Hey guys ! I want an opinion ! (Patreon)

I was working on a non patron commission batch and while I was waiting for a reply, I was scrolling on tumblr and thought that holy shit that diaper looks great ! I thought, comparing this diaper to those in my art, that they looked kinda odd and unrealistic. I'm experimenting with diapees, I'll sketch some stuff tonight to practice myself drawing them, but I was wondering what you guys thought of this. Does it look better ?

Here's the art & also this pic is great too