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Hi everyone, 

TLDR: The introduction has been rewritten

Recently I've decided to rewrite the introduction of the story to be more concise and overall better paced to match how the writing is in recent builds.

Creating Rain Check has always been a passion project for me, and because of that, I took a lot of the feedback  I got and tried to figure out how to address them. What it boiled down to was compacting, pruning, and ultimately rewriting the introduction so it doesn't feel as boring to read, while improving Theodore's character. 

There shouldn't be any major plot points removed, and if they are, they're probably just shuffled into later in the story instead. 

The cab ride to the end of the presentation/keynote has been rewritten/reorganized.

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I'd love to know what you guys think on here/twitter/discord.
Thanks for your continued support for Rain Check!


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