance that went in time to the song he was making. He tried to sincerely want to borrow something so that he could see the pinprick of light out there.

He didn’t feel anything special happening. There was no headache or psychic event. Just him doing the thing as well as a tedious night of practice would allow for. He pronounced the last syllable.

And then…

The thing he’d assumed was a boat wasn’t. He could see it clearly, as if darkness and distance didn’t exist. It was the moon. Not the real moon, but a big gleaming moon nonetheless, brought to life by someone’s illusion magic and hanging over the water like a giant lantern. A man and woman bundled up in coats and earmuffs suddenly appeared from what should have been the dark side of their giant moon. They were arm-in-arm, flying around it slowly.

“That’s got to be the most Apex date that’s ever happened in the history of dating!” Lute exclaimed. “Which one of them is doing the flying and which has the illusion spell?”

He blinked, and he couldn’t see it anymore.

He stared out at the city and the tiny light over the water that was no longer a mystery. “Wordchains can do that?” he asked in surprise. “That was really Longsight level—”

There was a thump behind him that caught his attention, and he turned to see Hazel hopping on one bare foot. She was clutching the other and grimacing.

Did she just kick the sofa?

He said, “Kicking things is its own punishm—”

“Shut up!” Hazel spat. “Just shut up!”

“I see now.” There was something in Aulia’s voice that made Lute forget his cousin. One of her hands was pressed to the window. She closed her eyes. “Or rather I don’t.”

Her expression was soft. She turned to face Lute unerringly, even with her eyes shut.

“So this is what I’ve been blind to.”


******


It was four days later when his mother woke him in the night.

He struggled his way out from under the sheets, adrenaline flooding him at the urgency in his mother’s voice, and the tablet he’d fallen asleep with came to life, showing the last website he’d been viewing.

Class and career counseling services. He’d found one that seemed cool. He was going to ask his mom to set up an appointment. He wanted to talk about Shaper and Rabbit. And Adjusters with illusion abilities—the moon date was just a little too striking to get out of his head, so he wanted to find out more about the path that would get him that kind of spell.

“What is it?” he asked, staring into Jessica’s eyes. “What’s wrong?”

“You need to get dressed,” she whispered. “Don’t be too loud. This is your chance.”

“Huh?” he whispered back.

She was holding out clothes for him. Jeans and a t-shirt with Beethoven’s face on it. “Hurry,” she said. “Your grandmother’s waiting. We don’t want her to change her mind.”

“Is she still…you know. Can she see again?”

Lute did not like that weirdass wordchain she’d taught them at all. It wasn’t anything like the ones he’d ever heard of, even living in a house full of Chainers. The bad portion seemed way out of line with the good one, and wordchains were supposed to be equal weren’t they? Was that one glimpse of a superhuman date night worth days of blindness?

What it did seemed off in the first place, and Hazel was all like, I bet you feel smug, but don’t think something like that is going to get you any respect from people who matter!

No wonder it was some kind of forgotten antique.

“She’s fine,” Jessica said. She went to stand by Angela Aubergine. “Dress. Quickly. Don’t make too much noise. If the others wake up they’ll interfere.”

“Interfere with what?” Lute pulled the shirt over his head and started yanking on the jeans. A pair of sneakers and socks were already on the bed.

“Chainer,” Jessica whispered. She was staring at the harp. “You’re getting it.”

Lute paused with a sock in his hand.

“I don’t want it. I told Grandma I didn’t. I told her before she could even ask me outright if I would be interested.”

Actually, he had said something more panicky about crazy old Avowed doing creepy wordchains they’d probably gotten from the kinds of wizards who had bodies decomposing under their beds.

But he was sure the “no thank you, I’ll have none of that” had come through loud and clear.

Jessica let out a single puff of laughter. “Yes. You surprised her. In a positive way, maybe. You do..it’s a good thing if you can stand up for yourself a little bit in this family. We have some strong personalities.”

Lute wasn’t putting on his socks.

“I said no. She can’t make me take a class I don’t want. I’ll just…I’ll affix Shaper even if I’m not ready.”

He wasn’t sure he was brave enough to do it. He really wanted time.

His mother looked back at him. Her face was suddenly very composed. “Lute, just talk to her. Chainer’s a good class. And I think…I’m sure she’ll make it worth your while.”

“If I do this, then can we go to the career counselor tomorrow?”

Jessica didn’t answer for a moment. “Yes,” she said. “We can do that.”

“It isn’t far from Dad’s place,” Lute added. “I might stop by again. He didn’t answer my voicemails.”

He stuffed his feet into the shoes, then he followed his mother through the mansion, down the curving staircase into the White Parlor, through it and down a hall to Aulia’s office.

Jessica stopped outside the door.

“You’re not going in with me?” Lute hissed.

“Why? Are you scared of your grandma?”

“No.” A little.

She leaned over and kissed him on the cheek. “I love you, baby. More than anything else in the whole world. You can do this. You’re going to be great.”

Now Lute felt embarrassed for making her say something like that before a simple conversation with his own grandmother. He stepped through the door.

Aulia was at her desk. Four globes—one Earth and each of the Artonas—stood on wooden pedestals behind her. A fluffy gray cat was sitting in her lap, purring as she stroked it.

Persia had been dropped off by Orpheus a few years ago. Lute wasn’t sure whose cat she was officially, but her heart belonged to the housekeeper.

Aulia stood and set her on the floor. She stepped out from behind the desk. “Well?” she said, holding her arms out and spinning in a slow circle. “What’s the verdict?”

Teal sleeveless mock turtleneck. Batiked harem pants. Low-top sneakers. Large wooden hoop earrings and a wooden armlet. Her hair was in a French braid.

“Early 1970s Universalian,” said Lute. “They wanted to look Artonan but cooler.”

“Bingo!” said Aulia, putting a hand on her hip. “They also wanted to look as different as possible from those fogeys who were hankering for a return to the 50s.”

“I don’t want Chainer. Give it to Hazel.”

His grandmother heaved a dramatic sigh and flopped back down into her rolling chair. She crossed one leg over the other.

“You know, Lute,” she said, “I’m sure the Artonans could tell me if Hazel was an S-rank. Or they could have told me you were. Maybe not the minute you were born, but surely before you were this age. If the System knows, how could they not? But they have very stubbornly refused to give me any information like that. In fact, they get ridiculously offended if I ask. They seem to think having such answers might lead me to rear young minds improperly. A rather backward point of view considering how all of this has gone.”

If the Artonans had told her about me years ago, would I have spent all my time locked away with her and Hazel? Lute shuddered.

“Jessica…” Aulia frowned. “Your mother seems to have held a similar sort of opinion without me realizing. If she had acted differently, if she had given me some inkling that you might be Avowed…you would’ve faced less trouble. I would have insisted on teaching you. As you aged, I would have noticed you were above average, I’m sure. Some children surpass others through effort even though they lack talent, as your mother did. But when talent is present it always shows itself eventually. Cream rises, as they say.”

She arched a brow at him. “To be frank with you, Lute, I haven’t given up on Hazel achieving S-rank. So I hope you’ll take it as a compliment that I wish to give you the position over her. You haven’t had any of the training I prefer to give our new Chainers before they’re presented to the people of the Triplanets, but as your mother points out, you’ve proven you’re capable in other ways. You speak two foreign languages, you are accustomed to long hours of practice with your harp, and your casting of such a rusty chain was fateful. Don’t you think? I selected that one because I knew it would be. Magic has so obviously chosen your cousin, I was blind to the fact that it has also chosen you.”

Yes. That was a completely sane way to decide how valuable family members are.

“An S at fourteen,” Aulia said. “Do you know how many people have called to congratulate me on you? And there have already been tasteless questions about your origins. I would expect a smidge of jealousy and misdirected anger from fools and their mediocre children for the next few years. Take whatever idiotic accusations they throw your way as compliments. And, of course, you’re my grandson. You’ll suit Chainer well.”

Lute swallowed. “Are you saying that the family won’t help me get any other class?”

“Does it sound like I’m saying that?”

Aulia opened her desk drawer and took out a deck of tarot cards. They had been in there for as long as Lute could remember. When he was little, he’d asked her if she believed in them, and she’d said of course not. They were just useful for putting her thoughts in order. Only an idiot would take them seriously when real magic existed.

He still didn’t know what to make of that.

She laid the first card on the table. “What is it you think you hate about Chainer?”

“I don’t want to be around most of the people who have the class.”

“Get an apartment,” said Aulia. “Lock the door and tell the family members you don’t like to go away.”

Does she not realize that includes her?

“I don’t even understand what it is you all do when you’re summoned.”

“You’ll be wonderful at it! It’s simple. You go, you use Mass Bestowal until it doesn’t work anymore, you meet lots of people who are very excited to see an important Avowed, and then you come back home.”

“Anyone can do wordchains,” Lute said. “I know you learn extra ones—”

“Anyone can do wordchains, yes. But do you see many people running around using them as often as we do? The System will adjust you in ways that make learning them so much easier. And you’ll be able to give them to other people. Master a few highly desirable ones, and you can make a fortune of your very own if you like.”

“It…” Lute hesitated, “…Chainer doesn’t feel very much like magic.”

Aulia looked up from the Ten of Swords. “What?”

“Grandma, if I’m going to have magic—” after thinking I couldn’t for so long, “—I’d rather it do something more obviously magical.”

An illusion of the moon. Flight. A swimming pool’s worth of water obeying his command. Even something like Roman’s new lost item finding skill.

“I have no idea what you’re talking about right now,” Aulia said. “In a couple of seconds, I could pass you a chain that would make you as strong as an ox. What’s not magical about that?”

Lute shrugged. “It’s just how I feel right now. Chainer sounds okay, but it’s not my favorite. If you’ll help me get other classes, that’s great. If not, I’ll take Shaper of Water.”

No thanks. I haven’t enjoyed being a Velra of Great Worth for the past few days. I’ll make my own way.

He felt good saying it.

When his grandmother didn’t answer, he decided it was fine for him to declare the meeting over himself. He turned to leave.

“I’ve heard you claimed you wouldn’t take Chainer unless I gave you Libra. Or Horatio. Don’t you have expensive tastes?”

The bitterness stirred. Lute was afraid if he turned around, he’d yell at her. And he didn’t actually want to make her that mad.

Aulia was the ultimate authority in his life and, more importantly, his mother’s. She always had been. Even if he could get an apartment and lock her out of it…it would be a while before he was out of school and able to work. It would be a while before he had the resources to completely sever ties without risking things that mattered more to him than his own pride.

“You can have Horatio.”

Lute spun. “What?”

Aulia’s smile was gone. “Imagine. Asking me for a whole person. A Healer. I almost admire you for it.”

She set aside the deck. “You say Chainer is ‘okay’ with you, so you don’t actually dislike the class that much. That’s enough. You’ll see its benefits once you have it in hand. You can’t have the entirety of Horatio, though, no matter how…interesting I find the request. You can have one hundred and forty years of youth restoring treatments for whomever you like, whenever you’d like. A decade of rejuvenation for every year of your own life. It’s not like his talents control things on a literal year by year level, but we can approximate the amount. What do you think?”

Lute didn’t think anything at all. His mind had gone blank.

Aulia crossed her arms over her chest and waited.

“You…” said Lute, his voice cracking. “You’re just….you’re going to give me one hundred and forty years worth of rejuvenation treatments. To do whatever I like with? When you won’t give…”

His neck was hot. Jessica might still be right outside the door. He dropped his voice to a fierce whisper. “When you won’t give Mom anything?! She does everything for you. She’s the hardest working member of the entire family. And just because I got an S—”

“An early S,” said Aulia. “A very early and auspicious S.”

“I don’t care how early it was. I don’t care if I was born with the letter tattooed on my ass!”

“Oh, you’re old enough to swear at your grandmother now. Precious.”

You monster, thought Lute. You’re an awful monster of an old lady and if there was a magic power to suck all of the youth and beauty out of your face, I’d use it on you right now.

“I’ll make my own money,” he said. “I’ll make enough to get a rejuvenator myself.”

“I’m sure you can,” said Aulia. “You’re clearly very angry, but since it’s for the sake of your mother, I won’t hold it against you. I promise, on the day you have enough money and connections to force your way onto a rejuvenator’s waiting list, I’ll applaud you. How long do you think it will be?”

Lute stared at her.

“Eight more years of school before you can work full-time. But maybe you’ll be summoned often, and that will really speed you along in terms of money and connections. Shaper of Water is so useful. If you go through a talent development program and focus on leveling it intensely to the exclusion of all else, you’ll no doubt become one of the best in the world. And maybe the Artonans will stop being so stingy with the rejuvenation skills in the first place. If they dole them out more often, then the Healers being selected right now who choose to follow that path could be at Horatio’s level in…well, he’s the same age as me.”

She sighed through her nose. “I believe you’re capable of getting there. But you have a painful and lengthy journey ahead of you. You wouldn’t believe the things some people put themselves through to get on those lists. They ruin their youths in the process of chasing youth if you ask me. Wouldn’t it be much simpler for me to—” She made a flicking gesture with her fingers, “—thump some relative who’s already had a turn or three off the list for you so that you can put whoever you like in their place?”

I’m trapped, thought Lute.

He could feel the tension in his muscles, like he was preparing to bolt.

“Why…?” he said. “Why are you pressuring me so much? Just for Chainer? Why is…?”

Why is an S rank worth this much? When only days ago I was worth nothing at all to you. When my Mom is apparently still worth nothing at all.

I hate Anesidora. I want to leave this place forever.

“Don’t feel pressured,” said Aulia calmly. “This is only a business agreement. I’m presenting you with an option you didn’t have previously. Make whatever choice you want.”

Then she swiveled her chair around to stare at the globes.

“I need time to…to think.”

“Take as much time as you like,” said his grandmother. “But…while you think, consider this: if Hazel does get an S, I’ll give the prize to her. It’s just like in our game the other night. In the event of a tie, the first to volunteer wins.”

Lute fled.

The house was dark. One of the automatic nightlights in the hall turned on as he ran from the office, casting his shadow against the walls. In the White Parlor, he found his mother sitting beside her computer on the sofa, staring down at her hands.

“Oh,” she said, giving him a shaky smile, “you caught me. I was so nervous I was just sitting here instead of working.”

He threw himself at her and grabbed her in a hug.

“What’s wrong?” Jessica asked.

“We need to leave,” said Lute in a muffled voice. “She’s awful, Mom. We need to live somewhere else.”

She stroked the back of his head. “Lute, I like it here. And I love your grandmother.”

“She doesn’t love you back.” He didn’t let go of her. He felt like if he let go of her, she would disappear. “I think…I think I might have to take Chainer.”

Her arms tightened around him.

“It’ll be all right, won’t it?” He could barely think through it. There was suddenly a ticking clock over his head, and it wasn’t the friendly ninety day clock the System had given him.

The first to volunteer wins. Hazel probably wouldn’t get S. But she might. She might any second. She was so freaking old. The System could be giving her that speech right now.

“It wasn’t…it’s not my least favorite class. And I don’t have to hang around the family just because I’m a Chainer. I can get an apartment and lock people out. I can support myself. When I was making my list, I liked the schedule. Because I could keep being a musician instead of spending all my time on Avowed stuff. I never wanted this in the first place, so any class that’s not too hard and doesn’t get me killed…that was how I was thinking the first day. That’s still a bit how I’ve been thinking. Like if I did get the right kind of Rabbit skill, it wouldn’t be that different from Chainer, would it? I only put it so low because of the cousins. That’s such a childish reason to discard a class. Maybe I actually like it fine?”

Shaper of Water was in his head. And the moon. That was dumb. Lute had lived his whole life not wanting magic at all. Now that he thought he might get it, he was getting off track.

“I did do that wordchain when Hazel couldn’t the other night. So, I’m probably not going to suck at them. And…I need to be practical. Chainer is very practical.”

He rambled on until he finally realized he was rambling on.

He was still so anxious he couldn’t feel embarrassed that he’d been hugging his mother and babbling in her ear for entirely too long. He let go of her and stood up, straightening his Beethoven shirt. “I’m making the right decision, aren’t I, Mom? It’s…I know it’s an important decision, and she’s making me rush. I hate her so freaking much. But this is still the right decision?”

Jessica leaned forward. “Well,” she said, “I want you to be happy. And I want you to be safe. And I don’t want you to have to live your life being summoned every few seconds for who knows what. I think Chainer will give you all those things, when not many other things could.”

“Yeah. I know you don’t like the Shaper idea,” Lute said.

“I think that class might get you killed one day,” said Jessica. “So you’ll have to forgive me for not being a fan. It just doesn’t feel like you to me.”

“And Rabbit’s…if I had the perfect Rabbit skill it might be great, but what if the Artonans suddenly decide they just can’t go five minutes without seeing my face?”

“It’s a cute face.”

“So they’d summon me all the time. One minute I’m in bed, the next I’m falling all over myself trying to get clothes on before someone orders me to polish their chandeliers.”

“You don’t even like cleaning your own room,” said Jessica.

“I think I’d like it a lot more if magic was involved.” Lute sighed. “But still. Chainer. It’s not bad at all.”

“It’s right for you,” she said firmly.

“You think so?”

“I truly do.”

The reassurance did make him feel better.

“Hazel’s going to lose her mind. If she really does get an S, too, I might need to hire protection. Okay. Chainer. Easy decision. I don’t know why I’m freaking out. Let me just go tell Grandma.”

He walked back to her office. Slightly less panicked.

This was fine. And he had a rough idea of what Horatio’s time cost due to his obsession with the subject. His grandmother was a hateful witch for holding it over his head, but at least he was getting a huge bonus for taking a class that his cousins were willing to kill each other for.

This Avowed nonsense is all really hard. No wonder my classmates are a bunch of lunatics.

He knocked on the door and entered.

“That didn’t take you very long.” His grandmother’s voice was pleasant. Her feet were propped on the desk and she was staring at the ceiling.

“I’ll do it,” Lute said. “I’ll take Chainer. Um…do I have to get that tattoo like everyone—?”

“The family mark is nonnegotiable.”

“And do we hire a lawyer in the morning for making the agreement about the Healer or what?”

No way was he giving her anything until he was sure she couldn’t cheat him out of that.

“You want it to be binding, don’t you?” Aulia said. “We’ll tie it into the tattoo with all the rest of it so you can be sure of my integrity.”

I’m getting that tattoo on my ass. For real. Whichever butt cheek is my least favorite.

“So when do we—?”

She smiled. “Right about…”

“When?”

“Wait for it…now.”

[Invitation from Contract Artist Rekiss-tha

House of the Southern Convocation

Palace of Unbreaking

Artona III]

[Teleport in 74s]

[Accept/Reject]

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“And so I was branded for life at the age of fourteen,” Lute said. “The next thing that happened was—”

“I don’t get to hear about the tattoo ceremony?!” Haoyu protested. “That’s the first time you went to the Triplanets!”

“But I can hardly tell you anything about it. I can’t tell you exactly where I was or what its function is. I can’t tell you all the things I agreed to or didn’t.”

“I don’t mind. You’ve left out other things and it’s still interesting. Like, you said your grandmother tested you with a wordchain but you wouldn’t tell us what it was called or what it did.”

“That’s because she had me promise not to divulge it during our little tattoo session.”

“What did the tattoo artist look like?” Haoyu asked. “Was he nice?”

She. And I don’t actually know if she was nice. She wasn’t mean to me or anything. But I wasn’t in the best frame of mind to be making character judgments. Clearly.”

“Were you high?” Alden asked.

Haoyu looked at him in surprise.

“I mean while he was getting the tattoo,” Alden clarified. “I’m not asking if he was high when he was making his decisions about his class.”

“I don’t think I was. I was relaxed in a really specific way…fine, I’ll tell you some of it.”

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Lute Velra had never expected to see one of the Triplanets in real life. When the teleport ended, his eyes were shut tight and he was thinking, Another planet! Wizards are going to look at me! Aliens are going to think things about me and talk to me! Wizard aliens! I’m getting a tattoo! Becoming an Avowed! Mom! What was the Contract Artist’s name again? How is it pronounced? I was supposed to have more time.

His eyes opened. He was breathing fast.

He was…in a parking lot. Outside of what appeared to be a stadium. A pair of giant swooping wing shapes, made of a metal that looked like hammered bronze, sheltered it.

Did the System put us in the wrong spot? he wondered. Then, madly, If it did, is this my one and only chance to run away and live in Europe under a false identity?

Reality asserted itself quickly.

The parking lot didn’t have painted spaces for cars. Instead it was covered in patterns and logograms. The air smelled peculiar. It was a sunny day.

“It’s warm,” he said. “Do you think it’s thirty degrees?”

“Probably. Though that’s not particularly hot for this area.”

Aulia started striding toward the stadium, and Lute hurried after her. A driverless cart met them halfway and carried them to their destination.

“Do they play some kind of sport here?” Lute asked as he stepped off the cart in front of a massive entrance where towering statues of Artonans holding up the edges of one of the bronze wings made a shaded area.

His grandmother laughed. “Oh, to be your age! ”

Was that a yes or a no?

Soon, he was walking into his first alien building. It looked like a conference center, but a very decorated one. Logograms everywhere. No people…

Oh, there’s one.

Lute took in the sight of the Artonan. They were wheeling something like a library cart covered in small wooden pyramids out of a nearby room.

At the sight of Lute and Aulia, the Artonan froze. And stared.

It wasn’t until they were on an elevator down to a sub level that it occurred to Lute that he was the real alien in this alien seeming place. That person was having an ordinary Artonan Monday. And then we walked by.

Maybe they were going to go home and tell their kids that they’d seen a human boy at work today.

The two of them met their Contract Artist in a hot and dim circular room full of what looked like adjustable massage tables. A trio of people in matching robes, who Lute assumed were assistants, were prepping two adjacent tables. Rekiss-tha, standing between them, took one look at Lute and said, <<This one’s too young.>>

<<He’s older than he looks,>> Aulia said easily.

“I’m fourteen.” Lute was determined not to let Aulia to do all the talking for him even if he was language limited. “In Earth years.”

Rekiss-tha had a lens that hovered in front of her left eye. Lute was assuming she got translations through it. Her wizard garb seemed unusually elaborate and very rainbow-colored.

<<Too young,>> she said again.

<<He’s been selected,>> Aulia said. <<He’ll be working for the Palace soon.>>

I will be working for a palace soon. That’s…is that good?

The tattooist grunted with obvious displeasure at this news. Then she made a fluttering gesture at Aulia. <<Fine. How shall I argue against the lesser contract when the greater is already done?>>

Aulia smiled and hopped up onto the nearest table.

