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New Sethward Show Pitch Deck! (Patreon)

Published:
2022-08-08 01:08:47
Edited:
2022-08-08 02:11:30
Imported:
2024-03
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I've been sweating over this pitch deck! It's almost there, would love any notes if yous have them. I'm still working out a glitch in the video banner- you have to drag the window out and hit the small music note in order to hear the sound. Trying to cut down and updating a 14min sizzle reel and realized I never posted the other two pitch vids. I'll be putting those up here soon. You can see the progress of this show's development.

I've got another development meeting tomorrow around noon, wish me luck!

Bear with me as I take another week to send out the finger puppets, this pitch has taken priority but I promise to get you the goods ASAP!

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Sethward adventures to figure out life by befriending the characters of his body parts. Listening to his cartoon brain leads him to performing hijinks as animals in homemade costumes for unsuspecting spectators at real life events.

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Scott Muhlbaier

Yeah English is kind of weird that way. It's "real-life events" but it would be "events in real life" if phrased that way. Anyway, the only other thing I saw kind of distracting is the "font change" after the first section. My advice is to keep it all the same font *except* for the spearate episode summaries... unless you meant the different sizes on purpose :-) I'll go through it tonight and check a little more closely on the grammar side for you. Spell-checking doesn't catch that :) It's the least I can do for someone who... in addition to all the AGT stuff people know now... developed one of the funniest things I've ever seen on Youtube. Natalie Palamidis is another genius comic and that "Objectifying Woman'" skit is jaw-droppingly, totally non-PC hilarious. If you're on Patreon and you haven't seen "this side" of SW back in the day...you must check it out on his channel!

Sethward
>>89420959

Ha ha YES!!!! Natalie is an absolute genius! and yes thank you Scott this is super helpful. I made the pitch deck a website so I could easily edit it, and keep it a work in progress while also allowing anyone who I send the link to always have the updated version. I still need to work on the bio- it reads more of a pitch for the show instead of an explanation of who "Sethward" is and why he should have a show. I agree with you on the font change. Are you on desktop or mobile. The mobile version get's a little weird as I tried to fit everything in with limited scrolling. I'll check the desktop version again.

Scott Muhlbaier

Checked both-- especially the "Jim Carrey" comment is very different font. By the way at least on Android it's much easier to get the sound in the header than it is on the desktop I tried in Chrome. On mobile you just have to click on the image to get audio. There's one more question I'm dying to ask: Are you like Gumby or something? How in the world are you not in traction at the hospital with some of those crazy stunts?! Haha Even on AGT, the Walrus in particular where you nearly bend over backwards off that ball (not to mention peacock's "flight" off the rock!). I doubt you're double-jointed...so it's pretty amazing your flexibility-- and maybe just good fortune?

Sethward
>>89435727

Thank you Scott, yeah that line I made big for balancing purposes but I fixed the rest I think. The sound issue is a problem I've been working on, hopefully can have fixed by tomorrow! Most of the falls are coordinated so as to me not landing on something that would really hurt- that being said I have a very high pain tolerance so I get away with a lot more than most I suppose ha ha.