Lost Omens - Beta Read Club! Ch 1 Sc 2 (Patreon)

New scene, new characters! 

BACKGROUND:

This is a fantasy comic I completed in thumbnail form in 2014-2015. It's long (703p). For more background: https://www.patreon.com/posts/inventory-lost-7710527

PLEASE:

• DO comment as much as you like! I'm going to refrain from posting *my* commentary or perspective because the beta read is more about YOUR reactions and perspectives about the work. I'd love for this to be a discussion :)
• DON'T share this work outside Patreon. It's incomplete and not intended for wider distribution. Thank you!!

It's rough! Sorry if the art or writing is illegible in places - feel free to call those places out and I can clarify :) 

CONTENT WARNINGS:

For this scene: 

Death, Body horror, Suicidal Ideation