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I wanted to provide the next couple pages before the end of the month, because the first update ended at a bit of an odd spot. I was stuck redrafted page 14 to be up to my liking. I made a change to page 13 (the final speech bubble) since I removed it from page 14.

Previous Part: https://www.patreon.com/posts/85406858

Next Part: https://www.patreon.com/posts/laundry-ladies-88585507

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Papa Diamond

i love seeing tomi smiling and being happy

dorky

this set of pages is REALLY cute and sweet. I love Sentoumi's expressions. In the first of these pages I love her warm smile and the surprise that follows. The next page's look at her smiling contentedly as she watches him enjoy her belly is really cute. The mood in those two pages is adorable and sweet; the affection between them, the way he snuggles and adores her belly and the way she is charmed by him doing so is so cute. I love how EXCITED she is on the third page, especially her big, bright smile when she's happy that he's doing his work and doing such a good job! That whole page is fun; the excitement and big shift in enthusiasm they both have is really fun! I love her belly there at the end of that page; the shape is just gorgeous but the way she happily yanks up her shirt and sticks it out for him as a reward is cute, too. I like the last page for the expressions again; the pair's smiles with each other and the darker-haired girls suspicious glare as she notices them being a bit too friendly has a lot of emotion to it; really shifts the tone to hint at trouble brewing in the future. The angle of him laying in Sentoumi's lap is nice; his pose feels very comfortable, like he didn't waste time laying down and the way they interact in all of these pages is really adorable. Great work on this comic. The emotions, expressions, poses and flow of the story is really nice.