Joyce/Walky "Notty!" redrawn panel, pencils (Patreon)

I'm flirting with the idea of redrawing one panel from page 6 of "Notty!" if only because I'm wondering if I can, like, de-DumbingofAge-ify the characters in an artistically satisfying way.  In these rough pencils, it's so far manifesting in, uh, unlearning how I've adapted the way I've drawn their hair over the past 13 years.  

Also, wondering how/if I can take into account how their bodies may differ between universes.  Walkyverse Joyce and Walky were way more physically active than their Dumbiverse counterparts!  Are they a little leaner or more muscly by a bit?  Or is this scene set far enough after their SEMME careers that it doesn't matter as much anymore?  also here they'd be like 7 years older than in dumbing of age so not sure exactly how that resolves

just fuckin' around, really

artistically, not literally like these two