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So today I have something kind of different. I've been considering the format I use for our captions. They provide a lot of immersion and story in a very condensed form, BUT, they can turn into a wall of text. Not very easy to digest in a situation where you're trying to...ahem...enjoy it. So I'm considering switching to a much lighter version, something with just a few lines of dialog or narration on the image itself. I've added an example of both below, as well as attached them normally because I don't know how well Patreon will format this post. Please let me know which one you prefer and we'll see what happens! 


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Greynightsaber

If the stories are just going to be a short story and not considered a preview or to be continued, then i guess short and sweet to make it easier on you.

Jonathan Veil

I agree that it can be difficult at times to properly enjoy the art when the text is filling up the screen. I'd be happy with short and sweet, or at least a mix from time to time

Samwise

The story adds so much more. Like what happened before and after as well as what she's feeling etc. I find myself looking at the art, reading the story, then looking at the art to imagine the story in motion.

That New Shoe Smell

I really do enjoy the stories that go with your captions, although I do agree that they can sometimes become text walls. However, there is a sweet spot between brevity and detail that I think you hit more often than not.