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Crazy Yandere Best Friend Thinks She is Better For You [Toxic Manipulation and Jealous (Patreon)

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2023-06-29 21:24:09
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2024-06
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Your best friend becomes increasingly obsessed with the idea that the two of you are meant to be together and tries to convince you, to achieve that. She manipulates you and recount events in a way that not have happened like that

Script by skynobii 🤍!

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phibi

audio specific feedback: 2:10 there is mic peaking "no no no", same with 17:40 with the "i knew" as the volume peaks. i think the volume levels all throughout the audio have a lot of variance as some parts felt too loud or too quiet. at 15:10 there is a yawn but i dont know if its part of the script or if its a blooper 😆 general feedback: the way you can make your voice shake as you read these lines is REALLY good and adds to the emotional effect. the kisses were excellent and i think its improved a lot! in terms of the theme, i like toxic asmr particularly if it gets sadistic or mean towards the listener such with degrading 😳 i think for my personal taste, i didnt enjoy this audio as much. i think my expectation of [manipulation] is more of a character that has steady control over the listener in terms of their tone and temperament. i think the tone i got from hearing the voice acting was more of desperation rather than manipulation, which i thought made the audio weaker than what it could potentially could be. rather than feeling threatened by the yandere, it felt more like the listener was going along with the yandere out of pity (based on how i felt at the end). i think the ending parts were well done especially with the yandere laugh and the affectionate lines. i think the weakest section was in the middle as its the important build-up. the part about "girlfriend did this to you, you came back to me crying so let me comfort you" could be strengthened for more emotion, and since the "when we first kissed" line is probably an important plot point, that should've had some more strengthening in terms of its pacing (to me it felt too fast to go through that line) overall, i think you did a great job on the audio and there can still be improvement :3 for wishes/suggestion: i would like to see [praise] or [worship]. the contexts in which i've listened to these tags are like praise + comfort for low self esteem, worship + fsub (in the context of a yandere saying "you're the most wonderful being in this universe. you're absolutely perfect and i was made to be your lover") oh and i want to hear you call us "a cinnamon bun" (this is in reference to a popular yan-con script about a yandere kidnapping a low self-esteem listener) or other cute nicknames for a patreon short or something

daliah asmr
>>111816739

honestly, i was so embarassed at myself when reading this. i am so sorry for the audio issues and the mic peaking. i wish that wouldnt have been the case, as wellm as the volume. -- and no, yawn is no blooper, i decided to let it in since well, we sometimes yawn in conversations. >:O