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Forbidden Spell - 007 (update 4) (Patreon)

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2021-10-18 19:01:01
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2021-10-20 16:56:42
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Don't worry, only I have change "dark elf" to "Dark Elf" and the recommendation of Heelsmaster, and Eddi.

I hope all is now correc

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Heelsmaster

I feel like the structure for that last sentence is odd. Maybe "Oh GODS, I think I know. I took the old Dark Elf passage."

rammaukin
>>70041910

"Oh GODS, I think I know. I took the old Dark Elf passage... if it's really not a myth"

Heelsmaster
>>70041910

Oh GODS, I think I know what happened. I took the old Dark Elf passat...if it isn't just a myth.

Eddie
>>70041910

What Heelsmaster said :) Passage or Passat...

Eddie

Check this one again just as Heelsmaster said, it's passage not passat

rammaukin
>>70107617

This was the last thing he wrote to me. I can change it again if it sounds so strange

rammaukin
>>70107617

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Eddie
>>70107617

OK :) then replace this -> "OH GODS, I think I know what happened. I took the old Dark Elf Passat...if isn't just a myth." by this -> "OH GODS, I think I know what happened. I took the old Dark Elf passage...if it isn't just a myth."

rammaukin
>>70107617

I don’t have the first sentence on, or is there some word wrong (which I can’t see)?

Eddie
>>70107617

Two things you need to change 1. Change "passat..." to "passage..." (this is the word after "Dark Elf") 2. Change the grey sentence on the bottom of the bubble from "if isn't just a myth." to "If it isn't just a myth."

Eddie
>>70107617

Almost there :) This is NOT correct: I must be in one of the deepest areas underground. Oh GODS. I think I know what happened, I took the old Dark Elf passat... If it isn't just a myth. This IS correct : I must be in one of the deepest areas underground. Oh GODS. I think I know what happened, I took the old Dark Elf passage... If it isn't just a myth.

Eddie
>>70107617

I already feared it would be misinterpreted with us (Me and Heels) supplying only bits and pieces. Next time I will start by putting the entire text down here the very first time, just to be safe.