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Opinions wanted for Chapter 173 (chapter is also 174 posted) (Patreon)

Published:
2023-09-15 05:54:34
Edited:
2023-09-15 06:24:16
Imported:
2024-07

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Concerning the way Fay and Laun's sister have a bet (which may or may not turn into an event of some sort): I originally put it down that Fay's part of the bet, should she lose, would be to let Linela sleep with Riven and take him to the ball as a guest that night.  Should Linela lose, she'd work in a brothel for a day


Then I reread it and figured it may be a bit too much.  So I changed it to where the bets are now 'work in a cow ben shoveling shit for a week' vs. 'take riven to the ball as a date'.  Someone pointed out they liked the first one better


And I'm kinda torn.


Thoughts?

Comments

Austin Gibbs

You have a demon of lust of unknown age facing off against a teenager noble I believe the bet should reflect who they are and where they come from I was thinking Fay would go harder for Riven Bet your soul or take a pillar type situation rather than just a night or 💩 shoveling

Nomjy

A lot of really good comment already. lol think the second bet makes more sense though I didn’t PARTICULARLY have a problem with the first bet, more Riven’s lack of reaction, which was already mentioned above. So far, Riven hasn’t agreed and EITHER bet and he could simply refuse as I doubt he’d do either bet unless Fae somehow convinced him (sex is doubtful but ball more likely). I also agree that it seems a bit far fetched that Linela would follow through and work in a brothel.