Rekiss-tha beckoned Lute over. She looked at him with reddish-brown eyes. <<Fourteen. Lute. First tattoo?>>

“Yes.”

<<Aulia always brings me her family members for their first tattoo. You are interesting humans, having your own family contract. Do you want it on your face?>>

She sounded hopeful.

“No,” Lute said quickly. “No…thank you. Not my face.”

<<Where do you want it?>>

My ass.

My bum.

My butt.

Nope, none of those words were coming out. He meant them, but they would not come out.

What about rump?

Not that one either. Lute couldn’t look a wizard lady in the eye ten minutes after arriving on another planet for the first time and request a tattoo in that location. No matter how displeased he was with his grandmother.

I’m kind of afraid of Rekiss-tha, aren’t I?

There was a knot of worry in his gut. He was about to be an Avowed. She was a wizard. She could summon him.

She was probably much more trustworthy than Aulia, just based on the odds. But it was still a very strange realization that he was about to be, officially, at the Artonans’ beck and call.

Maybe Chainer really is the best choice. That boring work schedule they all seem to have is sounding comforting right about now.

Still he couldn’t let himself be entirely overwhelmed. He was going to stand up for himself. Fight the fear. Fight his Grandmother.

It’s going to last forever. It has to go in the right spot. I have to make a statement as the least of the Velras. I’m a teenager. I can say the word ass!

“I’d like it on my lower back, please.”

“Are you sure about that one, dear?” Aulia asked. “I know I didn’t give you much time to prepare. You can ponder it for a while longer.”

Lute rounded on her. “I can have my tattoo wherever I want. I think I know my own mind. Lower back is a classic location.”

She held up her hands.

“I’ve always wanted one there.”

Dammit, he thought as he climbed up on his table and accepted a cup of…maybe it was oily gray tea?…from one of the assistants. It’s fine. The lower back is close enough. I can still call it an ass tattoo.

Anyway, who would get a butt tattoo with their grandma in the room? He was making better choices.

This stuff tastes like chalk.

Sometime later, he was facedown on the table. Pleasant-smelling smoke kept wafting unerringly toward his nostrils from the incense burning all around them.

Lute was in an odd mental space. Spells had been involved and the tea, and he was simultaneously very relaxed and very focused. He was barely aware of the lines of paint Rekiss-tha was putting on his back with a delicate brush. But he was extremely aware of the words she was saying. It was as though every one of them had meanings so powerful they could obliterate everything else in their path.

<<Aulia Velra agrees to act in the best interests of the Velra family, and Lute Velra agrees not to reveal the following limitations of the Chainer class to other humans except in the course of his duties as an Avowed.>>

He was aware he was learning a whole lot about Chainer through this process. But at the same time, he couldn’t care about a such a trivial thing. What mattered was each word. Understanding it. Thinking about whether he agreed with it or not.

At one point, Rekiss-tha patted Lute on the shoulder. A ringing tone that had filled the room—when had that started?—suddenly stopped, and she said, <<How many times have I told you, Aulia? This contract is too complicated. Multiple tattoos and multiple sessions are needed for this many details. It doesn’t settle properly with so much weighing on it.>>

A long pause.

<<It’s worked fine with all the others,>> Aulia said in a dreamy voice.

<<This one is hearing your standard terms for the first time,>> said the tattooist. <<You think I can’t tell? And he doesn’t like you. You think I can’t tell?>>

<<Rekiss, you always help me out.>>

<<Contracts are sacred. Everyone has the right to make them for whatever they want. Even though the Palace wouldn’t like some of the particulars of yours if they knew them.>>

“What’s wrong?” Lute mumbled.

<<Nothing,>> said Rekiss-tha, patting his shoulder again. <<Everything. We all do our parts properly, but the contract is weak. It looks unprofessional. Aulia, this one aligns very poorly with you. He is agreeing to  your terms barely, but your minds will not be one. You are against one another again and again.>>

<<If it’s unbalanced, the stronger person wins,>> Aulia said, still distant. <<I remember you told me that once.>>

Rekiss-tha grunted. <<Foolish human,>> she said. <<How can you think you understand so much when you understand so little?>>

Then the tone came back to the room, and Lute was focusing on the words again.

What could have been hours later, he gradually came to his senses enough to realize that he was sitting in a comfy chair holding a cup of wevvi and nodding politely at one of the assistants. She was asking him if he remembered everything he’d agreed to.

“Yes,” he said. “It’s all right here in my head.”

At the front of his mind in fact. Like the information had been written there very recently in a bold hand.

“I remember arguing with my grandmother about some of the lines, even. But it also feels like it didn’t really happen.”

<<That is as it should be.>>

She asked him a few more questions that seemed designed to check that he was recovering from his altered state properly, then left him alone in the side room with his cup of wevvi. Lute ran through the terms of the family contract in his head while he sipped his drink.

This would be better with cocoa powder in it. Wow, Grandma takes micromanaging to an embarrassing level. All of these little details are just stupid. Never tell anyone about this family member’s skill. You can tell everyone about this. Keep these thirty-eight specific facts about your work secret.

He didn’t have his hands on the class yet, but this sounded like it all added up to Aulia sowing confusion about how their powers worked so that people thought she was more special than she really was. And to hide some weaknesses from her enemies. For example, the Gloss—the big trump card that Lute was now obligated to allow her to cast on him, with certain conditions—


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What about the Gloss?” Haoyu asked.

“Ass tatt.”

“Awwww…”


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—the big trump card that Lute was now obligated to allow her to cast on him, with certain conditions—had to be paid for in full.

Everyone knew one of the main benefits of being a Chainer was that you got more than you paid for and you could selectively reduce the cost of wordchain halves. But Lute had just agreed to keep a lot of secrets about how Chainer debt repayment worked in general, so there was something uncool going on somewhere. And he’d specifically agreed never to let anyone know that certain wordchains, including the Gloss, could not be attenuated or repaid by other parties.

Aulia’s signature wordchain had mythic status on Anesidora. If you could summon up good luck for yourself and your family and never receive as much bad luck in return, then you had a guaranteed win button. If you just kept pressing it, you’d eventually pull ahead of everyone else, and the only reason Aulia didn’t do that was because she was a respectable council member who didn’t want to risk causing nationwide havoc for her own gain.

Well that’s a lot of crap, thought Lute. The reason she doesn’t do that is obviously because there’s no point! There’s no benefit if you have to pay it all back! Why on Earth would she ever use it?

Aulia breezed into the room, her wooden hoop earrings swinging. “You’re back to yourself, I see! Excellent. I was just telling some people about you. They can’t wait to meet you. But they’ll have to I’m afraid. We have an appointment to get you your new class.”

She’s chipper.

“Hey,” he said. “Do Chainers only work for this Palace of Unbreaking? Because one of the terms in the contract—”

“That’s right!” Aulia said. “Hop up. We’ll be exiting from the same spot we arrived in.”

She held out a hand as if she were going to pull him out of the chair and onto his feet. Lute ignored it and stood on his own.

“We don’t ever get summoned by anyone else? Ever?”

“Hardly ever,” said Aulia, “The Palace has exclusive summoning rights for Chainers. They can loan us out, but they rarely see fit to do that.”

Lute peered at her. “Is that a good thing?”

It didn’t sound like the worst thing, depending on how nice the palace people were, but the family had been quite tight-lipped about it. Lute had thought that they all worked for the same place, but he hadn’t been aware that they could only work for that place.

“It has its pros and its cons,” Aulia said, her smile turning forced. “When I was a little older than you and had my first magical adventure…I admit, I was somewhat distressed to find that I wouldn’t have access to the entirety of the Triplanets. But what Avowed does?”

Access…thought Lute as they rode the cart across the parking lot where nobody parked.

“Don’t you have friends all over the Triplanets?” Lute said. “Everyone says you—”

“The Palace exists in multiple locations on all three Artonas,” Aulia replied. “And there are a few on other worlds. Plus there are plenty of other ways to make connections.”

“Yes…but that’s definitely not the impression most people have about you.”

“As I said, there are pros and cons. For example, the Palace doesn’t summon other classes of Avowed. Feel free to tell people that as long as you adhere to the family guidelines about making it sound the proper way.”

“Why do we have guidelines about how things sound? It’s weird.”

“What people think is the truth is often more powerful than the actual truth,” Aulia said in a tone that seemed designed to convey wisdom.

That sounds bogus, thought Lute. That sounds like the kind of thing you say because the actual truth is that Chainers are isolated from the rest of the Triplanets and we only get to work with one specific group of Artonans. Who own buildings that look like sports stadiums.

Why is it good that they don’t summon other Avowed?” he asked.

“Because there’s power to be had here, dear,” said Aulia. “Why would we want to share it?”


******


When they arrived back home, it was mid-morning. Jessica was waiting in Aulia’s office with a dark-haired boy in a dress shirt. He leaped to his feet as soon as Aulia entered and said, “Counselor Velra!” excitedly.

“Yes, you’ve won the lottery, haven’t you?” Aulia said. “Thank you for holding the class for us for the past few months. The funds have all been transferred? Good. Jessica, give us a moment alone.”

Lute’s mother hugged him, then left.

“Lute, trade with him,” Aulia said when the door had closed behind her.

It’s too soon. I’m not quite ready. Let me think about it just a little longer.

The protest died inside him. Among the thousand other things the tattoo he now wore said, he had promised he would affix Chainer, and in return, Aulia had promised she would do everything in her power to uphold her end of the bargain even if Horatio the Healer dropped dead suddenly.

The other guy enthusiastically initiated the trade. Aulia stood there as an authorized witness. Lute accepted.

There was a twinge of regret when the words Shaper of Water were replaced by Chainer.

Giving up Wright didn’t feel like that.

He knew he was just being childish. He’d spent his whole life thinking he wouldn’t be Avowed at all. Any class he got would make him far more magical than he’d ever expected to be.

While he tried to distract himself from the unexpected sense of loss by examining the Artona III globe and trying to figure out exactly where he’d just spent the past few hours of his life, Aulia said kind politiciany things to his trading partner and wished him a bright future before sending him out the door.

It clicked shut behind him.

“All right,” she said. “What an exciting morning! Now, you’ll hold the Chainer assignment for the next two and a half months while we give you a crash course on everything you need. I’d download the language into your head if I could, but even beginning to teach you that kind of thing will have to wait. There’s so much else. You’ll need a wordchain repertoire first, lessons on the unique culture surrounding the Palace of Unbreaking, and etiquette. God, the etiquette! And of course I’ll be giving you a complete rundown of all the important figures you might meet during the course of your work.”

Lute looked around. “You don’t want me to affix the class right away?”

“Absolutely not,” said Aulia. “You’re already contracted to do it, so I’m not worried about a change of heart. You’re an S. We don’t have that many. More than any of the others, you need a thorough education in how to handle yourself and how to handle the people you’ll encounter. It will take time, but the Palace tends to summon new Chainers very quickly to say hello. I don’t want you affixing until I’ve nudged things around and talked to the leaders about you. Given your age, and the way Orpheus fell apart when he started, it shouldn’t be hard to convince them you need to work alongside one of us every time you’re summoned for the next few years.”

“I think I’ll be all right on my own.”

She rolled her eyes dramatically. “Yes, yes. I know you’ve decided I’m a terrible person. But would you really rather work all alone with a bunch of aliens instead of having some backup from some more experienced members of your own family?”

“Maybe if it’s Aimi.”

“Aimi can’t be your keeper. Aimi needs a keeper of her own. It’s…nine in the morning. We’ll have breakfast brought in here and get started on your first lessons right away.”

Breakfast is French toast casserole today. Lute had the menu he’d made with Kabir for this week memorized. Breakfasts were the only non-spicy dishes on it for some reason.

“How much time is all this tutoring going to take?” Lute asked.

“I’m in the process of clearing my schedule for the coming weeks. We don’t have a moment to lose.” Aulia’s eyes were flicking through the air as she did something with her interface.

“I have school.”

“Don’t be ridiculous. Do you want to spend the next few weeks practicing your multiplication tables or do you want to know how to handle your career on the Triplanets?”

Multiplication tables? When was the last time she looked at eighth grade math homework?

She walked over to him and reclaimed her swivel chair. He was standing between her and the globe.

“One more thing…” Her lips twisted. “Jessica has asked me not to tell you that you’ve made a judgment error until you’ve grown to enjoy your new class, but I’m afraid I won’t be able to accommodate her wishes. I prefer not to become tutor to a grandson who thinks I’m evil. I would feel bad, since she and I have a relationship built on trust. But apparently that trust doesn’t run as deep as I thought it did.”

“What are you talking about?”

“I asked her who your genetic father was. She insisted it was Cyril. You haven’t demanded to know otherwise yet; I suppose she feels like preserving that little illusion for you if you want it. Do fill me in if you change your mind. I’d be very interested.” Aulia stacked the tarot cards she’d left behind earlier and tucked them back into the desk drawer. “As for your error…I never had any intention of letting your mother, or you, suffer the ravages of time while the rest of us lived on.”

“I don’t believe—”

“Healing doesn’t always work. You know that?”

Lute frowned. “I know there are some things that magic won’t fix. And there’s reversion.”

“Artonans had magic long before they understood cells or genes. Healing does things beyond the realm of medicine and it suffers from drawbacks beyond the realm of medicine as well. Reversion, for example. On occasion, or in response to certain interferences, a Healer’s work can revert. A week passes and a healed bone is suddenly broken again.”

“Reversion is really rare though.”

“Yes. But it’s more common after intensive or repeated bouts of healing. And it’s more common when the healing is done by Avowed.”

“What? I’ve never heard that!”

“It’s rare enough no matter who the Healer is, so it’s not something you need to worry about on a daily basis. My point is that healing is miraculous, but it isn’t flawless. A specially trained wizard—or sometimes a whole team of them—can offer gentler, more customized healing options than any Avowed we currently have here on Earth. Rejuvenation is considered an extreme magical process. The Artonans who are allowed to take advantage of it almost never use Avowed for their own treatments.”

She interlaced her fingers over her stomach and watched him.

“When I realized Jessica wouldn’t be one of us, I researched the matter. Not many regular humans have received rejuvenation treatments, especially not multiple ones, and there wasn’t a lot of information here on Earth. But I found it on the Triplanets. I was told that a non-Avowed would be more delicate than you and I are. They said that if I wanted her to have the longest life possible, she should be treated there by specialists. Not here by someone like Horatio.

“Getting it lined up for her isn’t simple. We’re waiting another decade or so and then I’m going to agree to what will no doubt be a gauntlet of awful favors in order to have a Rabbit who’s an expert at locating human-friendly healers arrange it for us.”

The first thing Lute felt was relief.

The second was a dawning understanding that almost took his breath away.

“You’re…I know you’re lying,” he said. “Mom knew what I thought. I told her, and she never said…there was no reason for her to let me think…”

“She’s the one who told me about your misapprehension in the first place,” Aulia pointed out. “I was confident I could persuade you to want Chainer on your own, but she was afraid that you were only going to grow more enamored with Shaper as time passed. Or with Rabbit. She thought one was too dangerous. She thought the other might take you off the planet so that she could never see you again. A bit silly. It’s not like we have Shapers dying left and right. Most Rabbits enjoy their travels. But Jessica is most familiar with Chainer. She understands all of its drawbacks and benefits clearly. She wanted it for you. And I wanted you for it. So she suggested that if all else failed, we might take advantage of your misunderstanding so that you would do what was best for yourself.”

No, thought Lute. No, she wouldn’t do that. She wouldn’t do that to me.

“I’m sure you picked up the idea that I was a coldhearted creature who would let my own daughter die from the rest of the family. Obviously Jessica and I don’t tell them that she’ll be receiving access to far superior magical treatments in the future. It would only make them jealous and obnoxious. Some of the more shameless ones would hover around me at all hours, begging for more than I already give them.”

Aulia put her feet up on the desk. One of the laces of her sneakers was beginning to come untied.

“So now you have the full picture. You mother has always been well cared for. You were to be well cared for. And please remember that even if I played a little trick on you, I did give you Horatio’s time to use for whomever you wish. It would have been so easy just to promise you that I would help Jessica get rejuvenation treatments, and it wouldn’t have cost me anything at all since that was already my plan.”

I’ve already agreed. I agreed to it.

When he tried to imagine himself giving Chainer away to someone else, he could feel it. The contract. He could hate the class. He could want to be rid of it. But as soon as he seriously thought about trying to be rid of it, there was this…denial of the possibility that it could be a reality.

He’d promised. He’d meant it. It was done.

Aulia laughed suddenly. “You’re the first person I’ve ever paid to take Chainer! Think of it as an apology for all the years of my tutelage you missed. Do what you want with your prize. Sell it for a fortune. Give it to the man you call your father. Save it for yourself or share it with someone you find in the future. Enjoy!”

There was a cry of rage. The Artona III globe hit the floor. Lute Velra was running through the mansion, through the White Parlor, past the kitchen, toward the front door.

His mother was there picking up a pair of shoes someone had left in the wrong spot when they came in.

“Lute?”

“You lied to me!” he shouted. “You lied to me my whole life! You lied to me about all the most important things in my life!”

She looked so shocked. “Lute, let’s calm—”

“NO!”

She reached for him, and he backed away from her so fast he almost tripped.

“This was supposed to be my decision! Mine! It’s the biggest choice I’ll ever make, and I was trying so hard to get it right, and you knew that, and you lied to me!”

“I just want you to be happ—”

“Go fuck yourself! Keep picking up everyone else’s shit until you really die. I promise I won’t shed a single tear for you ever again!”

He ran past her and out the door.

She lied. She lied to me and dad. She lied about me possibly being Avowed. She plotted with Grandma to make me take Chainer.

He ran until he was about to collapse. He stumbled onto a bus.

Jessica kept sending him texts and voicemails, trying to explain that she understood how upset he was and she loved him and she only wanted to make sure he had the best life possible. [That’s all,] she wrote, [I’ve ever wanted for you.]

[Make Aulia agree to break the contract,] he wrote back finally.

[Come home. We’ll talk.]

[Make Aulia break the contract. Let me make a choice when I have all the facts. Fix what you did.]

He went to Cyril’s and practically forced his way into the apartment. He stayed for a couple of nights, trying to ignore the fact that the atmosphere had turned poisonous from a combination of him needing his dad to act normal around him and his dad not being able to do that.

The only moment of connection came when he first explained what had happened.

“She was raised to be this way, wasn’t she?” Cyril said, giving Lute an orange juice to drink since that was all he had in the fridge at the moment. “Chainer this. Chainer that. Jessica always said she hated it and that things were going to be different with you, but I guess she meant she was going to wait and see if you were actually Avowed before she put you in the family business instead of starting when you were a toddler.”

Lute clenched his juice glass in both hands. “If she doesn’t at least try to get Aulia to let me out of the agreement, I’ll never forgive her.”

“Doubt she’ll believe you about that. After all, she forgave Aulia for everything, didn’t she?”

They talked for a while longer. Lute was starting to relax and get things off his chest. Then Cyril had to ruin it.

“It’s not right, but really, Lute, you haven’t got much to complain about. Chosen at fourteen. S-rank. About to become an Avowed with one of the rarest classes. Be happy with what you’ve got.”

“What’s that supposed to mean?” Lute asked. “I have to be happy about my own family manipulating me because they’re manipulating me to take something other people would want?”

“I’m just saying…”

I wanted to be a musician. I had goals of my own and I have worked toward them every day. For years.”

Cyril snorted. “Nobody would choose that life over the one you’ll be getting.”

Lute hated him right then. Just a little.

He started his applications to all of Anesidora’s best high school music programs that night. When the forms asked him to input his Avowed class, he wrote, “harpist.” He wished the forms were paper instead of electronic so that he could write the word more aggressively to get his point across.

Filling out the forms and writing essays about his future as if class and rank were completely irrelevant to him gave him some clarity.

I’ve already screwed up. Bad. I trusted the wrong person. My mom. If your mom is the wrong person, then who’s the right one?

Never mind. It’s done.

What do I need to do now?

There weren’t many options. He could keep throwing himself on his family’s mercy and sense of justice and hope they saw reason. He could try to convince Aulia that he was the second coming of Orpheus by finding substances and abusing them in public. He could be the most epic brat in the world in some other kind of way and hope she was dumb enough to believe it was a longterm state. He could wait quietly and hope Hazel had an S buried in the black pit she had in place of a heart.

These are terrible. The first is naive, and I’m tired of being naive. The second is self-destructive and why should I destroy myself for them? The third…could be really fun. But I don’t think she’d buy it. The fourth is just unlikely.

He’d been expecting Hazel to call him. She hadn’t.

He didn’t know if she was busy plotting to kill him or if she was just really depressed. Despite what Aulia had said, Lute didn’t think she was expecting S for Hazel anymore either. One too many disappointments. One too many signs from the universe against her. First a surprise Roman causing a family schism. Now a surprise Lute in all his youthful glory!

Lute pulled his applications up on his interface. The word “harpist” was so satisfying. The answers he’d written about what kind of musician he hoped to be were so him.

This is who I am. Why can’t I still be this?

“System, can I ask you a question?”

Why not? Mom can never be trusted again. Dad’s…not at his best.

“Haha, System. You’re my family now. That’s what you get for picking Lute Velra.” He dragged a blanket off his bed and sat on the floor. “What should I do?”

He waited.


[Make a choice for yourself.]


“Thanks I guess.”

Lute continued to stare at the words. The System was just telling him what he already knew. It was up to him. Decide.

Deciding had been so impossible since the moment he had been selected. It turned out that the real life version of the dice game scrambled your head up horribly.

“I’m always going to be a harpist,” he said.

A choice. Just one.

“I’m going to be the best musician on Anesidora. I don’t care what my class is or what theirs is. I’m going to destroy them all.”

Two.

“I’m going to high school. No way am I getting roped into private tutoring. I want people who aren’t my family around me.”

Three.

The more choices he made, the more solid ground he had to stand on. Two weeks ago, he’d known himself perfectly. He just had to build it back brick by brick.

Lute kept at it, making decisions about tiny things when he couldn’t handle the big ones. Until finally…

I think I’m back. I think I’m me again.

The class he ended up with was terribly important. It would shape his whole life. But it wouldn’t be his whole life.

He could look at it more calmly when he thought of it that way.

The most likely outcome from this point on is that I affix Chainer. Lute Velra-Harpist. Side order of wordchains. Address: Anesidora.

If that’s the way it goes, what choices are there left for me to make?

