POV vs Claire part 2/3 (Patreon)

You land a few more shots on the big Canadian, but she ultimately scores her first knockdown of the fight. Confidently, Claire waits in her corner for you to rise, not bothering to count you out. She's got plans to dominate you and score a decisive knock out.

What do you all think of the speech bubble, would you want to see more of this or could you do without it?