Lost Omens - Beta Read Club! Ch 1 Sc 1 (Patreon)
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I've been psyching myself up for this for awhile but it's time to do it!! I'm going to start posting thumbnails from Lost Omens! Let's start with... scenes every week on Tuesdays??
BACKGROUND:
This is a fantasy comic I completed in thumbnail form in 2014-2015. For more background: https://www.patreon.com/posts/inventory-lost-7710527
PLEASE:
- DO comment as much as you like! I'm going to refrain from posting *my* commentary or perspective because the beta read is more about YOUR reactions and perspectives about the work. I'd love for this to be a discussion :)
- DON'T share this work outside Patreon. It's incomplete and not intended for wider distribution. Thank you!!
It's rough! Sorry if the art or writing is illegible in places - feel free to call those places out and I can clarify :)
Here are the first 3 pages so you can get an idea between thumbnails and the final pages they're intended to represent:
https://www.patreon.com/posts/lost-omens-page-7710590
https://www.patreon.com/posts/lost-omens-page-7710606
https://www.patreon.com/posts/lost-omens-page-7710655
CONTENT WARNINGS:
For the entire work:
The work is centered on war and features a lot of on-page death, including major character death. Faith is also examined as a theme. Some body horror. Also will include alcohol, gun violence, smoking.
For this scene:
Death, guns, blood