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Submissive Part 2 (feedback Poll) (Patreon)

Published:
2018-08-23 04:20:12
Edited:
2018-08-23 04:22:24
Imported:
2021-04

Content

i think most of you have already watched part 2 which i released.

i would like to get your feedback so that i can improve in future.

Below please rate my Part 2 Animation and please do comment if necessary. All criticism are accepted. :)


Note: When giving feedback, consider "Animation" as Animation+Sound

Comments

Anonymous

I'm going to be as honest as I can, the animation, though better from part 1 can still be improved, but not in the way you think. Let me explain. Part 2 was smoother and better than part 1 but there was one flaw and only one, the looping transition was too instant. See, in part 1 the animation was stiff and felt to doll like, part 2 was so smooth but it had the one flaw of the animation loop/transition. To immediate and it was too obvious whent the loop repeated or when the animation changed. If you fix that I think you're perfect. The cum was perfect, thick and gooey. Now the sound I can't say much on because you don't have voice actress's so you are doing what you can there. I hope this helps.

crossrealm
>>14890198

This is really helpful. i also noticed that. I will correct this in part 3. Thank you for the feedback

shas

i dont know what you are capable of but one of my suggestion is the come scene should be more dramatic just a little like a body shake or eyes roll back some thing like that . and the text i seen a another artist do this but try different color to represent the characters