Aulia was planning to tutor him and teach him everything he needed to know over the course of the next two months. She was planning to have a chat with the Artonans and make sure he was placed with a family monitor even when he was on other worlds. She was planning to have control.

Lute dropped his blanket and went to the bathroom. He checked out the ornate symbol on his back for the thousandth time. It was a lot of geometric linework contained in a shape that looked like a wide-splayed letter V.

I think this is enough control for one lifetime, he thought. I think…she doesn’t get to have anymore.

A choice.

A big one.

He did sleep on it, just in case he was insane. But when he woke up in the morning, he still felt sure that he wanted to do it.

“I’d like to sign the Contract,” he said. “Right now.”

Welcome, Lute,” the System murmured in his ear. “And thank you for your future service.”


******


“What is this?” Lute asked, staring at his interface.

He’d selected the Skills tab first because he wanted to see what juicy goodies Aulia was keeping secret from the rest of humanity. And…

“Mass Bestowal is automatic!? I thought the other S’s just took it because Aulia did! We don’t get to pick? What kind of damaged class is this?”

He was having a mini heart attack sitting on the edge of his bed because this was his big S-rank skill, and he was trying to make a bold step forward in his life here and make choices, and there were no choices.

“Are you laughing at me right now?” he asked the System. “You’re almost as bad as my real family!”

He poked the words Mass Bestowal (required), hoping they’d disappear. When he finally got around to looking away from the terrible crime that was his complete lack of a skill list, he felt silly.

“Oh. I get to choose something down here. Whew. I was panicking for nothing. Sorry, System. We’re still friends as long as it’s at least a C-rank.”

He prodded the option, and the skill list he’d been hoping for appeared.

Now let’s see what kinds of things Chainers can do that I don’t know about…these all look so boring. Debt this. Loan that.

Am I a magical banker now?

Wait, these are all S’s.

“Am I supposed to have two S-rank skills?”

He knew he wasn’t.

“I get a whole second S skill?”

When it sank in, he started to laugh. He felt delighted. And excited. Two S skills! Not one!

Lute Velra was a god! Maybe only a banker god, but he’d take whatever victories he could find at this point.

“Okay. Let’s study this.”

He had nothing to rely on but the words in front of him. There weren’t descriptions of Chainer skills for him to read on the internet. He wasn’t about to call any of the S-ranks in his family and ask them for tips.

Fortunately, the Chainer S-rank skill list seemed to be way more forthcoming than the ones he’d heard about. There weren’t that many skills—around thirty with a note at the bottom reassuring him that if he ever used them all up, the Palace of Unbreaking would design more especially for him!

Lute peered at it. That’s friendly of them, he decided. But how many lifetimes would it even take to get thirty S-rank skills?

Even more shockingly, the skills were listed in non-alphabetical order. Instead, they were sorted by their priority in the Palace of Unbreaking’s eyes. Number One on the list, a skill that accelerated a wordchain so that it would hit harder but last for a shorter duration, was the one that was most valuable to the Palace at the moment. He could expect more summonings if he took it.

The other classes would kill to have skills sorted this way. Ultrarares designed for specific jobs obviously have their perks.

He thought about Number One for a long time.

That’s an amazing skill, he decided. Worthy of S-rank for sure.

There were a dozen reasons to want a wordchain’s effect to be intenser, briefer, or both.

The main drawback seemed to be that the skill would have to be actively used the whole time the chain was being accelerated. Most wordchains lasted hours. Aulia’s Gloss lasted days. It was great if Lute was just going to be working for himself and on himself, but considering the fact that this skill was in high demand with his new employers…

This could be a skill that requires hours of work from me every day, couldn’t it? All of them could depending on what the Artonans do with us. But this is the number one most wanted.

He went down the list, reading whatever skill descriptions were offered carefully.

Some had notes about “ethical limitations” and when he asked the System for clarification, he actually got it. They were like Mass Bestowal—permission from target required.

Not that surprising. I knew they didn’t just ask to be polite. They have to do it.

The limit wasn’t placed on all the skills, but it was there on a significant number of them.

He made himself take his time and not jump ahead to look at a few skills he’d spotted on his initial skim. He had no idea what they did yet, but they had music-related names.

Most were about halfway down the list. One was just a couple away from the very bottom.

Aulia would probably lose her mind if she knew I was getting to pick another S skill. She would have wanted me to choose something in the top five so that I could make myself more useful for the Artonans and for her schemes. She’d have slapped the instructions to do it into the tattoo with all the rest of it.

He was looking forward to picking whatever he wanted and then repeatedly reminding her that she’d missed the chance to control an entire extra S-rank talent.

I wonder how many people even have access to this skill list?

On Earth it might just be Aulia. Maybe Aunt Hikari was hiding another max rank skill up her sleeve, too.

And then there were the Chainers from other worlds. They probably had a very similar list, right? But it still couldn’t be that many people. Especially if every S-equivalent Chainer on every planet got Mass Bestowal first.

Lute spent hours on the selection process.

The farther he went down the list, the more strange little notes started to appear out to the side of the skills:

[Ceremonial Use Only]

[Supervision Required]

[Created in Memory of our Brother Sess-nor]


Eventually, he decided he liked the third skill from the bottom. It had a musical name even if it didn’t do a musical thing. It seemed like the titling was more of an artistic nod to the fact that wordchains could sound quite musical or, if a couple of the other skill descriptions were anything to go by, be performed in time to music.

It’s a short description, but it sounds cool. It doesn’t have any special notes out to the side.

Being at the very bottom of the list meant the palace didn’t really want him to take it. It probably wouldn’t increase his work hours at all. It wouldn’t put him in a good position to rub shoulders with and become valuable to important Artonans.

He considered that a total benefit. A harpist needed time to play the harp.

Grandma would hate it.

He stood and stretched. “System, what do you think of this one?”

The System had no comment. It wasn’t a good sport about commenting on the skills at all.

“I like it,” Lute decided. “I want it.”

He jabbed it confidently.

Next my foundation points!

They were mostly selected for him.

“Are you serious? Even though I’m S?”

It wasn’t like they were bad stats. He had to dig down into sub menus and sub-sub menus and ask a few questions to see what it was the System would actually be doing for him. Vocal range. Linguistic processing. Pattern memorization. His ears were going to be amazing and his fingers were going to fly.

He’d known his relatives had those, and he’d assumed he would too. He’d just thought he’d have a few more points to spend than he did.

He stared at the Strength stat. And the Appeal stat. He kind of wanted to go under Stamina and whack up his Formation, but that was mostly because Haoyu had been talking about how great it was in class the other day.

“Can we talk about more customization? I don’t know which combo of points to pick to get the effect I want.”

They’d taught them in school just to ask when it came to things like this. The System knew what it was doing way better than you did, and while it could be really silent on talents, it didn’t usually mind having chats about the points.


******

******


“Don’t you two dare laugh at me,” Lute warned his roommates. “I took some Strength and Stamina!”

Alden and Haoyu exchanged looks.

“Why would we laugh about that?” Alden asked.

“Because…I didn’t take much. I spent almost all the free points I had on my hearing.”

Haoyu pointed at him. “You accused me of eavesdropping, but you’ve got super ears!”

“Cool,” said Alden. “Also, Haoyu, we didn’t accuse you of doing that. You were literally doing that. You confessed.”

“No, you guys,” Lute said. “It was already going to enhance me so that I could pick up and interpret sounds better. I asked it to give me more conscious control over it, so that I could not hear things if I didn’t want to. I basically asked it to give me the ability to hear worse than my new superhuman best.”

“Music thing?” Alden asked.

“I wanted to make sure I could still hear like I’d always been able to. It’s not like the System does a bad job when it boosts a sense. If I’m turned up all the way and I’m hearing the heartbeats and stomach noises of people sitting near me, I don’t usually get annoyed or distracted by them. But I was worried about it, and more than that, I was afraid of forgetting what my baseline was. Now I’ve got this mental notch that feels like Original Lute, and I can shift up and down from there by concentrating.”

“It’s not like it’s useless just because you did it so you could be human normal sometimes,” said Haoyu. “Can you selectively hear stuff? Can you make Alden’s stomach sound loud to you and make mine sound quiet?”

“Pretty well. I can focus to make one noise come to the foreground or recede into the background better than a normal person.”

“Then it’s awesome.” Haoyu smiled at him. “Like a mini Audial talent that you got through creative point use instead.”

“I need soundproofing for my room,” Alden muttered.

“Why?” Lute asked. “What secret things are you doing in there?”

“One of you thinks fifteen minutes of eavesdropping is not long and the other one can hear my heartbeat. I’ll probably find out Lexi can see through walls soon. A guy needs to feel alone from time to time.”

“So suspicious.”

“I have bouts of insomnia. I want to be able to make a racket in there at three AM without feeling guilty for waking all of you up.”

“It’s three AM now.” Haoyu’s hand was in the air as he shifted something on his interface. “Lexi’s going to call us idiots again.”

“Tomorrow’s Sunday. We’ll catch up on sleep then,” said Alden. “So, Lute has a mystery skill that even his own family doesn’t know about, ears he can dial up and down like a radio control, great hands, processing so that he can memorize wordchains faster, and Mass Bestowal…which bestows wordchains.”

“It does do that,” Lute said dryly.

“How does it work?” Haoyu asked.

“Ass tatt,” Alden said before Lute could open his mouth.

“Oh you already asked?”

“I wanted to know if he could bank chain halves for later. He can. Or the skill does something similar enough to that. He doesn’t actually have to cast one that very second to pass it to you.”

“Just talk amongst yourselves,” said Lute. “I can’t tell you exactly how Mass Bestowal works. But you’ve seen the effects of it so it’s not like it’s that big a secret.”


******

******

“Aren’t I supposed to get access to some special wordchains?” Lute asked the System. “Does that not happen now?”

He wouldn’t be getting spell impressions. There was an option for choosing a wordchain impression instead of points, but he didn’t see any reason to do that. It seemed like something you’d only want if you were prone to screwing up some particularly difficult and important chain.

But beyond the impressions, all of his Chainer family members—even the C’s—seemed to have a chain or two that was their special thing. His grandmother had quite a few.

Maybe I pick those later?

He’d bumped Strength and Stamina. It was a difficult decision. He wanted to see what would happen if he boosted Appeal instead, but he was already having enough trouble wrapping his brain around the halo effect his new rank was giving him. People at school, especially the upperclassmen, were suddenly much more interested in him.

He didn’t want to be friends with people who liked Lute the S-rank when they hadn’t cared about Lute the Human Being. And the fact that he was going to have to navigate that for the rest of his life was freaking him out a little.

Zero tolerance for suck-ups and rankists. The same as always. They’re just a lot harder to identify now, and I need to learn how to find them in a crowd.

He’d taken points for his signing bonus, so that was all done. And there was a note saying he’d be getting “Gifts of Joyous Welcome!” from his new…bosses? That could include the wordchains?

Lute was enjoying all these personal notes from the Palace of Unbreaking people. It wasn’t what he’d expected, and it was making him feel like he was the newest member of a club. A peculiar club for sure, but the notes were giving off an impression of reason and companionableness. These Artonans created skills in memory of former colleagues and helpfully told their Avowed which talents were on their wishlist.

It made everything that was happening seem a little less insane.

They have at least one building that looks like a conference center on the inside. Conference centers are safe. So how weird could they possibly be?

He checked the time. He’d been at it all day and for most of the night except for a nap and snack breaks. It was almost 5:00 AM. He could affix then go to school. Or skip and figure out how his new powers worked.

“Let’s do it, System,” said Lute, standing beside his bed. “Let’s make me magical. Finalize affixation.”

He’d find some way to make Mass Bestowal look like magic. Throwing fistfuls of glitter at people when he did it might be satisfying.

Ha! Didn’t think to ban that with the family tattoo, did you, Grandma? Think of how ridiculous I’m going to make the Velras look when—

******

The boy recognized the tall golden concert hall before he recognized himself.

The audience was full but silent. The orchestra at the front of room hadn’t begun to play.

This is the Musikverein, thought Lute. In Vienna.

He was standing in an aisle, and there was only one empty seat in the whole place. It was a couple of steps away.

Lute knew it was for him, but he still hesitated. The paintings of Apollo and the Muses on the ceiling looked down on him. The golden caryatids holding up the balcony level watched him mutely.

When he finally moved, a violin released the first haunting notes of a song.

A white humanoid doll sat in the neighboring chair. Its oval hands were folded in its lap.

“Good,” it said, when Lute took his seat. “That’s the desired response. Hello, Lute. Your affixation is underway, and everything is progressing normally. Do you have questions?”

“Not really,” said Lute, gazing at the orchestra. “I know what’s happening.”

“Then I’ll leave you to enjoy the show.”


**********


Comments

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Be back in 30 minutes after devouring this. EDIT: Scratch that, more like an hour. Holy hell that chapter was long. I am very interested how this arc will impact the rest of the story. With it coming out that Jessica is probably as manipulative as Aulia, just in less blatant and narcissistic ways, and having seen her in with the boater, I imagine we are gonna be either outing the Velras or confronting them somehow.

Alexander Dupree

You say pace yourself. Now defining pace to be as fast as possible.

Mikołaj

Fourth! Was part of blowback against Velra was destruction of their image in eyes of Alden?

Anonymous

Holy shit my dude, you're spoiling us. Do you just write non-stop or something? haha

Catherine

Sleyca I am just like you so sadly I shall not be taking your advice. Thank you so much for the extra long chapter which I shall now read in its entirety. Immediately 😊

GryphonKnight

>Don't be like me I have been waiting DAYS. Binge binge binge. Dinner reheats. Right...?

Flopmind

Thanks for the soup sleyca! Sleyca can you confirm/deny something old in the story for me so I can stop arguing about it on discord? Did the gloss make alden get selected when he did? Speaking of Discord... https://discord.gg/PRyweNZmBW

JustMe

Sleyca can't tell me not to binge read. She's not my mum :3 and even if she were. I would have read the whole thing underneath my blanket anyway

Anonymous

I haven't read it yet but damn did it take a while to scroll to the bottom for the epub :)

Heather White

Sleyca, now that we’ve hit the end of the Lute arc, I want to thank you. You set this arc up beautifully. I’d accumulated so many questions about Lute. Why did he really encourage Alden to leave the funeral instead of staying to trade with Hazel? How did he lose his eye? Why does he hate his grandmother — just because of the gloss & its fallout or is there more to it? Why did a guy who hates his family agree to taking the family class? What has his relationship with Hazel really been like? Why is he hated so much by his peers that people are peeing in his shoes? What did he do in middle school? Then right before diving in, you added more questions, about his mom, her appearance, her not being avowed, and the relationship between the Velras & members of the boater. And so many questions about grandma & the Velra family. I was so, so ready to learn more about Lute, his life, and his family. At the beginning of Lute’s flashbacks (in the third chapter of Chainer) it took me a bit to settle in for the new focus, because I’m generally not a huge fan of flashbacks. However, before the end of that first chapter I was sold. Anyways, as one of those who has enjoyed this arc, I just wanted to thank you for your following your inspiration and giving us a deep dive into Lute’s world.

Captdeth

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Zero

Oh wow the Velra family are fucked up. Also maybe when Alden learns how to do contract tattoos he can confide in his roommates the stuff he’s gone through. Love getting Lute’s backstory Thanks for the chapter

Anonymous

Is it just me or did Lute get one of the 300 skills without limits, the way he described the skill + the way Lute reacted about the foundation points made me think that. But i could be reading too much into this

Fabian

> She seemed to think I might have gotten overwhelmed and started affixing right there by the lockers.” > He shook his head. “I wasn’t a great student when it came to the Avowed stuff, but I’m not that ignorant.” We know. We all know!

Daniel

Fun! Releasing Chainer on RR in a batch separate from the regular schedule is probably smart, just to make it “feel different.” Otherwise some people are going to feel cheated of their Alden time.

Monus

Thanks for the extra large chapter 🫶 "They were talking about Upgrades that had recently" is not a finished sentence.

Pinpoint Inaccuracy

"And as an S-rank I can eventually get money with *our* without Aulia’s help." I think this should be 'or', not 'our'?

Twara Sandeep

Thanks for the chapter Sleyca! Ooooh the twists and turns were delicious, and we did get some fun Haoyu and Alden moments. I can also now say Lute is definitely up there as one of my favorite Super Supportive characters

displaynamehere

Thank you for the epub! The patreon app crashes on my phone because they’re too big or something, so the epub is much easier to read!

Duncan Lester

Few thoughts: Not wanting to be important to Artonans and then becoming friends with Alden is not going to work out great for Lute in the long run. Also, I'm semi-convinced that the Palace exists for stressed Artonans (maybe Knights?) to let feelings out like a wrecking room, and uses Wordchains to help the Artonans feel better/relax/ just generally take care of their mental health. Or it's a military thing, and Lute was observing the buff-house everybody visits before they go raiding.

Anonymous

So Lute definitely has one of the Original 300, right?

Fake Powerles

Thank you for the chapter

Monus

"Lock the door and tell the family members you don’t like to go away.”

glow

I love Lute so much. Thank you for the long chapter, I did stay up late to read it, but no regrets! I liked the conversation between Alden, Haoyu and Lute too. I could probably read a whole chapter of them bantering.

John Anastacio

I believe the possibility is small but not zero. Reasons: 1. Lute chose from close to the bottom, where an original 300 skill would be. 2. The Palace is very old, so they were probably there at the creation of the Contract.

Diana Lee

I've been thinking - we know explicitly that the original skills in the system tend to be symbolic or poetic - Lute's second skill is both poetic, and has a short cryptic description with very little details, similar to the original Let Me Take Your Luggage - What are the odds the poor boy who doesn't even want to be an Avowed has one of the infinitely expandable skills?

Clara

"Then I put on a Hawaiian shirt and ate it.." 👕🤤

Lucia A

Just perfect. I love lute and I love his chapters. I'm really happy where we end with his story and I'm eager to get back to Alden.

Duncan Lester

If he does Sleyca is setting up a hell of an adventuring party -- Alden with BoAB, Stuarth with whatever he chose, and Lute with [spell singer] or something. The combo power between a buff stacker and a Rabbit literally designed to take burdens is gonna Pop Off the next time the Intensity Level starts ratcheting up.

Maestro

Yeah...I fully support Lute cutting all of those people out of his life. He also seems like the type to try and support Alden as being a decent person. Just...wow. Dump the Velra's off a pier.

Andrew Duan

I saw the size of the scroll bar on the right and dear god…

Anonymous

Me reading the authors note: You the best Sleyca

Bob Ross

I have so much more to say about this chapter other than a typo in the ebook, but I think I'll just re read it instead and throw out "with our without Aulias help" might need to be "with or without Aulias help" Thank you Sleyca!

MeYouIt

Great chapter!

BelligerentGnu

There is absolutely zero doubt in my mind that Aulia either chained or paid a sway to force Lute to take Chainer. His internal dialogue there changed way too much. Jessica may actually be as bad as Aulia unless she was power-brainwashed on a permanent level. No matter where this story goes, the Velra family must Burn. I want to see their karma come raining down on their heads like the falling heavens. Honestly, Sleyca, if you hadn't ended with Lute asserting himself I'd still be furious from the previous sections.

Topher

Good soup!

VP

Wow you were right, it was long! I loved it! But now I have so, so many questions......

Alberto Muñiz

“It…” Lute hesitated, “…Chainer doesn’t feel very much like magic.” Aulia looked up from the Ten of Swords. “What?” I can feel Grandwitch's "what" in my soul. {If it’s unbalanced, the stronger person wins,} Aulia said, still distant. {I remember you told me that once.} Rekiss-tha grunted. {Foolish human,}she said. {How can you think you understand so much when you understand so little?} It's interesting how Aulia is trying so hard to attune herself to the Artonian understanding of reality, and failing so hard.

Anonymous

I know there is probably an argument to be made about how it would be more narratively fulfilling to be drip fed Lute lore over time rather than in bulk, but screw that. I loved this arc, and despite its length I think you did a great job making the writing within it just as compelling or even more so than the chapters preceding it. Lute is a very fun character, and I hope he'll be here to stay for a long while longer. Thank you for the massive chapter and engaging arc. I'm looking forward to seeing what shenanigans are next for Alden and co.

Mani

aaaaaaahhhhh, so good. shoulda saved it for tomorrow tho. releasing chapters this big is a hazard you know

ppbrro

Nice chapter

John Anastacio

Thanks very much for the very juicy and informative chapter Sleyca. Much of it is very entertaining like how Hazel kicked the furniture out of rage at Lute outperforming her with a wordchain. The most interesting part for me though is the conversation between Aulia and Rekiss-tha. The contract is weak, Rekiss said. And Rekiss mocked Aulia for saying that when a contract is unbalanced, the stronger person wins. I think the contract being weak means Lute could conceivably disobey if he tries. Also, could Aulia be the weaker person of the two? I'm not sure how much authority she has compared to Lute. Or maybe Aulia misunderstood in a different way. Edit: Before I forget, the 10 of swords is a nasty card. Doom and failure.

ppbrro

Love the resolution. He might not be living the live he thought he would but he is making one with his own magically enhanced hands

blinkmouse

Thanks for the chapter! It was a lot of fun discovering Lute's backstory

GreatSwordsmith

Amazing chapter, I hope Lute learns to love Chainer... And as for him taking a skill that the Artonan's don't want him to take... It does sound a bit familiar, I can't wait to see it

Heather White

I’m really looking forward to Lute getting strong enough (and savvy enough about Artonann contracts) to crush that tattoo. Him giving away the family secrets will be so satisfying.

Lidja

I wonder if Manon is the Rabbit who will locate human-friendly healers.

Maddy Weller

Alden and Lute really do need normal birthday parties. This was a fantastic chapter/chunk of chapters! I’m a little disappointed we don’t find out what Lute’s other skill is, but I kind of expected it. I wonder why Aulia doesn’t let Lute talk about the chain they cast. Maybe so she doesn’t get in trouble? I’m looking forward to returning to Alden’s regularly scheduled not at all special life, but I enjoyed the detour through Lute’s formative years!

Heather White

I wasn’t too surprised to find tears rolling down my face at one point in this chapter. What did surprise me was that it was Alden describing his birthday that set me off.

Matt DiMeo

If there was an original powerful unlimited skill on the list, I’d expect the palace to give it priority near the top. The list isn’t in date order.

Monus

That was good. Thank you so much Sleyca. I really liked the lute arc, even though most others probably would have liked it more, if we had gotten them dropfed over a couple more weeks. That being said, it made sense to do it this way as one whole cohesive unit.

