comic comm p.1 rough script (Patreon)

this is the rough script for the first page of a comic commission I'm currently working on, I kept it pretty rough and didn't even erase a thing since I need the approval of the commissioner first before I'll clean this up, you can basically take this as a bit cleaner stick figures since I didn't double check anything xD My main goal was putting down a rough layout and plot, Anatomical correctness comes next c: