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A new Hentai JOI is out! I am experimenting here with a new video style, I would like to hear your opinions about it

Here is the link:


https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/dmwhsxf6m2t5y68l8hqxa/The-Empress-Turns-You-Into-Her-Maid-Hentai-Futa-JOI.mp4?rlkey=ogkcjymmvoylretfa8ucg3f99&dl=0


Enjoy!

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JollyWanker

Story time video format can also be a nice style. But I personally think that there is just too much things happening at once here. I think that this story arc would work better if it was divided into more videos of this length, one for each test/training session with the Empress. I felt that some parts needed a little bit more detailed description. Also, more direct speech would be nice and immersive. Not "She instructs you to bend over a padded bench ...", but maybe "Now, bend over my cute little maid so I can get a bettr look at you ...". Direct speech could be done with a different voice to make it easy to understand. Something like that can give you more options to better paint the scene and maybe humiliate the sissy maid a little bit more :) . Just a few suggestions that came to my mind while watching the video.

FHJoi

Great tips here! Thank you so much .. I'll keep them in mind .. I was so sick recently so I couldn't answer your comment in time .. sorry