Heather White

In one of the first roommates chapters Lute says he isn’t telling anyone what his second skill is because he enjoys knowing that her not knowing what it is will surely make grandwitch crazy. Torturing her with it is giving him great satisfaction.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

This really capped off the arc beautifully. As much fun as it would be to see Lute's early experiences with the Palace, Sleyca definitely chose the right place to break it off. Unlike some, I don't feel like the arc was getting too long. It takes as long as it takes to tell the story right, and I am just along for the ride. The reason I think ending here was such a masterful choice is because it comes right at the resolution of the essential questions Sleyca set up for us about Lute and the Velra clan. Anything further would be breaking open new ground, without the same level of payoff or closure. I could definitely see Lute's further experiences filling a different narrative niche later on, however. Something to look forward to. Now, remind me again, how long in-world until Alden goes to visit the Arths?

Gail

Hahahaha! The system likes Lute a LOT more than it likes Alden.

Swiss Jeez

Aulia would probably get in big trouble if someone else cast a 'decrepit' wordchain because she shared it with someone.

Maddy Weller

I definitely got the impression that Aulia isn’t necessarily the stronger party like she thought. Or maybe won’t always be.

Swiss Jeez

I think it's less that Lute could *break* the contract (although it's possible) and more that Lute will be able to interpret the contract according to what he thinks it should mean, rather than what Aulia does. So perhaps obeying the letter but not the spirit is more in the cards for him?

Bogo

Absolutely adored Luke's entire story

Swiss Jeez

This chapter was incredibly stressful despite knowing how it all had to end. Amazing!

cafenacet

Honestly this whole thing is tragic. Cyril has had relationship problems with Jessica as far back as like, a decade ago, and clearly thinks Lute should be happy to be Avowed. Jessica raised Lute to not want to be Avowed so he wouldn't be disappointed, and then is surprised that he doesn't want to be Avowed. She also doesn't seem to realize how abusive Aulia is, and understandably placed Lute's safety over his happiness -- but in the process ruined any trust between them by manipulating him into thinking he had to take it to protect her.

TheLost

Man his mom was evil, losing the trust of her son was well deserved

Chas Becht

You know, I'm starting to think that Aulia being a "Chainer" might be something of a metaphor.

Uroš

It's nearly 1 am. I binge-read the whole chapter and it was glorious. I regret nothing :) I'll be looking forward to the time when Lute is the stronger one and kicks that tattoo's ass.

Shingi

Well, I told myself I wouldn't binge because I have to wake up early tomorrow but I did...whoops! Anyways a lot of really interesting soup and it will take time to digest it all but I'll probably say one theory: Aulia and Hazel might have met a Knight and helped them using wordchains when Hazel mentioned helping a Artonan who seemed to be having some sort of...difficult day. Also the whole family needs therapy cause damn they're messed up, especially Aulia with her magicratic bullshit

Cyrus McEnnis

While, yeah, Neha has the obvious affixation for finding things, Manon might be able to do something similar with Tailor Environment, in much the same way that she can do Sway-type things with it.

Sign Dhole

Fantastic chapter, and agreed with other comments - I loved this set of chapters a lot! Getting this deep dive into Lute's backstory was great, and if it happens again for other roommates I'm all for it. Thank you for the chapter!

Kyle

I don’t think power of skills rates highly for Artonan sensibilities, else they’d give humans the info they need to min-max. As to the original 300, there are factions actively suppressing them so having it appear near the bottom of a “desired skills” list is pretty plausible. I’d love if Alden got a wizard buddy, plus then Lute could do all the magic he wants.

Juli Freixi

AMAZING!! I love it!!! Infinite thanks Sleyca!!

Shingi

Do keep in mind that Jessica is just a previous iteration of Hazel that simply became a mundane human instead of a B. The only problem she probably saw with her childhood and family situation is that not being the chosen one after working so hard sucks and is super humiliating and that's why making Lute not think about being the god Chainer as a kid was her only priority

11037

You realize that we're patreon supporters partially because we're the type of people who are unable to hold back from reading everything as soon as it's available, right?

Anonymous

Perhaps Aulia will be forced to act in the way that Lute interprets as being good for the family.

Fake Powerles

I loved this chapter. This is genuinely the best chapter from the flashbacks. You can feel Lute's rage. Hell, even I hate Aulia now. Again, thanks for the chapter.

Thayle Lee-Logg

Missing section after the first intermission - "They were talking about upgrades that had recently When Aulia pulled up to the building and passed the keys off to a valet, she raised an eyebrow at the two of them."

hmDrake

You know, it's hard to argue Aulia's fate thing when Alden, her grandson's roommate, is involved in one of her projects with Manon's group and has been marked by the Artonan's as Very Important. I don't think anyone would be able to convince her otherwise, ever.

Blorcyn

Yeah. I played gymnopedie from the moment Lute mentioned it. The whole chapter hit like a brick. Bet his second skill is called Coda, too.

Jeff Scott

I suspected the whole time that there was either a very good reason she wasn't on the healing list, or that she actually was but weren't telling him, and it ended up being both.

Anonymous

This was absolutely wonderful

AFK37115

thanks for the chapter! Oh I am a binge reader too, I couldn't help but read it all. I have so many feelings about the Velras, but for a lighter comment, I am gonna say that Alden’s love for soft carpeting is so funny and adorable, I wonder if he noticed what he's doing or that Haoyu is copying him!! Also, the last scene with Lute and Earth was so peaceful and nice, Earth has done well!

Young Youghurt

Glad Lute finally realised his mother was manipulating him. Sad he realised too late.

payforthat

Prediction, Aulia going to get forced to really screw herself over with that "act in the best interests of the Velra family" line. Around about the time Lute becomes more important than Aulia I think. Lute takes his obligations as a chainer seriously, rather than just a means to power. So the house of the unbreaking will be better off siding with him. It also looks like he picked one of the 300 skills from the description of it and his meeting with Contract on affixing. He is also linked to Alden and co, knights in training... So yer, Lute will be more important than Aulia for future of the Velra family. Now if only we can arrange for Hazel to blackmail Alden into telling her that learning magic is a good way to level fast.

James N Mueller

If I had to guess it's neither a chain nor a sway. This whole section is a followup from Manon using her ability to keep people in convenient places. I'm guessing it's either her acting in the background or someone similar.

Swiss Jeez

This is what makes her such a good villain. She actually is wise about some things...just not the things that really matter.

Blorcyn

It depends a lot on their alignment of what his ‘family’ means. I see no issue there.

payforthat

Yer, but Jessica is probably very susceptible to been "arranged" by Manon.

Memoryofgold

Wow you weren't kidding, this was such a dense chapter. You're awesome. Also, I don't remember if Aulia had blonde hair but my image of her is basically Taylor Swift if she went down a different career path

Memoryofgold

I think it would be great and funny if Haoyu was the only "normal" one in that apartment lol

JJ Hunter

That is one heck of an arc; I can see why Lute is so angry, and so socially unmoored when we first met him, and also resilient enough to still try with new friendships when he gets enough cues to feel safe doing so. I sympathize with his anger, but I hope he takes care with whom it cuts; there’s a lot of built up there that needs use or it will keep finding its own outlets. I’m glad Lute still has music. His experience of affixation as listening to a symphony - the symphony he’s always aspired to joining! - in the city he always wanted to go to! - gave me shivers. We know from Alden how painful iterations of this process can be when one can feel one’s own Authority; here we get a glimpse of what small bits of kindness the Earth System is able to give having a likely outsized affect on how receptive Lute is to permitting its manipulations. (Aulia could take some lessons there. Really starting to wonder what the impact would be on her and the rest of the family if that overburdened family contract just - breaks someday.) Knowing what we know from Alden’s experience so far, I can see many good reasons for Artorians not to disclose a given child’s current status for what their potential might be. Environment and experience and how someone responds to those challenges and opportunities can clearly have dramatic impact on how potential might develop. Is it ethics or past experience with other Avowed (or both) that have taught Artorians not to directly or indirectly give information about the kinds of conditions that might converge to enhance how quickly a child develops their Authority vs., say, outright breaking them in the process? I’m glad we have examples in some of their other S-ranked classmates of ones with happy childhoods who still had that status at selection; growing up in an environment with increasing social abrasion and sense of estrangement could as easily make a ghost of a child as someone like Lute with an unusually strong sense of distinct self within the groups they grow up in. I can see how Jessica could think her approach to getting Lute to chose Chainer (i.e. agree to the family contract) was the right approach - starting Lute on her dream of safety and success at whatever short-term cost worked to get him there, trusting in the decades to come to get them past the lies - and also how deeply this wounded his trust in her when he already had his dad pulling away so completely. I’m relieved Lute still has his cousin Aimi (and maybe his aunt Hikari?) giving him some sense of remaining family that sees him and will deal honestly with him. I can see why Jessica made the choices she did in thinking her experience was the worst possible version, and if Lute did get Selected after all, that his Selection would (‘of course’) be experienced as a positive gift. Her fierce, consistent practice of striving to keep protecting him from exposure to small harms, outsider social snubs, etc. instead of facing them together really set them both up for this tremendous relationship-rupturing chasm of their expectations gap. I feel Lute’s pain, but I do have a lot of sympathy for how hard Jessica tried to give him a better childhood than she got herself from how her mother choose to groom her for expectations that got so thoroughly dashed. You really start to get a sense that Aulia’s practice of making each grandchild (at least initially) feel like they have her whole attention while she’s with them, like they have their own games and an alliance together is absolutely a technique she perfected on her own children first. She’s kept some version of this going with Jessica their whole lives; Jessica feels like they are a team, that she is very important to her mother with a unique role no one else in the family can currently fill - crucial, critical, indispensable. It’s hard to tell from Lute’s limited perspective whether the other family members of Jessica’s generation perceive that as being real and respect that; certainly we get clues here and there that Jessica makes certain requests on Lute’s behalf that Aulia honors even above Hazel’s usual free run of all the privileges. Jessica has pull with Aulia; maybe she doesn’t spend that access as flagrantly as Hazel would respect, but there are signs that she has it and trusts that she has that credit to draw on, so to speak. I keep thinking about the implications of what the tattoo artist was saying about the family contract, and that intermission with Hikari’s keen observation re: the sheer momentum of Aulia’s conviction when she thinks she’s figured out how to interpret what she thinks are signs and omens in the magic. It really does feel like the Velras are a family cult, and Aulia’s work on training the upcoming generations is at least in part to ensure as little disharmony or pushback during the making of the family contract additions as possible. That bit about controlling the perception of the truth being as or more powerful than the actual truth - it’s not just within the family, and how Anesidorans perceive the family, it’s the young wizards at the University too, isn’t it. It’s how the Artorians who are part of the Palace of Unbreaking perceive Avowed Chainers, and the aptitude of Velras specifically - almost as if Velras are themselves a distinct subrace within humans who might be granted Velras-specific System contracting. I’m so glad Lute yeeted himself out in time to make his next set of decisions himself. He owned his own Authority without knowing he was doing it before initiating his own greater System contract, and I suspect that’s going to make all the difference in the long term for how he builds his life from here. Very glad he’s got a better housing situation, and a school tract that appears to be very much following through on his choice of primary vocation, and increasing chances to meet the broader world (and worlds) on mostly his own terms. Hopefully putting words - his words - to the whole story with sympathetic housemates who are rapidly becoming reliably, honestly, obviously his friends will help him feel the control he does have now over where his story can go from here.

Victor Cavalcanti

Aulia knows a lot of stuff we don't, and she definitely isn't stupid. I don't think she's right about all the fate stuff, but there's probably a grain of truth to her particular brand of madness.

Luckbox

Obviously everything is working perfectly. Lute had become the type of person to attract Alden as a friend by not being like his family which is great because Alden is the second coming what with him being the light.

AFK37115

she never thought he or any of her kids might surpass her lol

Swiss Jeez

When do you think she forced him? She strong armed him with the Healer, and his narration changed during the tattooing cause he was high. What are you thinking about?

Bloodorange17

This is such a great chapter and I'm very thankful Sleyca didn't break it up. I'm excited to get back to Alden though, time time for some plot.

Daniel

Crazy theory: Alden got nudged by the Gloss into early Avowed selection, because Alden is lucky for Lute. Remember that Gorgon was surprised how early Alden was chosen? The obvious reason is the Gloss: selecting Alden early let him bring B-Chainer to the Velras. Now, lots of different people could have traded for Chainer and brought it to the Velras, but from the Gloss' point of view... how many of those people could have become nice friends for Lute? Even if they didn't end up roommates, Aulia's "cosmic links" theory would keep Alden meeting Lute, once the Gloss arranged the trade setup. This is even more likely if Lute's second skill is one of the 300, because that just makes Alden even more suited for him.

Billy Corcoran

Just to note: I normally read these via my email but the chapter was so long, I only got around 2/3 of it. Perhaps some readers wouldn't think to check here for the rest. It ended at a moment that COULD have been a chapter end too, but something in your description made me think it had to be longer.

Gregory

I don't think we have any evidence his skill was one of the 300. We know that fainting/contract chat happens for some special (generally high ranked) people, and double S fits the bill.

Barrett Fogarty

The conversations between Lute, Alden and Haoyu are like oases in the desert of the Velras story. Glad we are now out of the desert.

Victor Cavalcanti

I think Aulia has some kind of weird notion about setting Alden and Hazel up. Not only because of the gloss, but after he came back from the triplanets. When she find out about the commendation she'll get all up in his business real fast. Not to mention it's only a matter of time before he becomes A rank. Then a whole lot of people will probably be all up in his business.

JHD

Thanks for the chapter. Lets read this chapter before bed was a good way to lose sleeping time 😅

payforthat

True, but as others above pointed out it was described in a way that fits with a 300 skill. Limited description, hints of symbolism in its musicalish name and burried away to discourage picking. Also, wordchains are old and the palace has always had influence. So there is bound to be a 300 skill in the list somewhere.

Heather White

Ironically, in a more loving, healthier family, Lute might’ve chosen Chainer of his own free will because it’s the class least likely to interfere with his harpist career. But Aulia and Jessica and the rest of the family went and poisoned it. I hope that someday he’ll be Earth’s most famous musician and so powerful that his whole family lives in his shadow.

John Anastacio

This is a minor thing, but note that Lute and Aulia were teleported straight from where they were to Artona III, and they did not even arrive at a summonarium. This supports the possibility that when Alden goes to the Knight Rapport to visit Stu, he won't go from or return to the Anesidora Teleport Center either. Also I like that Lute fainted. He really ought to have stayed in bed when he aske the System to finalize the affixation, though.

hercule pyro

It’s vanishingly unlikely she doesn’t already know about the commendation. Random security guards know about it, counsellors at intake know about it, everyone who ever saw Alden’s school application knows about it. People know about it enough that they’re running off to tell random hyperboles about it. She 100% has found out about it already.

Nathan Sto

At least the Gorgon part would imply that the gloss has impact over the past to achieve an effect in the future. Eg, it breaks causality to an extent. I'm uncertain that any human would be able to bear the cost of that wordchain.

Notye Penyar

Sleyca, I don’t say this lightly, and obviously I can’t make full judgement without the end, but this is probably the best story I’ve ever read. I’m pretty picky about what I enjoy, and I can complain about even the best works. But this story, the pacing, characters, world, and above all just masterful prose. It’s so good sometimes I just get angry everything else isn’t up to standard. Thank you.

Box Jellyfish

Don't think the timing works. The funeral was on Hannah's birthday, Monday Feb 13th (assuming we're in 2040). Alden was selected at lunchtime on Thursday before that, which would be the 9th. Aimi states that the Gloss had been active for 2 days, which would be after Alden had traded for Chainer. Alden also talks to Boe and Jeremy about missing classes for the funeral, implying that it's a weekday.

Samatar

Was looking forward to the reactions of his shitty classmates. Disappointed it got glossed over.

John Anastacio

There were no Avowed classes before the Contract, and the original 300 were among the first skills in the Contract.

Obbu

Ok I freaking love this resolution - it grounds his overall "brat" persona in such a manner, and I'm SO on board with burning the velras to the ground now :P The falling out with his mother (and estrangement from his father as well) make perfect sense. And the satisfying moment of the finisher with the orchestra scene, contrasted against the in-depth discussions that Alden has with the system totally caps off the lute backstory. Loved it! Ahhhhhhh! Also very curious about the stadiums, the palace and "prostrating after the feast". Having the wevvi fruit as part of the wordchain learning ritual (and artonan rituals in general) also has my foreshadowing senses tingling. It's a bit of a tangent but there's a couple of breadcrumbs that are starting to line up: 1. Gorgon's "priesthood" devours the corpses of their predecessors, historically, to pass on their abilities fully ("blessing of the devourer"). 2. Gorgon's wishing-well abilities destroy (devour/consume?) authority to create a desired effect. 3. When the Knights give in to their torment and are killed, their bodies are taken by the tree roots and interred beneath the ground - while "The remnants of her authority are gathered here, woven into the ground beneath us and the forest around us. Old magic. They become part of a ward against chaos.” 4. There are not enough groves of wevvi to feed everyone. Are wevvi fruit grown by those trees that eat up the knights? Is the ritualised drinking of wevvi vaguely similar to a christian-inspired communion ritual where the participants take of the body of martyrs? Complete with a "fake" version of communion wine and all that? Is wevvi soylent green? :D Also, Also: "I’d download the language into your head if I could, but even beginning to teach you that kind of thing will have to wait." Ummmmmmmmm... ok?!

Cantamen

Hey Sleyca, great chapter! I think you skipped a word in this sentence: "They were talking about upgrades that had recently When Aulia pulled up to the building and passed the keys off to a valet, she raised an eyebrow at the two of them." I think there should probably be something after recently? And 'when' shouldn't be capitalized.

Daniel

Yes, Gorgon must have spotted Let Me Take Your Luggage on his own. I wonder why Gorgon always thought Alden might pull off a Rabbit trade, though, knowing how rare and desirable Rabbit is? Anyway the rest of the timing works without causality problems. The Gloss was cast on Thursday, and that's exactly the day Alden was selected - a surprisingly early selection, according to Gorgon.

BeautifulBusinessBoi

Loved this whole arc and I have so many thoughts! 1. Did Jessica encourage Lute into music so he would be naturally gifted at chaining if he affixed? Since he’s named after a musical instrument, I assume she wanted him to learn music the whole time 2. Aulia, while terrible, is so wonderfully dramatic. Making herself lose her sight for a few days from a word chain to make a point about how blind she was is hilarious. She probably also feels that Lute’s rebelliousness is also a penance for the mistake she made misreading the signs 3 I kind of wanted to see Hazel’s reaction to Lute *actually* getting chainer, but I understand that where it ended is a really nice spot as Lute takes back some control of the situation. And this is his story, not Hazel’s. I would find it really cathartic to see Hazel freak out tho lmao

Box Jellyfish

It looks like Alden already had Chainer when Aulia kicked off the Gloss - the funeral was on Monday 13th (Hannah's birthday), Alden traded for Chainer on the previous Friday. Maybe the Gloss influenced Alden/Boe/Jeremy to come up with the silly balckmail note scheme to contact the Velras on Anesidora but unless the Gloss has a precog component or something it wasn't active at his selection.

Dax

He should change his name to Lute Harper if he wants to distance himself from the family even more.

Carl Earl

Glad someone else caught this. I had copied it to post in a comment when I finished reading, but my phone had to reboot and I lost the clipboard.

Dax

He'd crossed their names out on his list. They don't exist to him anymore.

Michael Blue

I largely enjoyed Lute’s arc and I agree it’ll be interesting to see Alden with Stu-art’h in person, but I’m more interested in things that I don’t know are going to be answered before Alden’s visit, like is Lute going to have to navigate Natalie and friends learning from other people about the gloss or his alleged desire to kill avowed and their parents? How is Alden going to handle the personal experience component of his navigating the unexpected class? Is Alden going to have to start to fight students in gym class and how is he going to do? Can Alden master a couple of word chains in a month and does that affect his authority? Will Haoyu speak to Lexi about hogging the bathtub?

Carl Earl

Mobile doesn't give us a visible scroll bar...but I also loved the fact that this chapter just kept goingm

Al

"Aulia Velra agrees to act in the best interests of the Velra family, and Lute Velra agrees not to reveal" Holy shit, this wording from the Contract might be a huge deal! If Lute becomes strong enough that his view of the contract can overpower Aulia's, he could force her to act in what HE considers to be "the best interest of the family." Not only could he make her act less terrible, he could have her picking up everyone else's trash if he pushes it enough.

Heather White

I was furious when Aulia played the “guess my outfit” game, as if it was still a normal thing & they’d stayed connected all those years. Her comeuppance will be soooooooo damn satisfying. That’s me in the corner, rubbing my hands together in anticipation like a supervillain. I’m patient. I can wait…

WannaBeATree

... i kinda feel weird for somehow being the only one who is more interested in the planed rabbit date on sunday than on Lute's backstory. It IS interesting, but i really liked the interactions in the warren and any chapters with multiple rabbits + possible clumsy teenage romance is realy fun to read. :)

Anonymous

I doubt that he could cheat any contract he voluntarily entered by using his skill — first, Joe would probably notice this loophole; second, it would be impossible for anyone, other than possibly the contract partner, to entrust him the contract; third, this capability seems antithetical to the entire magic system.

Carl Earl

Can Sleyca be MY mum? She tells the BEST bedtime stories! And makes the BEST soup!

John D Jones

Skiff knows about the Commendation and was basically Aulia's spy back when Alden was trying to trade Chainer. Of course Aulia knows about the Commendation.

Samatar

Cool and all but doesn't change how supremely unsatisfying it is to read like 7 or 8 chapters straight of a flashback with shitty classmates treating him like shit and then be blue balled from getting any cathartic reactions when the moment we've been waiting weeks for comes. We didn't even get to really see Hazel's reaction when finding out. It just kinda sucks.

Carl Earl

Oh THAT'S an interesting guess...I wonder what a skill with that name would do?

Hydrabogen

Oh Sleyca, you're truly spoiling us! We got like 10 Chapters worth of content, just from the last two releases! Thank you very much for writing this amazing story!

Box Jellyfish

After this look at the Velras (and a few other glimpses of Avowed) I'm really hoping we get to see some exploration of the growing disconnect between the eternally young Anesidoran elites and regular Earth/'globie' society. I get the feeling that much of Aulia's callous attitude comes from her 70 years as one of the most powerful/influential people in her society; she really doesn't care too much if Lute hates her today as things will be different in 10 years. Time is on her side, and she's happy to play the long game as she's seen it all before.

Lucas

You are crushing it!

