Comic comm cleaner sketch (Patreon)

sorry I didn't post anything during the weekend, I was kinda busy playing smash bros since I was looking forward for the game for months c:
I cleaned up the sketch for the first comic commission page, it's still kinda rough in some places but the remaining cleaning and fixing will be done during the lining process :)
although it looks kinda lame without the marker shading I've put on the rougher version xD