S2 EP45: History Lessons (Patreon)

I'm having... writer's block or brain dumbs or SOMETHIN. 

Anyway, I need you guys to tell me honestly whether or not you understand the flow of these panels. Meaning that I know I skip around - from Pearl to Garnet to Rose, and they're meant to present as 3 separate instances, not linear events. But does that make sense? 

Also, is it clear the Lunar Sea Spire is collapsing, or should I add some good ol'e sound effects?