Tanean

I don't think the system care about anyone yet to be honest. As mention previously in the story it's still too young for that. It's still finding itself. Considering that the only current known goal of the system is to make sure people affix well and accept the contract to prevent chaos and that it knows EVERYTHING about the people that are chosen it knew exactly what to say to make Luke accept the contract immediately and save him work. He was very happy when Luke was in the Vienna theater, but it felt more to me that he was happy about himself making a good educated guess to get where he wanted to be than anything else. Then again Alden is always going to be a problem for the system so yes, the system like Luke a LOT more than Alden xD

JustMe

Lute asked Alden whether he could get hadiza and her flatmates to go out with them again

Matt

Well, I gotta say, Aulia is much more interesting than Lute. Hope she wins out. Probably won't, but here's hoping. Happy to return to the Alden POV.

Daniel

Alden was selected on Thursday, two days before Hannah's funeral on Saturday, and Aimi thinks on the day of the funeral that the Gloss started "two days earlier," which would also be Thursday. The timing works. (Hannah's funeral is on Saturday, not Monday: see, eg, "Hannah’s funeral was in two days" in chapter 12, "One O'clock on a Thursday".)

BelligerentGnu

No no. Look at the section where he talks to Aulia and then leaves the room and talks to Jessica. He walks out feeling terrible about the chainer class but thinks he might have to for the healing. When he leaves with Jessica, he's gotten to "chainer is clearly best, why was I thinking otherwise?" That's the too-quick narration change. The forcing happened somewhere between him ending the conversation with Aulia and maybe 1/3rd of the way into the Jessica conversation. Or possibly earlier but on a delay.

Draken09

Wait. The [Bearer of All Burdens] *absolutely* can bear wordchains at some point. This may get whacky.

Lidja

Maybe. In Chapter 12: One o’clock on a Thursday, Alden mentioned he was stressed because the funeral was in 2 days, right before he gets selected.

Alex Iskandar

I should have stopped at the intermission. Now I kinda regret it 🙂 I hate myself.

racnor 1

It would make a lot of sense for Lexi to go for a spell that lets him see through walls, actually. He has a precision weapon that can probably snake under doors or pierce through drywall. With wallhax he could easily deny enemies any form of cover while remaining concealed himself

foldedcorners

That was a great way to end the arc. Very fulfilling character development

Flopmind

The timing does work. Alden gets selected within hours of the gloss going live. He receives the perfect class to trade to Andrzej, is already headed to the island, and is willing to trade chainer to the velras. Evidence: 1. From the selection chapter: ``` Hannah’s funeral was in two days, and while he was a long way from bursting into tears at random intervals like he had in the months after his parents were killed, he was having a pretty hard time focusing his attention on the everyday stuff. His AP Literature teacher looked like she wanted to have a worried conversation with him, so he made a quick excuse, grabbed his bag, and dashed across the hall to the bathroom. There, while he stared at some of his schoolmates’ artistic graffiti and did what people do in bathrooms, he suddenly felt a jolt. It was a brief, painless full-body spasm. Like a hypnic jerk. ``` 2. From the funeral chapters: ``` For only the second time in her life, Aimi Velra was under the influence of the highest potency luck chain available to humanity. Glossed— that was what the family called it. She didn’t know who had come up with the term, but it fit. Aimi felt shiny, gleaming. Untouchable. She pressed her foot almost to the floor, and her sports car shot through the streets of Apex City at a speed that was illegal—for vehicles at least—everywhere on the island. She gritted her teeth. She was both loving, and loathing, the way other cars and pedestrians seemed to melt out of existence around her. No doubt she was ruining traffic patterns all over the city. It was a doozy of a chain, the kind that could only be completed by Grandma Aulia herself, and it had fallen on the whole family two days ago. ```

Stylemys

<i>”If it’s unbalanced, the stronger person wins,” Aulia said, still distant. “I remember you told me that once.”</i> I wonder if this is why Lute was terrified when Alden suggested he might become a hyperbole. If he outclasses his grandmother, his interpretations of the contact take precedence. At that point, he’d stop being a rebellious grandson and become a threat to her secrets.

Aidan Geverdt

Man, I hope Alden somehow finds a way past these contract tattoos.

numdegased

I like your crazy theory, and my immediate reaction is to add to it; how *unlucky* do you think Alden had to have gotten to get trapped on Thegund? Would the time frame have worked out on that?

John Anastacio

I wonder how much argold Lute makes. He only gets summoned twice a year, right? He probably doesn't get any money from the other Velras. His picking a low-priority second S-rank skill could explain why he tends to eat only ramen.

numdegased

This whole story is “finally. Some good fucking food.”

Caerulex

I loved this arc. I really like how we see that Aulia actually was always planning to keep Jessica young. It adds another layer of complexity to her character.

Christine

Kon's party was a little bit after Halloween, and it hasn't been a full week since then. Its 3 am on the next Sunday, so it's around Nov 7th/8th/9th. Alden is scheduled to go Dec 15th, so he has a little over a month.

Robert Lethiecq

I haven’t seen anyone bring forward this theory but it seems too obvious to have not been considered by others. My theory regarding the boater and their relationship with Aulia, Jessica, and the Velras is that Aulia uses that power to control people and their actions in order to maintain control of her family. I think she is aware of its uses and takes advantage of it to manipulate her own family into compliance. The sheer amount of dysfunction in the family makes it so that the more extreme behaviors of some family members goes unrecognized for what it is. Just a thought.

Charlie

Thoughts 1. If Aulia *had* put into the contract that she would have Lute's mother rejuved the contract probably wouldn't have taken at all. 2. I'm weirdly excited to find out why Artonans wouldn't discuss ranks with people. I wonder why it's so taboo?

Anonymous

I read that as him trying to protect his mom. Like, he’s doing something that he knows he’ll regret for the rest of his life to save her life, and he couldn’t handle her being upset about how that impacted him too. (Which is why he’s feels so damn betrayed)

Lidja

I think it’s similar to how Kibby’s instructors refuse to tell her how she compares to other students.

Memoryofgold

honestly both, and with Alden's wish in this chapter to have a normal birthday I would love a scene like that with his friends (but knowing Sleyca we might go through hell first)

Michael Majcen

Am I thankful for this chapter, or happy to see how Lute has become the person he is? Yes.

Robert

I've enjoyed Lute's chapters. I hope to see more interactions of ceremonial music word chain stuff mixing with Alden's secret wizard powers. Wizard or knight? I can't remember what the culture calls them.

KB

"A fluffy gray cat was sitting in her lap, purring as she stroked it." Aulia's like Don Corleone. But lacking the warmth and class.

Chris

He has scheduled appointments and gets summoned all the time. A earlier chapter mentioned it. edit: found it! “Yeah, I get summoned. I’ve got an official work calendar and everything. I might occasionally disappear without warning, too. Don’t freak out if it happens. It’s not like a real emergency summons. I don’t do anything physically dangerous.” - Chapter Ninety-Seven: Fireworks

TunaFish20

A quadruple length chapter? I couldn't ask for a better birthday present.

KB

"Aulia put her feet up on the desk. One of the laces of her sneakers was beginning to come untied." I adore this line. The lace coming undone is such a tiny detail, but it is so evocative. I think this chapter really started to show Aulia's cracks. Early in the story there's this mysterious and powerful aura about her. But now that we know her? We see that it's a lot of smoke and mirrors. She lies about the Gloss and about Mass Bestowal and about other things to make her family look cool and powerful. Her attempts to be Artonan, we're starting to see, are desperate and weird. Her need to cling to power is fueled by her fears and insecurities. The way she attempts to control her family only ends up making them miserable and corrupt and unstable. The Artonans see it. Rekiss-tha grunted. "Foolish human," she said. "How can you think you understand so much when you understand so little?" she said. Aulia is just so needy and desperate to be important that she is frantically trying to climb the ladder. And her sneakers are beginning to come untied. And she doesn't even realize that it makes her look a bit silly and a bit sad.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

@Memoryofgold, Sleyca will make us *think* that we are getting a day like that, but at the last minute he will be summoned to an emergency chaos situation which will then somehow evolve into a spy drama, at the end of which he will end up being instrumental in saving the life of a minor noble from one of the other resource worlds. While he is there, Boe will call to tell him that Jeremy has mysteriously disappeared off the face of the Earth. Or something different. With Sleyca, you never really know.

Matt

I find Lute interesting, though Aulia is also intriguing. And yes, I'm mostly commenting to clarify that we're different people. I should set a profile picture or something.

Tim

The comment made me angry because I bet Aulia is strong enough to get 99% of her bullshit contract clauses through via manipulation and authoritative brute force during the negotiations (e.g. body turned to slave if Aulia wants to perform The Gloss). I really hope Rekiss-tha's rebuttal is a Chekhov's Gun for her getting screwed over in *checks calender* five years.

Charlie

I considered that, but it may also be that since the contract involves mutilating someone's authority somewhat, deciding on the extent of that mutilation before absolutely necessary might be gauche.

Terrestrial_Biped

@Lauren: I think you mean "stronger" as "emotionally stronger", but in case you don't... Aulia presently has more total authority than Lute does. She has two S-rank skills, PLUS all the smaller skills and mountains of foundation points and whatever else she has earned over the course of her career of more than seven decades. So presently, her stronger *authority* will overwhelm his if he contests the contract. But Lute has more growth potential than she does, most likely. His higher starting authority probably corresponds to a greater growth rate if he applies himself. Which, once pointed out to him, might give him the motivation to put in the work developing his magic in earnest, and may let him one day hijack the contract with his own understanding of the terms.

KB

I also thought the symphony at the end was beautiful. It felt like coming home after a long day. It created such a feeling of peace after such a long period of stress.

Terrestrial_Biped

Lute doesn't presently have more authority than Aulia. They both have two S skills, but Aulia has seven decades of career behind her with all the bonus low-rank skills, foundation points, and impressions that come with that. In a contest of authority over the contract's interpretation, Aulia will presently win. However... Lute started stronger, and probably has more growth potential than Aulia. If he puts a serious effort into developing his magic, he will likely eventually out grow her. And then it will be him deciding what it means for Aulia to act in the interest of the family.

Terrestrial_Biped

Manon arranges what you already have. Roman locates things you had, but lost. Neha's skill is Locate Resource; she is the person who can find what you need, whatever you need.

Matt

Aulia is hubris incarnate in forcing a contract under those conditions on an S+ child. Lute is going to lawyer her into watching a symphonic performance of Encanto.

Bzitka Yaknotz

I had a thought. All Alden would need to do to throw the mother of all wrenches into Aulia's long-term plans would be to tell Stu'arth this story. Given how his family treats affixation and how he reacted to Alden pretend-selecting a skill for him, I'd bet they'd see someone's family blackmailing them into an affixation they don't want via implied death threats to be absolutely inexcusable. What happens when The Primary makes it known that the Velras are persona non grata?

PatienceHoney

Right?! I was thinking December 15th is this Friday!!! But, alas not in Soupland. 😉

NomiNomi

They call them knights. Oathbound warrior was also thrown around as a less succint interpretation. All knights are also wizards though.

Anonymous

Oh my god that was brutal. I know the warning signs about his mother were there but still that betrayal was insane. The amount of manipulation, negligence, and cruelty that Lute is surrounded by is hard to believe and the privilege and wealth that his “dad” helps really point just further makes the whole situation more absurd yet scarily believable. Looking back on all this it’s a miracle Lute isn’t more of an asshole. Really goes to show you never know what another person’s been through. Spoiled rich kid but has had zero control of his life and no support or love. Or at least none anymore. Sleyca the depths to all of your characters is really just amazing. All these actions by characters were so horrible yute so believable. Wow just really love this story

Matt

Lute is getting 30+ S rank abilities. Knowing that it's a possibility, anything less would be a dishonor as instructor Kibby's first student's roommate. I wonder when Aulia's husband died. My mental image of her is slowly drifting from an early-twentys woman to the abuella from Encanto. Magical matriarch Grandmas laying down unreasonable expectations for magical specialness from their musically-talented but magically disappointing grandchildren are a fun archetype. Particularly when they also obviously care about their family despite being the center of a toxic family culture. Aulia seems less likely to get the Disney ending. Thanks for the chapter, Sleyca.

Ari Grad

Alright, unless i read it wrong. I now have a huge question. How did luke lose his eye? I thought it was a byproduct of the gloss, but he said in this chapter that she had to pay it back herself, which means he wouldn't/shouldn't have taken the bouceback? Unless hurting him/pushing him even farther away from the family *is* the bad luck/harm she took.

PatienceHoney

I think that and his thoughts process when he was talking himself into it is proof that Manon worked his mind because she said she had to have enough to work with and Lute did love his mom and his music...Manon just kept nudging him more and more that way.

Austin

He's also 16. If I was on my own at 16 I'd probably only buy ramen for myself too lol. They have cafeterias they can go for but in the dorm it's probably just a comfort food/snack

WannaBeATree

On the topic of secret parents, it just occurred to me, but are there any laws against using donor sperm/eggs to increase the chance of making avowed for people outside Anesidora? If so, how would anyone implement them? And if not, I can totaly see so many people wanting their kids to become avowed even just for their own gains. And having an S donor can aparently result in an S child, even if other factors also play into it. Maybe a question for a future chapter?

Explo Rin

That ancient chain had negative effects for a person who had to make important decisions? What effects would those be? Does that negative effect apply to the god or the bad half of the chain? Did Lute fuck up by casting it? Or did his grandmother screw up by accepting the negative half of it before she decided how to treat Lute? Kinda seems like the latter, which is a huge mistake for her to make

Matt

Those who were part of the gloss have to pay it back. Lute benefited (in principle) from the good part of the chain and had to pay back the other half. It seems that with other chains, they can pass off debt to other volunteers (or non-volunteers who have lost the right to consent to wordchains). They can't do that with the gloss, but it's still a mass-targeted effect and the debt isn't carried by a single caster.

NomiNomi

I assume because of how Mass Bestowal works. It seems to give each target a copy of the wordchain, but those copied wordchains presumably aren't free for the bestowed/bestower, given how wordchains have been shown to work. And the bad luck half of the chain automatically snapped back to the individuals that got bestowed upon.

PatienceHoney

I think it was that the family had to take the debt - not JUST Aulia. And it sounded like Lute lost his eye because he didn't get to "safety" in time? That is what confused me - what could make them safe from Gloss backlash?

Christine

I do enjoy the Lute flashbacks, and getting all the deets on the Velra family's toxicity. But the interludes are so great. I love Lute's pov of Alden, and it's golden how Haoyu watches Alden stroke the carpet and gives it a try himself. Alden is hilariously weird for a guy that is trying so hard to be normal.

SpitEoll

No i think since the chain granted him like x1000 magnified sight or something, the other half needed to pay 1000 times the time of longsight, so 1 minutes of longsight is 1000 of no sight. Auria paid that other half since it's a chain forgotten so not used and it's needed to be paid immediately

SpitEoll

But the boater doesn't interact with her family ? there might be fuckery, like when Lute cleaned after his cousin broke that vase, his explanation of why he cleaned was weird, it's like he was compelled to do it

Zachary Sloan

I don't think this is possible, because Manon's Skill is low(er)-rank and can't have much effect on higher-rank people. It only barely affected Alden (and he was easily able to throw off the influence after a short conversations with his friends), so it probably wouldn't do anything to the A and S-Ranks.

Zachary Sloan

He did make it to some kind of safe-room, but a drone crashed through the window and the propeller hit his eye (IIRC - it was mentioned in one of the last couple chapters).

Zachary Sloan

Alden benefits from the fact that he's unusually socially confident for a teenager (and teenagers are awkward by nature). His experiences basically make him unfazed by any sort of social anxiety, and being asexual also removes another "thing that makes teenagers spaz out." Basically he's very chill.

Gilshim

Man i love the Velras, Aulia is a great character. I think its pretty clear she does care for her family (in her own way), just so much of the Velra "family" isn't, so its more of a clan with Aulia the clan head. It's nice to see that Jessica probably has sway and power (even if its low key) , and Aulia seemingly cares for her. While on one hand its easy to see this view of Jessica being a glorified servant from the other clan members, one could also see it as being a peacekeeper/maker and Aulia's most trusted eyes and ears (or maybe its both things). The reveal that Jessica was always going to get treatment, (the best treatment to boot) re-contextualizes everything we know about their relationship and so many off hand comments. One that sticks out being about how she cleared out the boat (something we only see Aulia, maybe hazel doing). Aulia (and to a lesser extant Jessica) still isn't the best or even a "good" person, their manipulative and conniving and power hungry, their sense and scale of time is busted making interpersonal stuff weird and not great. But Aulia's also the leader of the strongest clan on earth and trying to become one of the most important people on earth to secure a good position when more change comes to earth, IE the eventual conquering/overthrowing by avowed aka full integration. In short, the Velra clan is great, they wouldn't be out of place in a wuxia novel, and its fun to have this side story of a young master coming to terms with his place in his clan and the world at large, alongside a superhero story about what it means to be a hero, and the journey to get there. (Aulia is also is having her whole family be chaplains for their military service and if not that then something like a helper/servant, which grand scheme is very smart and shows its not solely about the power(90% about the power))

focus2x

I can't wait until Lute becomes "stronger" than Aulia and can impose his idea of "benefit of the Velra family" on their flawed contract. It would be an absolute karma moment.

John Mainer

Are we just going to ignore our little Lute got himself a Tramp Stamp with Grandma? I mean, that is just a little bit weird right?

Christine

I think both of y'all are right. I think Aulia was referring to a more spiritual side of longsight, a side that was hinted at in an earlier chapter when Alden was dismissing Longsight Brutes as a class and Gorgon made a disagreeing-clicking sound. I think it's notable that the vision that Lute saw was full of magic and wonder, which is what he desired for his own future. And then he went and chose the opposite.

Shingi

Or... he'd just simply immediately uno reverse the contract's terms on her to act in what LUTE perceives as the best interests for the family

Explo Rin

Hmm…perhaps the original longsight made both your vision and your insight sharper…with the opposite payback effect weaker but spread out over a longer time?

WannaBeATree

I find it interesting how she casually calls Lute as "the least of the Velras" and how her tatto makes her act in the best interest of the "Velras", not her "family". She does consider him and his mom a part of the family even if she could have decided that getting rid of some Velras is in their best interest (not trying to use rejuvenation on them), but she doesn't. So she does see her family as people. In that all are equal. Yet being a makes one also enter a ranking that goes seemingly above even family. A ranking with the purpose of finding usefullness in achieving a goal/ambition only Auria seems to have. It is really awkward. She sees them as both people, but also as a resource for what she believes should be a common goal and expects everyone to play the optimal role in achieving said goal. And if it takes manipulation to make them fit into those roles, so be it, because she has done the math and knows best. Like an engine that works "good enough" and keeps being fixed with a lots of ductape (wordchains). Every win invested in the future, only the bare minimum of time spent on keeping everyone cooperating, like she is on a timer.

Shingi

How would that be possible when most of the higher tier ranks are affixed at 15/16 and the weakest is like just before 18. I don't think teenagers are allowed to donate sperm/eggs even if they had more than 3 months to pack up and leave in the first place

Ikawaii

with our without -> with or without

Box Jellyfish

I can see the appeal of Aulia as an antagonist over Lute as a sidekick for characters.

Jeff Wells

I think the chain is a creative workaround for some limits of wordchains. I suspect there is no classic upside/downside to the chain, but instead it's a trade. I think it let's Aulia glimpse the future for the one she casts it on. My conjecture is that each side of the chain has its own upside and downside, one hidden and one apparent. For Lute's half, his upside is the brief vision amplification, but his downside would be handing over a vision of his future to the other person in the chain. For Aulia's half, he upside is being able to see that vision of Lute's future, and the downside is being blinded for days. Now while 4 days of blindness seemed harsh for moments of enhanced vision, it's not quite enough for a prediction of the future, is it? But what is it's not just eyesight you lose? What if you lose all vision, as in foresight? That would certainly make it a bad chain for leaders, even while still being extremely tempting to use.

Box Jellyfish

There may be conflict on dates in the text - Ch. 5 has the funeral on Feb 13 (Hannah's b'day) which should be on the Monday.

Terrestrial_Biped

Well, she did punish herself by kicking a couch. That was nice. Not least because it shows once again that Hazel isn't that smart nor very good at impulse control.

Terrestrial_Biped

No, Lute said the family S-ranks are summoned two or three times a month. And we've seen evidence that high-ranks get paid more for their summons. Lute's got some decent cash, most likely.

glow

Why do we assume that Aulia was telling the truth when she revealed that Jessica was always going to get rejuvenation and that she planned on just waiting around 10 years? I can see it being something that she Aulia was planning on getting around to eventually, but something that was not a priority at all and that she'd deal with as it became necessary due to the optics of letting her daughter grow old.

Travis M

I don't think they have to get the tattoo in the same spot. Alden got his on the left side of his chest, and Joe got the matching one on one of his shins. So we don't actually know where Aulia is getting her tattoo. Probably a good edit to make so people don't make that assumption though...

Blorcyn

Yeah. She ‘knows’ there is fate just sometimes she misunderstands/misinterprets. She thought Hazel and Hazel’s interaction with Alden was important. But once again, look at Lute. He made an impression on Alden. He now lives with Alden. He’s probably got a 300 too, and Alden is going to be the first human knight and had a commendation. He’s everything she wants from an Ally rabbit. Lute’s Manon (don’t say it like that to him). And dealing with powerful people like she does, she can always rationalise the ‘correct’ fate eventually, and see the signs. That’s what the aunt mean I think. She’s a zealot.

Gilshim

@glow That is a good point it could've been a half truth, like you said she was gonna do "eventually" but it was just super low priority and based more on image then genuine care.

Gilshim

@WannaBeATree I think its Lute calling Lute "the least of the Velras", unless Aulia said that at some point. But yea, i think you nailed with the fact that she sees them as family/clan and also resources to be used, and rather then build a strong team based on a unified vision she'd rather just manipulate her way to that goal. Who knows maybe she tried to unite and guide at first but it didn't work out the way she wanted it to.

