My Daughter's Projection: Patron Feedback! (Patreon)

So as I said in my original post about this project, I want this one to be my best one possible! And with myself downloading more assets/sfx for future projects, I plan to improve every full length animation in the aspect of quality, story, ect. With that, I may not be able to promise them to be done in the usual calendar month deadline I give myself. But don't worry, Commissions and the Shorts I make personally will be content for you all while I make the best stuff I can!

With that being said, I'd like feedback on this upcoming project and its main character Miharu. As you can see on the first photo I have made 4 separate forms of her corruption throughout what I have planned for the story. From normal all the way to her final state late in the animation. But one thing I want feedback on, is what other ways or add-on's can I make to further nail home the theme for these. The recent one was about the corruption of a couple and their once innocent relationship that became corrupted. In this I want to nail home the message of the mother losing her once innocent child to a outside source and changing her to something she doesn't recognize.

So again, I ask, what more can I add onto the other models to hammer the point more. My creativity only goes so far lol. That and I am a HUGE stickler for it looking right for me.

Leave suggestions in the comments, or DM ideas. I won't do another model update, this time you'll be surprised when the WIPs come through your feed.

Thanks for the patient and support!

RF4F