kaien’s eclipse pt 10 (B) REVISED CHAPTER (Patreon)

HEY GUYS SO i woke up and had the biggest headache over the last night’s post’s structuring and writing so this is the revised one for part 10 before kghn arc ill put a vote after this and pls let me know which one (A or B) reads better to you!!! sob sob this is what happens when you’re working on updates up till 6am 😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