Flopmind

Doesn't this chapter contradict chapter 22? ``` “Okay.” Keiko looked a little strained. “First of all…it won’t be that bad. There are a few unpleasant individuals who will blame you for it no matter what you do, but most people will assume you’re an ignorant nobody. Also, the Gloss—ask Aimi about it if she hasn’t told you—isn’t common knowledge yet. But it will be by the time you have to move to the island. Using that particular wordchain is going to buy us tons of shit and you tons of forgiveness by extension. The majority will think unavoidable weirdness happened to you and give you a pass.” ``` and this chapter: ``` Aulia’s signature wordchain had mythic status on Anesidora. If you could summon up good luck for yourself and your family and never receive as much bad luck in return, then you had a guaranteed win button. If you just kept pressing it, you’d eventually pull ahead of everyone else, and the only reason Aulia didn’t do that was because she was a respectable council member who didn’t want to risk causing nationwide havoc for her own gain. ```

Garrett

I’m starting to wonder if Lute’s second S skill is another first gen one, like Bearer of All Burdens. Putting it near the bottom of the list but not at the actual bottom is a great way to ensure it gets overlooked, and we know that for those first gen skills, their names are more important than their descriptions. The dissonance seems important; the fact that its name implies connection to an intrinsic feature of all wordchains, their musicality, while its description doesn’t.

Garrett

Less weird than Grandma taking her 14 year old grandson to an alien world to be magically bound in contract to her will.

glow

Doesn't that make the line that once an avowed has mastered all the presented skills, they'd tailor-made news ones a lie then? Because then it would be impossible to master all of them

Garrett

I think she’s referring to the fact that it’s not common knowledge that the Gloss was currently in effect. People know Aulia has it, but in their minds she’s not suppose to actually use it.

Aetheo

It's probably more accurate to say "the Gloss isn't commonly known *to currently be in use*, yet" but a lot of people would say it the way Keiko did

TexNox

I do wonder since the gloss also in a way affected Alden what time did the negative effect kick in. Did Lute lose his eye at the same time a teleporter failed on Moon Thegund stranding Alden. Was him getting stuck his payback for getting rabbit.

Sean

I suddenly want Alden to get an addon that lets him hold tattoos for people just so he can remove Lute's and let him cause chaos. Also I really want Lute and Alden to get a tattoo together that forces them to call Aulia something mean like 'Old Witch' or something similar sounding. That way whenever they're talking to her they can call call her 'Old Witch' and everyone will have to go along with it because they literally can't call her anything else.

John

Is it just me or is there still a lot unresolved? Why doesn’t he talk with him mother anymore? Why is he so anti his grandmother? Why doesn’t he get an allowance? ETC ETC?

Sindri

I don't think Lute actually has any objections to Artonans. He wants time to play music so he can't be summoned too often and prefers it be on a schedule, and he's committed to destroying the Velra family. Making his own friends and contacts within the Palace works towards those goals, especially after the Palace figures out what Aulia has been forcing the rest of the Chainers to do.

John

Ok if you read as an email it doesn’t post the full chapter as it’s too long I guess. Sleyca, maybe put in an authors note!

Sindri

The Gloss seems considerably more powerful than normal S rank stuff, so Aulia might be a hyperbole. And she's likely to keep expanding her own authority as fast as practical, so even starting a lot higher than normal Lute might never catch up. Except that there's a certain Rabbit who's figured out a terrible secret to advance at an exponential rate... I guess we'll have to see if Lute's desire to destroy the Grandwitch is strong enough to make that kind of sacrifice.

Sindri

I think that Lute might be the Earth System's solution to the Chainer problem. It's watched every step of the way as Aulia twisted and perverted what's supposed to be a sacred thing, as she got closer and closer to monopolizing a class not just among her species but among all Avowed, and set things up to lead to her downfall.

hercule pyro

we literally got told it doesnt have the capacity to like or dislike anyone (unless its having a really bad day)

Sindri

Aulia is cool, in a 'final boss' kind of way. I'm pretty sure she's going to be the primary antagonist if the entire story. But I despise everything about her as a person.

NonuvfOorbiz

> I’d download the language into your head if I could, but even beginning to teach you that kind of thing will have to wait. I wonder if there are Sways who can do that. Though I would assume not or Sway would have been way more popular / lucrative than it is.

Sindri

A wizard is somebody who can feel and manipulate their own Authority to produce a wide range of magical effects. An Avowed is somebody who has their Authority folded into an artificial shape, such that they can easily and with minimal training or understanding produce a fairly narrow range of very potent effects. A Knight is somebody who is both Wizard and Avowed simultaneously, giving them much more rapid growth in both kinds of magic, in exchange for eternal soul-torture that drives most of them to suicide. Under ordinary circumstances, only Artonans are ever wizards (them and Gorgon's people are the only species to ever develop their own magic) and only people from the resource worlds are ever Avowed (because it would be torturous to an Artonan); most knights seem to keep their Avowal secret and let the general population just think of them as super-wizards, and Alden (the only human knight) is keeping his wizard side secret to avoid complications.

Dull Pen

What does age have to do with this? The above poster was talking about adult avowed donating eggs to normal humans so their kids would be magical.

Rubeno

Aulia seems to be using delusion like a crutch as replacement for self confidence.

Andrew Simpson

No, in this chapter they said that the the gloss payback couldn't be displaced or mitigated. It is paid for by those who reap the benefits, and the whole family gains the benefits, and the whole family pays the cost. So Lute lost his eye during the repayment as his member of the family, since they were all included in on the benefit.

Alberto Muñiz

Jessica wanting to avoid her son experiencing her particular trauma, and thus making him experience another different one is such a mood. Edit: I wonder what else did Aulia got to see with The Eye of a Thousand Instants, or if it's just a very old, almost broken, chain.

Anonymous

I think Lute got some skill related to Arthonan Knights. My first idea was it would be awful if his skill is used in these knight suicide ceremonies. Stuart said something about some history between the palace of unbreaking and the knights or Art family (I'm not sure on this one). Maybe an old way to help fighting demons or chaos in general

Tycho Green

I thought Lute had a vision and Aulia only paid the debt, thus having her eyes shut for a couple of days. Edit: But thinking about it now, she might have an ability that allows her to partake in a chain somehow.

Shingi

I gotta say Aulia has some really strong conviction to be casually taking severe wordchain debt. Like most people (and myself) assumed she has goons that take all of her debts so she can be all willy nilly about taking some of the family's debt onto herself but the fact that she was cool with being blind for a few days only to test Lute's potential is crazy. Like i 100% bet you that using the Gloss was due to a promise to Hazel to ensure that she also becomes a Chainer no matter what to the best of her ability. Speaking of The Gloss, Lute might not have realised it but he got ridiculous good fortune thanks to it: - His crush (who seems to then hate him as soon as they hear about the nasty details of the Velra shenanigans) asked him out and he couldn't say yes at that time, sorta saving him from dating or even marrying someone who would have hated him the day another Gloss or Velra incident happens - Thanks to the above (and Alden, who i'll mention below) he's now got a chance to be with some of the most beautiful AND most empathetic/understanding girls on the island who come from the "real world" and better understand his childhood as a normal who affixed (and haven't been poisoned by Velra and Anesidoran nonsense) - He was positioned at the right place and time, and with the right amount of information for Alden to not hate him even though he's very anti-Velra right now giving him the opportunity to room with people who'll let him be himself (and get things off his chest, the Chainer vent series wouldn't have happened at this point if it was just Haoyu and Lexi) - He's currently broke, yet he's now rooming with someone who isn't afraid of dropping thousands of Argold to live in a swag and comfy dorm with copper fittings, leather sofas and bear rugs. - Free Artonan lessons and the ability to teach someone Chainer stuff, softening his perception of the class and also giving him the opportunity to level up his skills himself due to teaching a genius student.

Brandon Steele

The whole Velra family are complete trash and it is Aulia's fault. That said, what Lute's mother did is beyond trash. Majority of the chainer 'substory' just made me angrier and angrier. A bit of a trigger warning, but... Due to his severe depression and general spite towards his abusers, I could easily see him killing himself.

John Anastacio

Can anyone tell me which chapter it says how often Lute gets summoned? My searches are failing to get any good results.

Lidja

I don’t think Aulia ever got married. Jessica’s father was some unnamed S sperm donor. Presumably she did that with her other kids. I think Hikari was a globie that got S Chainer that Aulia had to tie to the family by marriage. The tie to the family was so necessary that Aulia didn’t care that Hikari switched spouses from one brother to another.

John Anastacio

I want Alden to give Lute and Haoyu t-shirts each showing a pig in a hot tub. One pig is eating a sandwich and listening to music. The other pig is playing with a whip.

Rubeno

More importantly Lute got to know Alden who may be able to fiddle with his family contract in the future by leveraging his Knight level of power and taking burden of contract...potentially permanently away from Lute considering how weak it is. Also he gets Alden's friendship, the only earthling who may become knight in the future. Something that Aulia horribly wanted but will never get.

Rubeno

Nah, Lute still has his music. If he kills himself he won't ever be able to play his harp. This is one thing that will never betray him.

Rubeno

Lute had ridiculous luck thanks probably to the Gloss by getting favourable circumstances that allowed him to befriend Alden despite MC hate on Velras. Somebody who may in the future break his weak contract. If MC will have Knight level of power he will vastly outstrip what Aulia can field. Or simply he could share burden of the contract and...not place it back where it's place should he like he does with enchantments?

Scarlett O'Hare

I could totally see Alden getting the ability to hold contract tattoos. If it's anything like enchantments he should be able to lift Lute's right off and release it into the air, freeing Lute, right? What would be way better though is if Lute could come out the victor in a fight of wills against Aulia. Really stick it to her.

Scarlett O'Hare

Yes to everything that you said. Also with the callout that it didn't have annotations like the others. As if the palace didn't actually make it like they did the others. The question is then how long will it be until we get confirmation that it can levelup forever?

Matt

That makes a lot of sense. I thought Jessica was a one-off experiment, but it fits that Aulia would be a single mother by choice. Raising a large clan of superheroes by herself while being routinely summoned to alien worlds and acting as a politician on Earth sounds exhausting.

Calico C

I love this! Harper is a genuine name too, instead of Pianist as a last name

Bzitka Yaknotz

I'd gotten the impression that Lute could tell the "I affixed in exchange for healing for my mother, but it turns out they lied to ne and it was unnecessary" part, but I suppose we'll find out on Sunday

Andrew Khitry

Mwa ha ha I cancelled sub, waited for arc to be finished here, resub and READ IT ALL AT ONCE. My pleasure center in brain is damaged, I need a Healer.

Francis

It was so infuriating!! But nice to see Hazel getting forced to apologize (sure Corin told her to) and losing to Lute. I almost wish we could've seen more ranting Hazel

Francis

I also thought like Lauren that clearly there is more to it than that, based on what the tattoo artist said ..

FuriousDee

Even if that is the case given neither he nor alden know about it he wouldn’t be able to take advantage it being one

Francis

I love it whenever Alden slips in comments about his time on Thegund like he was telling them about his trip to the grocery store. The stuff he says would be in a 21 age restriction horror movie, but he is so non-chalant about it ..and his poor shocked roommates can only give each other that look meaning "there he goes again"

Francis

For me it was Lute basically losing his father. Cyril is actually the worst scum in this whole chapter if you think about it

Francis

I think releasing this as a batch on RR is a great idea. People would then feel like they are getting extra, so even if they don't like Lute, they won't complain

Francis

I'm so curious how Lute still listened to Aulia after this to go keep an eye on Alden at the funeral

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

@Terrestrial_Biped, lol. Yes, I was mainly referring to strength of character there, but I was also kind of vaguely pointing at the fact that Aulia's perception of what "stronger" means is not necessarily what the Artonans actually mean. I agree that Lute's authority base is definitely smaller for now, but I definitely think that what we saw this chapter was a not-so-subtle hint that he has distinct potential to surpass Aulia in whatever metric of "strength" matters for the purposes of the contract tattoo.

Francis

And.. lastly.. I guessed correctly that Aulia is going to use the rejuve treatment to blackmail Lute. I just never would've guessed that Jessica would be in on it. But weirdly enough I'm not really blaming Jessica. Her interactions with Lute - how she couldn't even process anything he said which went contrary to her plans for him told me that that woman is broken beyond repair. Or rather, she had to hold on to some key beliefs in order to survive in her world - if she lets go of those she literally has nothing left to keep going. That family, and Anesidoran culture, are the real culprits in this. And Aulia, but she is just batshit crazy.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

Lol. This poor kid has traumatic backstory for miles, and he just drops it in a conversation like he is talking about what he did for summer vacation. His roommates are in for a real gauntlet of double-take moments with this one.

John Anastacio

John Mainer - I thought of the tramp stamp aspect, too. It is indeed weird. I'm not sure Lute thought of it, though. The concept of tramp stamp may not have traveled to Anesidora, where tattoos mean different things.

Kettle

Not only was she in on it, It was her idea! She took what her son told her in confidence and weaponized it against him.

Shingi

It's crazy how this answered so many things but it also feels like it didn't really explain current Lute at the same time, it's pretty weird. Like what happened to the shoe pissing for it to become this bad (and Lute and Haoyu made it seem like him getting bullied in such a way used to be normal when the most people used to do was ignore him or say mean jokes about whiffs). Or even how nice he was about Hazel when Alden initially asked instead of going "she's a little selfish and mean monster, if I were you run" instead of going "She's okay, but I hate the fact that I'm involved in this luck nuke with no choice of my own". I dunno, maybe I didn't get Lute's character initially

Bzitka Yaknotz

I really want to know what that word chain *actually* did. An instant of long-range vision isn't "...undesirable to certain people in decision-making positions". Did Lute see the future? And if so, who's?

Shingi

Exactly, the crazy thing is Aulia was fine with convincing Lute normally but his Mom conspired a full proof plan to make him fold immediately even when she knew how he felt about everything.

Kettle

My guess is that originally Lute was supposed to be a typical Velra, since he mentioned having friends and not being able to go against Aulia. But retroactively, Aulia could have told the school to require Lute to perform (since the band was already going to be playing), and then Aimi could have asked him to keep an eye on Alden as a favor to her, since Aulia wants him to and Aimi is still under her thumb.

Lidja

Neha would be the one to call if you wanted to locate a friendly healer magically, but Aulia has no leverage with her. Neha is about the same age as Aulia and same rank. Both are extremely wealthy and young looking. Manon on the other hand wants to live long enough to move up to B rank, but maybe can’t afford that level of rejuvenation on her own. She is motivated enough to find a healer the old fashioned way by making friends with or blackmailing the kids at Leafsong. Stu’arth can get rejuv for his pet, Other Alden so it’s likely that his classmates could do something similar for Manon.

VP

And then a month hiatus on RR? It is better to stagger it bc RR is always linked to Patreon and it's not like Sleyca can publish 8 chapters in one go for Patreon

BeautifulBusinessBoi

The chair kick was nice, but it was more of an amuse-bouche. It just left me wanting even more schadenfreude lol

Lidja

Alden’s payback to the Gloss for getting selected early was to spend the extra time on Moon Thegund. Alden arrived at intake when he was mid-16, which is around the time B’s are usually selected. If Alden had taken the Mother’s offer to erase the memories of Moon Thegund it would be like he just woke up 6 months later.

Francis

Wait, wait wait.. we all forgot the most important question - who is Lute's real father? I think Jessica insinuates that it isn't Cyril (but she won't admit it of course), when she tells Lute that she always knew it was a possibility that he would be Avowed. I don't think she would say it like that if the dad was Cyril and chances were infintesimally small

Arkzs

I wonder how much of this is gloss blockback; Aulia believes alden is "something" for the word chainers, maybe even hazel herself, and he just so happens to befriend a velra who airs out a lifetime of grievances against them? He's never going to work with them now, it also makes me wonder if Aulia wanted to use Manon to hook alden, all this can't keep going unpunished. He should either go public and accuse Manon and her, or get help from the gloom, Hannah's mom

Francis

His Mom is broken. All that weird blinking when he tells her shocking things.. she is deranged. I bet you she still thinks she did the right thing "to make Lute happy", even when she doesn't even see her own son anymore

Francis

Or maybe she is so arrogant, she truly believes that the universe means for her to become the head of the exclusive Chainer family

Rubeno

That's why I'm talking she is delusional. Instead of being straightforwardly confident in her clan she utilizes some horoscope level ideas to move through life. It's as if she was lacking in confidence toward Velra clan

Jean

"And as an S-rank I can eventually get money with our without Aulia’s help." That our should be an or.

Arkzs

My biggest gripe is we are nowhere near alden having any possible recourse to aulia who is pretty clearly messing with him and his life, and also just spent the last 10 chapters being made into a final boss, alden is a B rank rabbit, outside of his connections to Stuart what recourse does he have if Aulia and Jessica are behind Manon trying to manipulate him at leafSong

Arkzs

My theory on this is that when Aulia used the gloss so Hazel could get her Chainer, it didn't just bring the class, it brought something that is beneficial or helpful to her (Alden) and now the blowback of gloss is Alden finding out what a terrible person hazel and Aulia is

Blorcyn

So I've been thinking about it and re-read the chapter. We've already been blind sided to an extent with Jessica and the rejuvination treatment, I wonder if it might not also be the same with Aulia's experiments with her child's genetics. Hazel is dumb. She's wrong about the rejuvination, and I don't see why she couldn't be wrong about the assistant part too. Aulia clearly loves her daughter, even if she's not valuable in the way an avowed is. Maybe Aulia could've gotten what she wanted from Jessica's children, and she's never realised -- we have so many examples in the Artonan visit of her misunderstanding of magic, of authority, of what she knows and what she thinks she knows -- and I feel her surety that Jessica is breaking her trust by not saying who Alden's real dad is (who Alden's genetic potential comes from) is another one. Firstly, we know it's probably not massively genetic anyway. But even if it were, I wonder if it comes from Jessica. Without knowing the difference between chaos potential and authority, it might seem that Jessica is a whiff, but I bet she could've been a really powerful wizard. It was Aulia's loose shoelace that sparked the thought (recognizing the other things it's supposed to mean in that moment too), and then we see Jessica tidying up shoes for Aulia the very next moment. Jessica is always sorting things, cleaning things, for Aulia. I bet that's Jessica's choice, not that Aulia hand crafted an assistant/daughter to be those things. I think Jessica has high authority for a humanish person, but I bet that she's very stable, I bet that she has really low chaos potential. Her nature, her stability, is the reason she's found herself cleaning up Aulia's extremely chaotic life, constantly, forever. Why she chooses to do it.

redhandedjill

@Constantinos - This is one of the comment section's favorite topics. It hasn't been confirmed by Sleyca, but Alden seems extra clueless when it comes to sexual interest (Gorgon commenting on the smell of visitors in the lobby, Alden's initial reaction to Natalie, etc.). We also don't know if this is a phase or a forever thing.

ewie

I assume it's a gloss-related action and therefore required by the contract. I doubt that Aulia would be ok with letting people deliberately spoil something she's using the gloss to go for.

Tungsten

Lute <3

Blorcyn

Roman is an S rank rabbit word-chain pro. Lute is an SS musician who has an extremely vulnerable contract with Aulia. Alden is a Knight who will more and more quickly rank up, with gremlin-sense, and a grudge against Hazel and Aulia. All Aulia's rules are about the appearance of power, of mystique and charm, and social grace to mask her support role. Alden will grow into a real super support, and I suspect manon -> Hazel --> +- possibly Roman --> Aulia is a pretty definite progression of Velras antagonism as he helps or hinders Lute in his own issues with them, until Lute can invert the contract in some fashion. Also, we don't really know what the Palace does. I feel like as an apprentice word chainer for the palace now, Alden will learn that they're a big part of the Knight support services, and it'll teach him surreptiously how to do what he wants to do without giving away his wizardy status (I'm just Lute's apprentice Rabbit). The weird cultural blindspot for Rabbits, that we still don't fully understand, for the Artonan's is definitely going to be as relevant as the fact that he's got one of the 300 skills, I feel. I just can't figure out how. When Alden starts ranking up, and proving himself, Aulia is going to make herself involved with him. I think doing that means that Alden will have meaningful ways to do things even if at first it feels like she holds all the cards.

NonuvfOorbiz

I would expect even Hazel with her ego has probably come to terms with not getting an S. But still would probably feel betrayed and jealous when she hears it.

Wandakin

I think that Lute's half of the chain was exactly what he described. What is more interesting is Aulia's half, which caused her to be blind. I think that half let her see moments from the past for the people around her. In other words, she got to see some insights about the horrible interactions between Lute and Hazel, which prompts her line of "So this is what I have been blind to."

NonuvfOorbiz

Lute seems to have a huge authority though since it is bigger than Alden's and Alden's has already grown a lot and should be much bigger than the average teenager.

NonuvfOorbiz

I think we've also seen enough hints that Alden is probably going to teach magic to Lute. He has loved to do magic since he was a kid and he thinks he will never be able to do it since Chainer is not really magic. (and apparently he has a huge authority)

NonuvfOorbiz

> but the fact that she was cool with being blind for a few days only to test Lute's potential is crazy. Not just test his potential. Only if Lute would have succeeded would she be blind which goes well with her sense of religion.

NonuvfOorbiz

Patreon chapters are supposed to act as buffer since we are his early readers. So I think it is ok if they shrink (or grow) from time to time.

Bzitka Yaknotz

I think it was described accurately, I just think Lute made some incorrect assumptions. That is, I don't think what he was seeing was actually a zoomed-in view of that light on the water.

rioteer_0

Aulia lost her vision to pay for Lute's wordchain. Lute lost his vision to pay for Aulia's wordchain. A more superstitious person might take this as a warning to Aulia that magic, and karma, balance on a scale far grander than she can imagine. Fortunately we don't need to be superstitious, since we have multiple people in-story telling Aulia that she's gonna regret fucking around with things she doesn't fully understand. (When the System, whose primary goals are the safety of Avowed and the stability of reality, is outright telling people not to take advice from you, you're PROBABLY not heading towards a very happy end.)

Francis

I thought his mother and grandma outright manipulating him into taking Chainer was enough to explain it...

Francis

Lol, from the beginning Aulia made me think of the clan head in a wuxia novel...

Francis

So ironic that Lute probably wouldn't have become friends with Alden if he wasn't forced into Chainer. And if he becomes a long term side kick of Alden's fighting chaos on other planets, then he will become stronger than Aulia, take over the Velras and thus, ultimately, him taking Chainer would be "for the good of the Velra family"

Kettle

Originally Alden told Cly about Manon and she said there was nothing she could do unless someone who was mind controlled came forward. So not much hope on just exposing her.

Kettle

That part made me think she had an affair and didn’t know who the father was. So she hoped Lute wasn’t Cyril’s, but wouldn’t admit it to anyone.

Kettle

With Alden’s interaction with Boe, I don’t think he is ever going to teach magic to anyone. He knows Avowed can’t truly consent to it.

Michael

Or the past. It was a date, could be related to his parentage. But, yeah, definitely more to it than Aulia let on or Lute knows.

