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Equality: Dawn Chapter 2 (Patreon)

Published:
2016-06-01 02:06:29
Imported:
2023-12

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Thanks for your support!  If you processed a pledge, you will receive the full story when it's ready.  Estimated release window:  June 17-20!

Comments

CJoe

Hello, I've finished reading Equity Dawn ch2, Anya's odyssey ch 3 and Mother Knows Best 7. So I thought I could give a small feeback. For Anya's Odyssey and Mother Knows Best, it will be fast : awesome ; even if Tara's ascension has my preference, probably because it's a perfect cocktail of feminine, (very) sexy, muscle and brain growth. But Anya's quest for power is really cool. A lot of questions raised that really make me want to know what happens next. For Dawn's story, I really liked it, but I think I understood while reading it why many of your readers didn't enjoy this story that much. The way she teases her husband looks like she's really trying to belittle him. And even though he clearly enjoys her attitude, as a readers I couldn't help but feel sometimes a little uncomfortable. But, aside from that, the story is really nice. The way she becomes aware of her abilities and uses them is a very nice side of the story. So, thank you *very much* for your hard and great work on your stories. I usually read them when I go to work or on my way home, and don't see the time passing by :)

magnusmagneto
>>2137242

Hey there, Thanks for the in depth and thoughtful comment! I'm really glad that you're enjoying the stories so much - I hope you like everything to come as well =)