First pass of my "Just Whiste" Yuna illu (Patreon)

Forgot I originally tried a different angle for this one! I messed around with it for quite a while and just couldn't get it to work, so I ended up changing the angle and finishing that one instead. Sometimes your first idea just doesn't work out! I always wonder if I went back to it again now, could I get it to work? How would I approach it differently?

Do you like to go back to old pieces and try to make them work after a long time away from them?