Kettle

I haven’t actually seen any evidence of Aulia messing with Alden’s life. She keeps inviting him over, but she does the same thing to the cab driver (who until it is proven otherwise I say is the rabbit that drove Alden home). Hazel was an attempt to bring him in and she screwed with him. But Aulia has no way of knowing about that.

David Bailey

Would be nice to teach Jeremy... I just don't see how that setup could work at all.

Travis M

Or it could imply she knows something about authority/chaos potential (that she's not sharing with Aulia) that she used to increase the odds of Lute being avowed. I think it'd be a fitting nail in the coffin for the whole obsession with genetics in the velras and anesidora generally.

Calico C

I think it’s because Alden has lived a pretty sh** life. Parents died, his aunt honestly neglected and parentified him, and he only had Boe and Jeremy as support for anything. It might have been better if the system took him in her first few times in Aneisedora instead of the hospital, but Alden probably had very mixed emotions about both places since they were linked with good Hannah/his mom’s old job and the bad his parents’ deaths.

Calico C

I don’t think she is evil. I think she very much overcompensated for her own trauma in her life. It’s similar to parents with severely overbearing/authoritative parents becoming super passive/wishywashy/spoiling their own children when they have them. Both fucks up the kids, but in different ways. She could not imagine a world where anyone wouldn’t want to be avowed. She thought it would be an amazing surprise.

aaaaaa

Lute does not strike me as the type willing to agree to unmitigable pain that will continue until he decides to kill himself, even if he could learn

David Bailey

That the best description / summation I ever read of the differences between Wizard, Avowed, and Knight. Kudos!

aaaaaa

I feel like contracts being voidable by force would kinda ruin the narrative unless it was a major turning point in the story, since unbreakable magic contracts is one of the main things grounding the setting

JustMe

Omg, I already automatically read grandwitch instead of grandma aulia. Lute has ruined me (for the better)

John Anastacio

Depends a lot on how much badly Lute wants power and agency. So far I haven't seen that much rage and determination on Lute's part. Or maybe it's simple love of magic that is the critical factor. Lute does like magic.

John Anastacio

Neha might work for Aulia for the same reason she works for anyone - lots and lots of argold.

Anghwrtais

"Aulia Velra agrees to act in the best interests of the Velra family, and Lute Velra agrees not to reveal the following limitations of the Chainer class to other humans except in the course of his duties as an Avowed." So is she holding up her end? Her grandchildren run from emotionally disturbed to enraged. She performs illegal genetic modifications on children in the womb. Half the family hates her and she micromanages to the point they feel trapped. These things seem to be harming the family instead of being in their best interests. Sounds like grounds to break the contract.

TheLost

Then as close as evil and a neutral person can get manipulatating your kid to eat their veggies is one thing manipulatating them on making a choice that will effect there whole life with them thinking they are helping you is another

Michael Blue

I have a hard time imagining her as the final antagonist, I think the universe would be disappointingly small if she was somehow making it unstable with chaos riffs. Albeit, I could imagine her as the final Earth boss, and be somehow related to Gorgon’s imprisonment, but even then, I don’t imagine her empire being torn apart with Alden’s BoAB skill.

Terrestrial_Biped

@Sindri: If the Grandwitch was a hyperbole, we'd know, because she'd never shut up about it. She is not a hyperbole.

Brandon Steele

Rationally yes But finding out your mom just lied to you and teamed up with the person you hate to gaslight you... Though, I remember Lute mentioning at some point that the best human musicians are non-avoid...? Or something to that extent. He didn't elaborate more on the point.

Alex Anderson

Avowed can affix another skill without maxing out their current one. It’s just that maxing out your skills is stronger that having more

Terrestrial_Biped

I mean. It's PROBABLY true that Aulia is planning to get Jessica rejuv. At the very least she seems to have put some thought into what it will cost and how to get it. But why "in ten years"? Why not now? I doubt that Aulia can't afford it yet. Hell, why not ten years ago? Why doesn't Jessica ALREADY look as young as her relatives? It's like having a multimillionaire uncle say "Hey, in ten years I'm gonna give you a million dollars." He may well be telling you the truth. Or maybe he's stringing you along, trying to force you to spend the next decade sucking up to him, while all the while reserving the option to decide otherwise at any point. If he really wanted to just improve your life, he'd set up a transfer or a trust fund or whatever today.

Duncan Lester

Someone up top mentioned 'Coda' as a name for Lute's S2. I think it fits thematically for him to use wordchains to end things (Velra supremacy, his bullying, global Avowedism maybe down the line). Marking the graceful passing of Knights? Calming magic/chaos maybe?

Duncan Lester

on a second readthrough there was some definite foreshadowing in Lute wondering how many lifetimes you'd need to get 30 S skills... He's gonna find out ...

Azalea Ellis

Gods, I love this story.

Markus

I think Aulia gains a lot from being the stronger part in the contract. I don´t remember perfectly but contract magic where pretty subjective. And it is the meaning that both parter hold that influence the effect. But the stronger party influence it more.

Markus

So I wonder what would happen if Lute got strong enough to start dominate the contract. Can the terms be changed afterwards? Or is it set in stone after it is writen?

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

@Blorcyn, I want to know the historical significance of whatever Rabbit Alden was dressed up as at that party. Something strange is going on with the whole Rabbit class thing for sure. It's just a matter of how blindly will Alden stumble into it when it eventually catches up to him in the story.

Kettle

It just occurred to me that they purposefully waited until Lute was half-asleep to make him easier to manipulate. They didn’t let his head clear until the contract was complete and he couldn’t back out.

Imp

Idk maybe im crazy but Aulia doesnt seem to be the evil grandwitch yall are making her out to be. She definitely is power hungry and consolidating the chainer class to secure power for herself and her family, and is maybe more than a little crazy, but a large portion of her motivation seems to be securing her family’s position in a world where their entire society is being conscripted to fight some nebulous existential threat. Alden and Lute especially are unreliable povs, so we are experiencing their biases secondhand. If what she said is actually true, then she intended to go through great pains to secure longevity/eternal youth for Jessica and Lute even though she was under the impression that they would both serve no practical value to the family as unavowed. She is definitely shady and not a saint but ehhh not the worst grandmother in the world tbh

Sinnohan

Alden was affected by Manon and he is B rank. Many Velras are B rank or lower. As far as I know, Manon was complaining about not being able to control Aulia to guarantee that she gets what was promised to her. Also, Manon's ability might need the 'Master' to be more powerful, not specifically Manon herself and Aulia has a lot more authority than her descendants. Even if this isn't the case, Aulia could just take advice from Manon about what things she needs to do to have each Velra fall into line.

Sinnohan

I disagree with you on that. No contract has been stated to be unbreakable. People being able to die from breaking their affixations, which should be the strongest contracts in the setting, is a sign of the opposite. Also, it has been explicitly stated that the Velra contract that Lute has is weak and shoddy. It is going to be MUCH easier for Alden to break/freeze than the other contract tattoos we've seen. --------------------------------------------------------------- Assuming that Alden gets 4 add-ons during his next Affixation (likely in December), the ones he picks might include an add-on that deals with contract tattoos since he wants to make a contract with Boe. 1) Spell 2) Word Chain 3) Secrets? 4) Contract Tattoos?

Doug Wills

She absolutely is insanely evil. She more than happily manipulated a child into being a thing for the rest of his life that he absolutely explicitly did not want to be. She's genuinely awful. And keep in mind, this is with her knowing full well he's going to live HUNDREDS of years. And she put him in a corner and basically forced him to do what she wanted with his life. With absolutely no regard at all for what he wanted or how he felt. She didn't want to convince him her idea was best. She used his love of his mother to get what he wanted. There is nothing praiseworthy about her spending her unlimited money and other resources to secure her own daughter and grand daughter's longevity. It costs her nothing ultimately. She has infinite time and basically infinite resources. But she's happy to tell any lie to force the lives of others to be what /she/ wants them to be. She's a monster. And the only reason she didn't go so far as doing something like threatening to kill someone Lute loves, if that's what she'd have had to do, is because it would be inconvenient and more trouble than it would be helpful. She very clearly has absolutely no scruples. Not to mention she was happy to absolutely ruin his relationship with his mother by telling him that it was her idea. "Oh, no, I'm not the bad one. It's your mom that's evil!" And it's not defensible with, "He deserved to know." Yes. He did. BEFORE she got what she wanted. All that happened from her telling him that is he got to know Aulia was happy to take advantage of anyone and everything to get what she wanted. She's absolutely horrible to take away agency from someone that way, and she does it all the time. We know she does.

Heather White

Joe isn’t like Aulia. He actually understands contracts & how to do them properly.

Heather White

Except Sleyca needs to have some breathing room. Asking her to publish a month’s worth of work all at once? How will she stay ahead for Patreon? That’s an unrealistic ask. Folks on Royal Road will be fine.

Heather White

It’s nice, though. Shows some of the limits of Aulia’s power. I’m going with her not lying, because the truth just makes Lute hate her, so it’s only worth bragging about if it’s true. However, she isn’t powerful enough on the Artonan stage to get it done faster.

orion

My theory on the "luck" gloss is that its luck in the same way that "Let me get your luggage" is actually "Bearer of all burdens". I think the "luck" isn't just of a case of "good things will happen to your, then bad things will happen to you". Exactly how it works might be explained when the story digs into deeply into how Chainer magic works.

Terrestrial_Biped

It's not the whole story, but I think it's a factor. I've floated the same theory before. As others have noted, any high-rank who fights Manon's skill is going to win. It's not a very strong mind control skill, even for a C-rank, as that's only part of its function and not the whole point. But I think Tailor Environment CAN affect people with strong authority, especially if they're not resisting the effect. Think about the scenario Lute outlined for its use; a wizard intentionally calls in a Rabbit to arrange not only his workspace but his thoughts. In many cases, the wizard will be stronger than the C-ranked Rabbit using the skill. Tailor Environment would shine as soft mind control if used in conjunction with less direct methods, I think. Like the whole cultish atmosphere Aulia has cultivated, where the Velras are swept up by her mystique, dependent on her money, used to looking to her for leadership, personally tutored by her throughout their childhood... almost everyone is already prepared to take cues from Aulia. Shaking free of her influence would be a hard road for them. Manon can just encourage them to keep doing what they're doing. Remind them that getting out would be dangerous, difficult, and uncomfortable. Remind them that they're reaping a lot of benefits. Minimize the things they're putting up with, just a little. Let human nature do the rest.

Daniel

Sleyca suggested they might put in a "holiday break" on RR releases for a couple weeks, and then batch-release Lute's chapters over 1-2 weeks. That's what I was referring to. The same total chapters for January, but rearranged to put a break up front and a lot at the end, so that the Lute chapters are marked out as something different, and so people aren't muttering "hey, when does Alden come back," because Sleyca can announce that up front too. I think it's a good idea. Less "where's Alden yet?" and more "We all know Alden will be back beginning of February, meanwhile we're going to get some Lute chapters, we can enjoy those while we're waiting or come back in February depending on our tastes." You could do that with just the regular schedule, but I think pause-and-batch makes it seem more fun.

Terrestrial_Biped

I do kinda wonder about that. To me, Aulia looks like a narcissist, and Hazel looks like... maybe a sociopath, maybe just a less clever, less charismatic, less powerful narcissist. And it occurs to me that in 70+ years of being Avowed, Aulia has accumulated an awful lot of foundation points. Processing to help her remember all kinds of little details about people. Appeal to make them feel like she's the center of the world. Hazel's honestly not too bright and not too good at impulse control. Who just kicks things when they're frustrated? But I genuinely begin to wonder if Aulia didn't start someplace kind of similar, for all that she's very socially intelligent nowadays.

Daniel

Once Lute's authority is enough greater than Aulia's, the contract will mean what Lute thinks it means. We know that from what Joe told Alden. So if Lute levels enough, "the best interests of the Velra family" will mean what Lute thinks it should, and Aulia will have to either obey him or release him from the contract. Of course, Lute having more authority than Aulia is decades away... unless there's a hack he can do involving his other S skill being from the Original 300?

DaShoe

I think it was hinted at they can be broken if they are weak

Daniel

Sleyca keeps hinting there's a longsight secret -- Gorgon thinks so about longsight Brutes, and now this longsight wordchain has some secret that unnerves current Artonan politicians. What is the longsight secret? Is it seeing the future? Is it something else? Do we have any further clues?

Sindri

He said that the human orchestras which are considered the best in the world (according to Artonans) are the ones which have zero avowed members. He speculated that was in large part because of how Anesidoran kids are raised, how if you think you might get magic you obviously want a class that enhances music, except you can never guarantee that you Affix with the right instrument, so prospective avowed musicians tend to dabble too much instead of dedicating themselves to make sure they're decent with the instrument they get magical buffs to, instead of being a virtuoso with something else? But I suspect another large part of it is that the best musical organizations don't *allow* avowed, either due to citizenship problems or to avoid accusations of cheating or inauthenticity.

Bremen

To give her a small amount of credit, she was clearly reluctant and only resorted to manipulation when other attempts had failed and Lute had flat out told her he'd never be a chainer, and in a situation where his mother had asked her to do it to save her 14 year old kid. One thing I like about SupSup is that there's not a lot of mustache twirling villains around. Some people are antagonists, and do things we hate, but it's almost always clear they have reasons for what they do. Except Body Drainer, at least, and maybe we'll find out more about him some day.

orion

I dont think its until you kill yourself. You could also get killed by a corruption demon.

orion

Yup. Im interested in what happens to her. She obviously morally dubious, but I dont think shes out there killing people.

John D Jones

[quote]“I picked all the vegetables I was sure weren’t poisonous from the greenhouse at the lab, and I made something that looked like seven-layer dip out of them. Then I put on a Hawaiian shirt and ate it on the roof with Kibby. I taught her about candles and she enhanced the tradition. Everyone gets to take turns blowing them out.” Lute exchanged a look with Haoyu. “That sounds…peaceful?” Lute suggested. “I thought I did a pretty good job. I sang. We looked out at the corrupted grasslands of Thegund and talked about whether or not the lab lights would last through the long night. I did some parkour.”[/quote] I do like when Alden occasionally reminds people that oh yeah he went through some pretty weird, kind of horrific shit that dwarfs the petty real life crap that they've gone through.

G

I liked seeing Alden briefly through Lute and Haoyu’s eyes. It felt like it added a dimension that just being in his head doesn’t. It’s like… reading him say that he loves the simple pleasures in life like great rugs and then seeing him absently rub a rug through another character’s eyes (and reaction) are doing different things and add something to each other. Anyway, as a narrative / character device it pulled a lot of weight for me for just being a few sentences.

Stylemys

Except Aulia isn’t that socially intelligent nowadays, not even a little. Repeatedly she seems utterly clueless by of how people react to her behavior. She’s just rich enough to brute force everything. Hell, she probably relies on Manon advice to keep everything socially arranged enough to get anything done.

Nikron

It's kinda interesting how this universe should be much shittier to live in than ours, but the it doesn't feel that way... Humans enslaved by aliens forced to fight an inevitable acolypse during which certain human families become immortal oligarchs hoarding magic because it's mostly hereditary.

Michael

Aulia's evil isn't in her intentions but in her actions. It's how she goes about achieving her goal of "caring" for her family. She is the typical "for the greater good" - or in this case, "for the good of the family" - villain who uses her "good intentions" to excuse and justify her atrocious behavior.

Michael

@Kettle: even if she knew the father wasn't Cyril, her not being avowed would at least substantially increase the odds of Lute not being either, no matter the father. The statement before was that if BOTH parents are avowed, the kid almost always is, too.

Daniel

"Works in chaos, when binoculars don't" does sound like a good Artonan use for longsight Brutes. That leaves the question of what Artonan rulers don't like about this chapter's ancient wordchain. Is it a completely unrelated longsight secret? I kind of like "longsight turns into foresight" as a high-level feature, but if that were so you'd think some Earth Avowed would've got it by now.

John Anastacio

My guess is that it's seldom used because you can accomplish the same thing by having a pair of binoculars, without suffering the negative half.

Blorcyn

Yeah. Until she gives an explicit evil villain speech I see her as the crime Lord who loves her family sort of mould (except more legit). She loves her family. She knows best - magic tells her how to be awesome for her and all of them. He’s fourteen (he looks ten) and she’s an ancient magic grandmother. Sometimes grandmother has to do what she has to do and what the magic says. She loves her grandkids. Jessica’s “still?” Sorta mindset about Lute’s passions and wants definitely comes from her mother. Aulia will assume Lite will grow out of it. The ‘love’ will come through. She went councillor mode when they negotiated, but I think half of that is because she doesn’t like being disliked by her favourite daughter’s son.

Shingi

I don't think so? I think it's standard for contracts to be done under substances that allow you to focus easier or something which is why Alden asked in the first place. The only difference between Lute's and Alden's contract is that Alden's Gremlin doesn't allow you to have a contract unless both parties completely understand the meaning of the wording to be the exact same (although Joe did state he could have brute forced it to keep quiet if he wanted to)

Shingi

Eh that's mostly because humans always find a new normal

hercule pyro

“She loves her grandkids” dude did you miss the scene at breakfast this same day when she literally didnt notice he existed? She acts in a loving way to people who are useful to her grand plans (because that’s how she manipulates them).

Terrestrial_Biped

My view of Aulia is more negative than yours. I think she's a narcissist, and that she cares for family solely as an extension of her self-identity. If she protects them, it's to protect her own power; if she raises them up, it's because she gains more power herself as a result. I don't think Aulia would shed a single tear if Hazel was killed before her eyes. I think she'd be murderously angry; Hazel is a unique resource, and she'd probably have to wait another seventy years to get a similarly talented child. But I don't think grief would enter into it. Same with Jessica. Good help is hard to find, and properly dedicated (...brainwashed) help takes an awfully long time to make. But when Aulia thinks about whether to get Jessica rejuv, I think she's weighing costs and benefits at some level, not following an absolute imperative to protect her beloved daughter. If a worthy replacement for Jessica fell into Aulia's hands in the next ten years - if, for example, Lute hadn't affixed and had proven to be a similarly capable and dedicated assistant - I think Aulia would have suddenly found surprising, insurmountable obstacles to getting treatments for Jessica. Not through any fault of her own, of course! Just a bunch of other people being unreasonable and asking for things she couldn't possibly come up with on short notice. The negotiations are just dragging out. It'll only be a little while longer. There might be an opening in another ten years. This view is harsh, but I think it's consistent with everything we've seen. Aulia doesn't care to make her family healthy, well-adjusted people that can take care of themselves; it would go against her goals of making them useful tools that can't act against her wishes without fear of reprisal. Aulia didn't show any emotional attachment to that sculpture Hazel splintered while hopped up on strength chains; she didn't even try to get it repaired, because she didn't actually care about the relationship with the "old friend" who gave it to her, only the power and prestige that relationship brings her. She doesn't care that Jessica has been treated like dirt so long she believes it's right, or that the cousins all learn to hate each other as competition, or that Lute lost an eye due to her actions. Jessica still assists, the cousins still clamor for attention, and Lute can chain just fine with one eye. Everything is still doing what she wants it to do. Why would she ever change her behavior?

Terrestrial_Biped

I'm not sure whether 'Burden of Contract' will be a thing, but if it is... A person separated too long from their secret is no longer a natural home for the secret, and it won't snap back perfectly. An object may cease to be be a natural home for its enchantment if they are kept apart, or if they are separated too many times. Merely holding one end of the contract for a while might weaken it, even break it, because it can't snap back to the place it once belonged afterwards.

Rubeno

If I remember correctly wasn't MC skill called Bearer of All Burdens? Add onto that Lute's part of the contract is very weak and hanging on Aulia being stronger than Lute and you have perfect case for contract breaking. Exactly like you're saying Alden needs only to bear burden of Lutes contract for certain amount of time before it breaks by itself

Terrestrial_Biped

I disagree with most of this except the statement that Hazel is dumb. She IS kinda dumb in a couple of significant ways; she's bad at both impulse control and properly anticipating consequences. See her kicking a chair when frustrated. To a lesser extent, see how badly she mishandled Alden. But Hazel isn't necessarily wrong. We have Aulia's word, and ONLY Aulia's word, that she has truly always intended to get rejuv for Jessica. If she really means to, why ten years from now? Why not now? Why not ten years AGO? And if Aulia cares for her daughter, then why does she let every other family member treat her like shit?

Terrestrial_Biped

Yeah, waking him up in the middle of the night, offering impossibly valuable gifts, hiding key information, putting time pressure on him... the whole scenario was a greatest hits of interrogation tactics, really.

Terrestrial_Biped

@Shingi: I read it the same way you did initially, but I'm pretty sure Kettle is talking about how he was woken in the dead of night and pressured into taking Chainer before dawn, not the tattoo process.

Anon-Anon

For alden to remove a contract he has to remove their authority. I assume the contracts are their own authorities tying together, so he'd have to break of their authority.

Terrestrial_Biped

I take Aulia's claims that she has absolutely always intended to get Jessica rejuv with a hefty wagonfull of salt. Why ten years from now instead of today? Why not ten years AGO? Maybe in ten years she'll decide it's too expensive. Or that Jessica is replaceable. Maybe she has absolutely always intended to string Jessica along. Maybe she's waiting to decide whether Jessica is really worth the effort. Or maybe she's honest, and Aulia would never just let her own child die. That doesn't really erase the damage Aulia has done to every single family member. She sets the cousins at each others' throats. She lets everyone in the family treat Jessica like dirt. She makes sure they're all dependent on her and under her control and yearning for her attention like a flower yearns for the sun. She spent a decade turning Hazel into a goddam monster. Her actions lost Lute an eye, and she's not paying to get it fixed. I think Aulia is securing Aulia's position, and her family is just a set of tools she uses for that purpose. She doesn't care if they're broken people with miserable lives as a result. She defends them to defend her own reputation; she empowers them so they can add to her power. She can't conceive of a world where any of them would ever surpass her; she truly believes she'll keep control of them all forever. She isn't the greatest evil ever to walk the land, but she's responsible for an awful lot of unhappiness and dysfunction that we know about. And then there's whatever we don't know yet; whatever she's doing with Manon, Sway-lite, breaker of kneecaps, destroyer of careers. And any other dirty little secrets she's kept buried with the wonders of magically binding NDAs.

Samatar

"But why "in ten years"? Why not now?" because it's not that simple as aulia literally said. It's not merely a question of money she needs to prepare a lot of things and call in a lot of favors and still have to search out artonan wizard healers who would actually accomodate them etc. It's not a problem she can snap her fingers and deal with tommorrow.

