Announcement: my first visual story (Patreon)

My next story will be visual. It follows the tale of three friends who  are brought to a secret government research facility to receive cover  stories under the witness protection program. However, the friends could  not have imagined the extent to which advanced technology would be  applied to them. 

This is my first attempt at creating illustrations using DAZ3D, so I  kindly request that you don't hold back, but instead point out any  mistakes I've made.