Kettle

@Biped: That is exactly what I meant. I re-read the chapter and it occurred to me that they didn’t wake him up in the middle of the night for privacy. They pulled him out of what I assume is 2 hours of sleep so that he is groggy and easier to manipulate. Then they went immediately to get the tattoo and gave him drugs that prevented him from focusing on anything else but the terms of service. Which Aulia knew would prevent him from second guessing his decision until it was too late.

WannaBeATree

I like your point of view, but i don't get the same feeling when reading about Aulia. There is a lot of that there, but that is not her entirely. She "broke character" too many times for that. Even Lute remembered that he would not have predicted her actions some times. She is still emotionaly attached i think. She did keep that sculpture around and remembers it, but Hazel was just more important and she punished her by having her deal with the bad side of the chains. That time she actively went against Hazel because of the tissue comment. The case with the eye and Lute I think is because she believes strongly in fate/luck. She would not try to undo the bad luck of others. I think she believes that everyone has to undo their own bad luck events or believes that it is part of a grand plan . Jessica and dirt I also don't realy agree. I think Jessica just desperetly want to be usefull and trades being a good Velra for being a good family member. I think Francis got it right. She is making her own clan/house in an effort to grab power. I don't think there ever was a historic example where everyone had healthy relationships when that happened. Maybe only if you are at the very very top, like the big wizard family, but not while everyone left and right wants a piece of you. She is doing her best and probably hopes to fix everything once her absolut power is secured.

Blorcyn

Yeah on re-reading my post. I meant for it to be "I think this is how Aulia sees herself", not how I see Aulia, to be clear. I think Aulia would say that Lute was making a 'judgement error' about a lot of his opinions on her, and she would explain to him why he was wrong, why she was great, and why she loves all her family and her view of the family and the world is for the best *and she would believe that she is telling the truth*, I think.

payforthat

Kettle. Aulia is at least keeping tabs on Alden and probably trying to set up stuff to gain leverage over him. The bigest example is in the chapter of the school heads discussing Alden before his interview. Skiff is obviously trying to push the school into accepting him. That line about him been relieved to see Alden did well in the tests is telling. I bet that Skiff is under orders from Aulia to A. keep an eye on Alden B. make sure he is successful at school so that when he eventualy links up to the Velras he has more value to them + leverage for the 'favours' they did him. C. possible future schenanagans We also had Hazel turning up, which I doubt was accidental Plus, we have Opherus and Hazel getting blackmail material on that wright. The same one Maricel was at one point planning on escaping with. Which might end up been used to set Maricel up for leverage on Alden.

Matt DiMeo

Is a contract an enchantment? How weak is weak? Would we say Lute considers it a Burden? Possibly one he’d like to be relieved of for a while?

hercule pyro

Ok yeah that's fair. She definitely thinks she's working really hard and invested really deeply in doing her best for the family and making the family powerful. But if there's a choice between the family and what aulia wants, well sometimes people just have to make sacrifices, you know? (Not her, to be clear. Other people. Obviously).

John D Jones

@ Arkzs True, but with Stu'art'h (and the Primary who was already aware of Alden and interested in him even before Thegund) and for that matter Alis'art'h Alden has a [i]terrifying[/i] amount of recourse if it comes to that. Functionally Alden is already a Knight. Once that gets acknowledged, Hazel risks getting her head chopped off for "assaulting" him by calling in that word chain debt against his will. On Dec. 15 Alden is going to be surrounded by people who are very familiar with the 300 Skills and could easily recognize what Alden does as "The Bearer of All Burdens." Maybe one of the art'hs can sense the presence of Auriads and will know that Alden has one. I don't think all of that really truly change Alden's circumstances. I think he'll still be at Celena North though the Artonan focus there will greatly increase.

Bob Ross

One of my favorite parts about Sleyca's writing is that even though we've seen multiple ways for someones opinion to shift without their consent (Sway and Tailor Environment being the foremost culprits), it's still completely plausible for Lute to have come to this decision magical influence free. Until this chapter when he realizes that his parents experienced something totally different from him during their childhood, Lute grew up feeling like his mom was the only person who understood the position he was in. She was his best friend and he trusted her completely. He'd already made up his mind to extend her life and when he leaves his audience with Aulia he feels like the only way to do that is to take Chainer. He sees it as a sacrifice, but he's more than willing to pay it so that he doesn't lose his mom. Then when he goes out to talk to her about it, she tells him all the reasons SHE thinks he should take Chainer (Stability, scheduling, not being sacrificed in a foreign war.) He's already made up his mind to make that sacrifice for her and her response is "Yeah babe, you should do that". Anything he thinks/says/feels about taking Chainer afterwards has to be seen through the lens of "Ok, mom and I are of one mind on this issue, and she's not freaking out about me taking chainer, so it can't be that bad".

Bob Ross

She refers to the chain as decrepit, my recall isn't great, but is that a category that lute used to describe wordchains that broke? The way that Aulia Simulcast the wordchains other half made me feel like the chain would "snap back" really fast, maybe even a few seconds unless the debt was repaid.

Bob Ross

Huh, I just realized that's probably why Hazel acted out the way she did towards Lute and Jessica. For Hazel, Jessica's existence was like a neon sign saying "This is what will happen if the System doesn't choose you, hope you like being close to power that you'll never be able to touch". How many sleepless nights do you think that cost Hazel?

Bob Ross

Which classmates are you thinking specifically? Many of them are in the hero program with Alden, and I suspect the best revenge he could inflict on Declan and Carlotta is just...dismissing them from his life. The ones who felt it was ok to treat Lute like nothing because he'd be lower than them no matter what, now have to live the rest of their lives (ranked) lower than him. Hard to imagine more poetic justice. :)

Shingi

Most Avowed are permanently moved to Anesidora from the time they affix with only an extremely small minority being allowed to leave for any reason. How would an Anesidoran adult be able to give a donation to a hospital/clinic in another country if there's so many restrictions for avowed and Anesidora itself? The age thing came about because i was considering that the only feasible way to get a donation would be *before* an avowed left to Anesidora (unless some governments are in on Avowed donors? But there wouldn't be an incentive for most governments since the children created through that method 99.99% of the time would cease being citizens of that country)

WannaBeATree

There are permints to visit. Alden complained it it was always instantly picken even 2 years in advance. Or you can have some of your family visit you. They don't have to donate in person. Alden is sending food outside Anesidora to gorgon and some people are probably corrupt and would look away, if that stuff is profitable.

Bob Ross

I typed out this massive comment and then realized that the thing I wanted to say only took a sentence or two, and the rest was just wild theorizing on my part. Feel free to ignore all the wild mass guessing. :) Sentence one. Aulia is used to being the most powerful in her family through sheer weight of accumulated authority, and the strength of her perspective. Sentence two. Lute may one day rival her authority through genetics alone, and has roommate level access to more TRUTHFUL and ACCURATE perspective about authority than Aulia has managed in 70 years. Can't wait to hear him say: Velra Family: The people I (Lute) decide are my family. And The best interests of: The things I (Lute) decide are the best interest of. Godspeed you magnificent Harpist. I have this theory about Authority, . If I were bold enough to math it, I might say that A=[P*(C+R^CP)]/S Where A: Authority. P: Perspective. C: Control (How small you can make the appendage you're visualizing to wield your authority. think mittens then gloves then hands then tweezers. As control increases C goes up) R: Radius (as in how far your authority extends naturally from you as you accumulate it. Think about pouring maple syrup onto the middle of a plate. Also used to determine initial Divergence Rank. MY SPOT!) CP: Chaos Potential, (how likely you are to mutate into something else in the event of a chaos event. Used only to calculate authority upon affixation, because in my head the system converts CP into bound authority. After Affixation, CP becomes 1) S: Sensitivity (where your sensitivity is how small you can make your authority sense, higher sensitivity means Alden being able to feel the raindrops on his Burden. As sensitivity increases S goes down) All of that to say that I think Aulia is getting a lot of mileage out of her perspective. Everything that Aulia does she does with the genuine belief that her god (the universe) has guided her to it. That's her perspective. Her perception of truth.

Bob Ross

For the S ranks Lute says "And it wasn't a ton of days, even for the S-ranks. Aulia and Hazel were off all the time, but Lute had the impression that Aulia instigated a lot of those trips" And for the other members of the family he says "it seemed more like they had appointments they went to two or three times a month" Chapter 113

Bob Ross

Well he did develop that cool social superpower during sex ed class. Easy to be unflappable when you're incapable of being embarrassed. :)

Bob Ross

I agree with you that the only proof we have is Aulia's word that she was planning on rejuving Jessica, but as little as I'm inclined to trust Aulia...it doesn't strengthen her position to lie to Lute in that situation. And after seeing how Stuarts foot was healed, I'm inclined to believe what she said about why Jessica hadn't been rejuved yet.

Bob Ross

My recall isn't great, did the System outright tell people not to take advice from Aulia? Or are you referring to the system telling Lute to make his own decision?

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

@Bob Ross, given how confident Hazel seems about getting S rank for most of her childhood, I doubt that is where her attitude started. Still, I could definitely see that as a contributing factor as time drags on without Hazel being selected.

John Anastacio

Intriguing and worth killing over, especially if Alden can bear the burden of his own tattoo. Good catch.

Adunk

Is it finally over? Please?

Rheklr

That feels like Alden would need to level up an insane amount to even think about attempting.

Rheklr

I think it's more of a "truesight" than a "longsight" and that the wordchain debt side is extreme forced introspection - hence why people in power don't like it.

Matt DiMeo

It’s also like intensity 89%. Not as bad as showing up in a knight uniform, unless someone artonan finds out.

Heather White

I’m looking forward to the next interaction between Alden & Hazel. What will he be thinking? How will he act?

Kettle

I can imagine them at a Velra party. Hazel is name dropping Wizards and talking about her future while Alden’s attention is completely absorbed by a rack of ribs he can smell but can’t eat. 😀

Kettle

First read through yes. But what about second read through? Third? Afternoon read?

Kettle

I think personal contract’s are a spell. This is because the system IS a spell, but still called a contract by the Artonans. I can only assume that there is some kind of physical spell impression on each planet that holds the spell together, which is why it failed on Moon Thegund. Which makes me wonder, if Alden’s tattoo had been hit directly by a demon, would it have unravelled as well?

rioteer_0

the latter; the system isn't omniscient, but it is all-seeing. it knows exactly what context [Make a choice for yourself.] is arriving in, and whose choices are implicitly being warned against by that statement.

Mason Bially

Because 20 years of rejuve and 30 years of rejuve probably cost the same and its more efficient to get three for the price of two. Especially since 40s arent terrible quality of life. Also the rejuve treatments stop working eventually. If that counter is partially *per treatment* then longer tmie between treatments means longer total life.

Mason Bially

I think the Artonans are meant to come off a bit tottally alien. They seem obsessed with ranking things and education. But they also think secrets are important and not comparing students to each other. Alien thinking and contradictions. But I also read a bit of "run marathons and compare your own times, not with others" mindset they are trying to encourage.

Mason Bially

Right, and if one parent is avowed its still a decent chance. Just not an almost garuntee or an extremely unlikely.

Anonymous

Yes, finally! The seven episode Naruto flashback is over!

Mason Bially

Another better hack for growing quickly is becoming knight, and guess who knows how to do that. But also, even outside that, Alden also knows a couple of optimization tricks around leveling up authority, and Lute did start very ahead.

Alex Anderson

I think the reason the cost for Aulia was so high is because what you can do with the long distance view is a LOT more potent than what Lute did with it.

Alex Anderson

There’s a lot of theorizing that Lute’s second skill is a 300. But the reality is that’s a moot point. The only way for him to get the special level up is for him to wait and avoid the original offers until it comes. And Alden can’t tell him the strat any time soon.

Alex Anderson

Because of the contract made with Joe long ago back in pre-moon times. Can’t tell anyone about the secrets he learned from Joe.

Bland

@terrestrial. My assumption is Aulias reasoning here is that spreading the more expensive rejuvenation treatments over multiple decades instead of one every couple years is better resource wise and Jessica doesn't really lose anything big from being physically in her 40s. Once she hits 50 or so you can reset that shit to 20 and then rejuve again in 30 years. Cheaper that way. If I read things right Aulia has to get an honest to god wizard to come and rejuvenate someone who's 100% non magical. I doubt that's cheap, especially when she probably doesn't have much actual sway with the wizards. No more than her money and class can get her at least. Compared to actual politically important people on the triplanets Aulia is almost certainly WAY down that list, if she's even on it in the first place.

DT

I think Eye of a Thousand Instants is the basis of the temporal instance facet for Bearer of All Burdens. I think Lute received an important instance of Aulia's life, thus the comment of 'undesirable to certain people in decision-making posiitions'. Nostalgia can paralyze those who need to make decisions in the now.

Anonymous

My first thought about that longsight scene with the wordchain with the thousand moments was that the chain makes you see one thing very clearly, but as payment you had to relive a thousand moments vaguely in your mind. So maybe Aulia used that chain and her payment of the other half to watch a 1000 moments of Lute's life...and that's why she said "I see now. ... So this is what I've been blind to." Buuuuut she likely just alluded to her "cosmic fate" or whatever...understanding now that Lute is important.

Anonymous

Didn't she go blind for a couple days as payment? I think that is the reason people in decision-making positions don't like it.

SkySeeker (definitely not Lauren K in a mask)

Alright. Place your bets, everyone. If Alden were going to teach a character we have met so far magic, who would it be? Boe? Jeremy? Lute? Haoyu? Hazel? I think it's kind of funny how much speculation has been on this, and I suspect that it's one of those things that we won't know until it happens. Should I ask for wrong answers only? Hmmm...

NonuvfOorbiz

> Alright. Place your bets, everyone. If Alden were going to teach a character we have met so far magic, who would it be? Boe? I hope he doesn't teach magic to Hazel. I think she already has more than she deserves.

NonuvfOorbiz

And I am pretty sure she knows how shitty of a character Hazel has but probably finds it cute and necessary for success and "the good of family".

Terrestrial_Biped

I'm pretty sure sperm can be frozen and shipped. All the easier when teleportation exists, which cuts down on breakage and spoilage.

Terrestrial_Biped

Yeah, Alden's skill is called Bearer of All Burdens. However, the 'facets' Alden can add to it have their own names. He currently has 'Burden of Enchantment' which lets him hold enchantments like they're objects, and he was offered 'Burden of Wordchain', among other options. If Alden got a facet that let him lift the magic off a tattoo, it would probably be called 'Burden of Contract' or something very similar.

David Burchfield

But Lute has bragged about how he is "lazy" and not leveling up. He could in fact be turning down the levels.

Anonymous

While I am eager to get back to Alden's pov, I did thoroughly enjoy the Lute Velra saga. Congratulations, you somehow made me hate Aulia and Hazel even more than I already did. I dont know how. I didn't even think it was possible, but you blew all my expectations away. I seriously can't wait for those two to get their comeuppance.

Rubeno

Just imagine chaos skill that even tangentially can affect established contracts will bring among ruling castes. Ohh the butthurt will be legendary.

Calico C

Most of the humans on earth barely think of supers outside of the superhero theater and maybe healers. But even among the 0.05% of people who become avowed, extremely few of them are “immortal,” and they normally stay on the island. It’s also only been 50-70 years since the first people became avowed, and they’ve mostly been quarantined on the island.

Nikron

The point is only the rich are immortal. Which send pretty dysfunctional for a society. And it's not clear how much of a problem avowed are. Aldens parents died, so at least some part of the population suffers horrific loses. The implication is that the bad stuff is all pretty low percentage, but we're never given the numbers.

Nikron

The death dice being so mean implies that the warrior slave casualty rate isn't exactly low.

John D Jones

I want to see Stu'art'h (and Kibby) come to Alden's next birthday party.

John D Jones

I can't see Alden wanting to spend the time and effort to teach Hazel. Also I don't think he hates her enough to condemn her to suffer agony every time she levels.

Hydrabogen

There is no such thing as "grounds to break a contract". You simply cannot act against whatever the contract says. Only thing you can do is change them afterwards, if all parties agree. No idea what happens if one party dies though

Calvin

That would make sense if she said that after the couple days where she was knocked out of commission, but she said that immediately after lute was successful casting the chain no?

John D Jones

"Friends and loved ones on the guest list." If some of those friends and loved ones happen to be alien wizards, so be it.

Charlie

I think that's kind of what secrets does? You entrust him with a tattoo bound secret for you.

Charlie

I'm fairly certain that Aulia is one of the people with a primitive magic sense that Alden is running so far ahead of. She has a tiny fraction of an authority sense and no context around it so she just fills in information with 60's era hocus pocus.

Charlie

I thought that was just about being spied on in a way that's difficult to navigate.

Rubeno

That's interesting idea. I wonder whether her tattoos that connect her to her family also acts as training tool for her authority. Should she become real wizard maybe she could also utilize free authority of her connected family members for greater casting.

John D Jones

I think Aulia already knew about Lute and Hazel. I think it's more what she acknowledged - Lute is honestly a better person to get the S-Chainer because in terms of talent and, honestly, psychology, he's better set up for it.

John D Jones

I think Lute has to obey Aulia due to the Ass-tat when it comes to things that are "for the good of the family." Hazel getting the B-Chainer (and thus maintaining the Velra monopoly) would be good for the family. That said, having re-read that chapter (23, "Funeral), Lute clearly has no problem with Alden fleeing and screwing over Hazel and if fact encourages him to do it.

George

man, don't think I would have signed up for patreon just now if I'd known this was a novella about another character and not part of alden's story

Bob Ross

Hopefully you'll be pleased to know that last update was the last Lute update, and we'll be getting back to our regularly rabbit plot today.

Mag1cM

You're kinda missing all the good points about the contract. Artonans provided tons of medicine and technology. They can cure Alzheimers (Maricels grandma) and eradicated Malaria. They took stewardship of a rainforest so humans wouldn't destroy it (which kinda implies that they are taking greater steps to prevent a general apocalypse). I feel like all these things 100% result in a much better world than ours, even if a few of the super rich magic people get immortality.

Nikron

Would you take a cure for your alzheimers if it meant your grand child would have to be a magical soldier slave? I think there's a fair case for the Artonians being less morally good than presented and I hope Sleyca explores that.

Mag1cM

The Artonans also have an intervention point where they will prevent humanity from wiping itself out. Will you allow your child to serve the fight against the entropy of the universe if it means there will never be nuclear armageddon?

MangoBandit

I love all these updates! Normally I don't like when a story jumps to another character for a bit, but this is definitely the exception! I enjoy all the posts that have been put out - definitely hooked. Thanks for all your hard work! It's been a great ride! :D

Aoinfinity

But to take the burden of the contract, Alden would have to know to take it from the lower back. Based on what he knows, Alden would be reaching for the butt. (I'm not sorry.)

Aoinfinity

Did you miss that Lute couldn't actually bring himself to ask for the tattoo on his butt, and asked for the lower back instead?

Aoinfinity

@Gilshim See Part V. Aulia's actual words were, "Even if you are the least of the Velras, you are still one of us." The part that stuck in Lute's head was, "you are the least of the Velras," as his inner monologue makes very clear in that chapter. Whether Aulia's evil or not, she just plain stinks at knowing how to talk to kids.

Tenmosu

If kind of funny how I started reading the chainer side story if we can name it that way at 4 in the afternoon and finish reading it at 4 in the morning almost just like what happening in the story. gym ending a 10 am + 6 hour in the private boot so pretty much 4 pm. I should have fallow Sleyca recommendation to go sleep at the start of the chapter but for it to end almost at the same hour I'm going to sleep is one strange coincidence

Vysirez

I'm really pleased I just added this to my Patreon. I realized that this story is near the top of the ongoing stories I follow, and I am supporting other authors I like less then this so I decided to sign up. I'm glad I did, cause while I found this arc interesting, if I had to read it one chapter at a time over a month, I would find it pretty frustrating. Which isn't good, because it's an interesting arc. I like Lute, and finding out about his life and the various things with his family is interesting. However I think this is the second longest arc in the story. The arc stuck on the moon was only like 15 chapters, so the 9 chapters here is about 60% of that, and I think a number of these chapters were longer. So having an entire month suddenly reading about Lute's life a chapter at a time, would be frustrating for me, even though I did like it. So definitely give RR some kind of warning about this arc being long. Then people can decide how they want to handle it. About the arc and Lute, I have to say his vitriol is pretty understandable. I am aware we were generally getting a list of most of the bad stuff with none of the good stuff, but wow. I agree with some of the comments earlier, if the dice thing is the main source of everyone's issue with Lute, then they are not people I would want to be friends or even really associate with. I mean he might have been a bit mean about it, but he didn't lie about anything, those facts are available, and really, people thinking about what kind of class they want to pick should really know the bad sides as well as the good ones. Really their reactions feel extreme enough that it's going to be hard for me to like some of the characters from now on. I also want to say I'm a bit confused about the eye thing, the one mention we get in this arc implies that the family isn't going to cover all the costs for replacement, which is bull because it's completely their fault. I have to say loosing the eye on top of his existing relationship with Hazel is the kind of thing that develops into blood feuds or murder plots. I know he's maybe not an unbiased POV, but what little sympathy I had for Hazel has been dispelled.

DocteurNS

“Because there’s power to be had here, dear,” said Aulia. “Why would we want to share it?” ... Oh, yeah. Aulia perfectly understands the mentality a chainer should have, doesn't she? *sacrasm*

Jasus

Aulia is not so bad in my opinion. I do not get why everyone hates her like she killed their entire family. She wants the best for her family as a whole, her flaw is that she encourages competition in her family what I admit is bad. But in a world where not all people can become fuctional immortal you need a lot of power and influence. And to fault someone for wanting their family to live is not a bad thing .

Spores

Is coda meant to have dual meanings, or was I reading something that wasn't there? I originally thought this was from the "Child Of Deaf Adults" acronym, which I thought was an interesting metaphor for Lute's relationship with his family. But coda as the musical term, closing out the Velra's section and maybe hinting towards his skill seems more the intention (that I missed originally).

Dash Marley

She wants power for her family to be an institution, a clan, and she gets it through rigid control over her family. She cares about power, prestige, exclusivity, and the illusion of unknown means. We haven't seen what she wants to do with the power, or even if her goal is to use the power solely to gain more power. She definitely isn't coming off as a good person. These are selfish goals, she doesn't let her family make their own choices, and she creates toxic family situations to further her, as yet unknown, goals.

Sleyca

I wasn't aware of the acronym! That's very interesting, Spores. I was using it in the musical sense.